Comments received on poems by Rose Abrilith
In the Mud
Spencer Wilhelm said:
Relatable response to the previous poem, but I find it interesting that that which seems humble often is the most prideful thing we can do.
July 27th, 2025 22:11
Spencer Wilhelm said:
Relatable response to the previous poem, but I find it interesting that that which seems humble often is the most prideful thing we can do.
July 27th, 2025 22:11
One More Chance
Spencer Wilhelm said:
Dang, that last line really pulls the poem through into something great
July 27th, 2025 22:02
Spencer Wilhelm said:
Dang, that last line really pulls the poem through into something great
July 27th, 2025 22:02
In the Mud
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a lovely way to say thank you for your offer of help but I am going to do this on my own, enjoyed the read
July 27th, 2025 11:54
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a lovely way to say thank you for your offer of help but I am going to do this on my own, enjoyed the read
July 27th, 2025 11:54
In the Mud
sorenbarrett said:
Independence is the theme of this poem. A polite declining of help. Nicely stated
July 27th, 2025 11:05
sorenbarrett said:
Independence is the theme of this poem. A polite declining of help. Nicely stated
July 27th, 2025 11:05
With You
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write with a wonderful message, enjoyed the read
July 27th, 2025 06:31
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write with a wonderful message, enjoyed the read
July 27th, 2025 06:31
With You
sorenbarrett said:
Although this may be taken as romantic in one sense it applies to all that have a giving heart and seek affiliation. A most lovely message
July 27th, 2025 05:08
sorenbarrett said:
Although this may be taken as romantic in one sense it applies to all that have a giving heart and seek affiliation. A most lovely message
July 27th, 2025 05:08
One More Chance
sorenbarrett said:
Tis human to ask for just one more, whether it be a breath, a taste, a ride at the park, a minute with friends, a kiss with a lover. A lovely poem of a wish to linger a little longer. Lovely
July 26th, 2025 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
Tis human to ask for just one more, whether it be a breath, a taste, a ride at the park, a minute with friends, a kiss with a lover. A lovely poem of a wish to linger a little longer. Lovely
July 26th, 2025 05:19
Justice for the Poor
Spencer Wilhelm said:
And in response this place chips again
At my mind. Melting a little everyday.
My spirit splinters and my will sways.
Wow, I loved this stanza. You earned my thumbs up on this one, beautifully crafted and decent meaning behind the poem!
January 15th, 2025 22:28
Spencer Wilhelm said:
And in response this place chips again
At my mind. Melting a little everyday.
My spirit splinters and my will sways.
Wow, I loved this stanza. You earned my thumbs up on this one, beautifully crafted and decent meaning behind the poem!
January 15th, 2025 22:28
Flight
Phocas The Gardener said:
I really enjoyed your poem. I wish you would write more though...
December 1st, 2024 20:13
Phocas The Gardener said:
I really enjoyed your poem. I wish you would write more though...
December 1st, 2024 20:13
The Eternal Sun
Cassie58 said:
We have to open our hearts to love and that isn’t always easy to do. This poem is beautifully penned and a delight to read.
November 8th, 2024 04:05
Cassie58 said:
We have to open our hearts to love and that isn’t always easy to do. This poem is beautifully penned and a delight to read.
November 8th, 2024 04:05
The Eternal Sun
Spencer Wilhelm said:
That second stanza is very insightful. I had to reread it because I realized I missed out on something beautiful. I love how much devotion you\'ve put into this. 9.92 out of 10!
November 8th, 2024 00:45
Spencer Wilhelm said:
That second stanza is very insightful. I had to reread it because I realized I missed out on something beautiful. I love how much devotion you\'ve put into this. 9.92 out of 10!
November 8th, 2024 00:45
