Comments received on poems by Avi
Happy
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely uplifting piece to read on cold winters nights, enjoyed the read
January 29th, 2025 21:20
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely uplifting piece to read on cold winters nights, enjoyed the read
January 29th, 2025 21:20
Happy
Cassie58 said:
A light hearted delight in mid winter. Your poem is uplifting and had me thinking of spring. Happy indeed. Much enjoyed.
January 29th, 2025 19:59
Cassie58 said:
A light hearted delight in mid winter. Your poem is uplifting and had me thinking of spring. Happy indeed. Much enjoyed.
January 29th, 2025 19:59
Beach
Cassie58 said:
A very beautiful poem. Lovely poetic expression and imagery. Much enjoyed.
January 28th, 2025 15:55
Cassie58 said:
A very beautiful poem. Lovely poetic expression and imagery. Much enjoyed.
January 28th, 2025 15:55
Icecream
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely refreshing read to start the day, enjoyed the read
January 28th, 2025 03:57
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely refreshing read to start the day, enjoyed the read
January 28th, 2025 03:57
Icecream
arqios said:
Such a lively and refreshing poem! My family enjoyed two types of Icecream 🍦 last night 🌙👍🏻🕊
January 27th, 2025 17:52
arqios said:
Such a lively and refreshing poem! My family enjoyed two types of Icecream 🍦 last night 🌙👍🏻🕊
January 27th, 2025 17:52
Camping
arqios said:
A magical poem that brings a tranquil cherishing and embrace of the simple joys of being in nature. The last line seems to be missing though(?) 👍🕊️
January 27th, 2025 04:21
arqios said:
A magical poem that brings a tranquil cherishing and embrace of the simple joys of being in nature. The last line seems to be missing though(?) 👍🕊️
January 27th, 2025 04:21
Camping
Poetic Licence said:
I get the sense of freedom surrounded by the beauty of nature, lovely write.
January 27th, 2025 02:59
Poetic Licence said:
I get the sense of freedom surrounded by the beauty of nature, lovely write.
January 27th, 2025 02:59
Beach
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful imagery and a message as well cast in a natural metaphor
January 25th, 2025 18:35
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful imagery and a message as well cast in a natural metaphor
January 25th, 2025 18:35
Beach
arqios said:
All the words and feelings are there;
even an effective natural use of repeating lines.
Now to let the lines “sit on the page”
making the look more like a poem (lines and stanzas)
or oddly shaped paragraphs, even.
🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 23rd, 2025 04:39
arqios said:
All the words and feelings are there;
even an effective natural use of repeating lines.
Now to let the lines “sit on the page”
making the look more like a poem (lines and stanzas)
or oddly shaped paragraphs, even.
🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 23rd, 2025 04:39
Bullying
Tony36 said:
Excellent write, being bullied was a common fact of life for me back in school
January 13th, 2025 20:04
Tony36 said:
Excellent write, being bullied was a common fact of life for me back in school
January 13th, 2025 20:04
Bullying
Mutley Ravishes said:
There are many ways
To make oneself strong
I wish I\'d known about them
When I was young
January 13th, 2025 19:33
Mutley Ravishes said:
There are many ways
To make oneself strong
I wish I\'d known about them
When I was young
January 13th, 2025 19:33
Bullying
arqios said:
To those who face similar struggles, your poem offers a voice that resonates with their pain and reminds them they are not alone.
It can help them feel less alone and remind them that their feelings are valid. It\'s also a powerful reminder that being different is okay, and everyone deserves kindness and respect; and that every individual\'s uniqueness should be celebrated, not used as a reason for exclusion or ridicule.
January 13th, 2025 17:32
arqios said:
To those who face similar struggles, your poem offers a voice that resonates with their pain and reminds them they are not alone.
It can help them feel less alone and remind them that their feelings are valid. It\'s also a powerful reminder that being different is okay, and everyone deserves kindness and respect; and that every individual\'s uniqueness should be celebrated, not used as a reason for exclusion or ridicule.
January 13th, 2025 17:32
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