Comments received on poems by Bethan123
The life you were given
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI BETHAN - Welcome to MY POETIC SIDE - a very nice site ! Every individual Human Life is precious and has a unique purpose. We must all die sometime but when our life is cut short we must all bear the shame and the blame. Powerful initial poem with great flow and rhyme pattern. Thanks for caring and sharing - BRIAN
April 4th, 2016 16:03
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI BETHAN - Welcome to MY POETIC SIDE - a very nice site ! Every individual Human Life is precious and has a unique purpose. We must all die sometime but when our life is cut short we must all bear the shame and the blame. Powerful initial poem with great flow and rhyme pattern. Thanks for caring and sharing - BRIAN
April 4th, 2016 16:03