Comments received on poems by rawaneigh.99
The Cruelty of Nostalgia
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “The cruelty of nostalgia”
Our experiences are indeed amazing. An experience can last only one moment; we don’t have time to savour it or understand it completely. It is quickly gone. We are left with memories that will stick with us for a long time.
“Whispers of joy, yet grants no release....” We might recall moment of joy, but we feel no relief from the thoughts. “But as I reach, the colors fade...” We try to recapture past experiences but it is an impossible task. They are gone for ever. “yet they grasp so tight...” Memories hold us down as prisoners. Soman Ragavan.
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December 28th, 2024 00:10
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “The cruelty of nostalgia”
Our experiences are indeed amazing. An experience can last only one moment; we don’t have time to savour it or understand it completely. It is quickly gone. We are left with memories that will stick with us for a long time.
“Whispers of joy, yet grants no release....” We might recall moment of joy, but we feel no relief from the thoughts. “But as I reach, the colors fade...” We try to recapture past experiences but it is an impossible task. They are gone for ever. “yet they grasp so tight...” Memories hold us down as prisoners. Soman Ragavan.
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December 28th, 2024 00:10
The Cruelty of Nostalgia
Poetic Licence said:
A compelling poem of trying to cling onto good memories yet the mind not allowing them to be free of sadness and pain. It is very well composed.
December 27th, 2024 22:52
Poetic Licence said:
A compelling poem of trying to cling onto good memories yet the mind not allowing them to be free of sadness and pain. It is very well composed.
December 27th, 2024 22:52
Wasted Seasons
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful piece of writing of what sounds a lost youth, great poem
December 25th, 2024 15:31
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful piece of writing of what sounds a lost youth, great poem
December 25th, 2024 15:31
Wasted Seasons
Neville said:
An extra special treat on Christmas Day muchly enjoyed .. Neville 😎👍
December 25th, 2024 15:00
Neville said:
An extra special treat on Christmas Day muchly enjoyed .. Neville 😎👍
December 25th, 2024 15:00
Wasted Seasons
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely written with great images it flows well.
December 25th, 2024 14:10
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely written with great images it flows well.
December 25th, 2024 14:10
The Weight of What Could Have Been
Poetic Licence said:
Comes across to me as someone struggle with self doubt and guilt and is looking for a way to redeem themselves, Very Enjoyable read
December 23rd, 2024 11:50
Poetic Licence said:
Comes across to me as someone struggle with self doubt and guilt and is looking for a way to redeem themselves, Very Enjoyable read
December 23rd, 2024 11:50
Ashes of the Mind
Poetic Licence said:
An emotional poem of someone trying to break free from the ghosts of the past, well written
December 22nd, 2024 02:41
Poetic Licence said:
An emotional poem of someone trying to break free from the ghosts of the past, well written
December 22nd, 2024 02:41
A Blade’s Whisper
Poetic Licence said:
A poignant poem of self harming and the desperation that drives you to it, then afterwards you feel even worse. It is a very serious subject to write about and a lot more frequent than people realise, i commend you for that. Written well and with care.
December 20th, 2024 08:15
Poetic Licence said:
A poignant poem of self harming and the desperation that drives you to it, then afterwards you feel even worse. It is a very serious subject to write about and a lot more frequent than people realise, i commend you for that. Written well and with care.
December 20th, 2024 08:15
The First Daughter’s Soliloqu
isa kemmy said:
i like the poem am still analysing it
December 19th, 2024 13:04
isa kemmy said:
i like the poem am still analysing it
December 19th, 2024 13:04
The First Daughter’s Soliloqu
Poetic Licence said:
A very sad and haunting rejection by the mother of her daughter, i am sure a lot of people will connect with this. Remember your Fathers words. Well written poetry
December 19th, 2024 10:38
Poetic Licence said:
A very sad and haunting rejection by the mother of her daughter, i am sure a lot of people will connect with this. Remember your Fathers words. Well written poetry
December 19th, 2024 10:38
The Shift
Poetic Licence said:
This is quite a powerful piece of poetry, you can feel the anger, sadness of the past and then the hope of the future for Mother and Daughter, really like it.
December 18th, 2024 18:30
Poetic Licence said:
This is quite a powerful piece of poetry, you can feel the anger, sadness of the past and then the hope of the future for Mother and Daughter, really like it.
December 18th, 2024 18:30
I Love You
Neville said:
My goodness me .. This is what we call a love poem around these here parts & no kidding .. Someone somewhere is a very lucky individual .. I sincerely hope they know it, because it would be such a shame for such feelings to go unnoticed and unreciprocated .. Neville .. Oh\' n it gets a dubble 👍👍from yours truly ..
December 17th, 2024 01:31
Neville said:
My goodness me .. This is what we call a love poem around these here parts & no kidding .. Someone somewhere is a very lucky individual .. I sincerely hope they know it, because it would be such a shame for such feelings to go unnoticed and unreciprocated .. Neville .. Oh\' n it gets a dubble 👍👍from yours truly ..
December 17th, 2024 01:31
I Love You
Poetic Licence said:
A comprehensive declaration of total love to somebody, long may that be the case, enjoyed the read
December 16th, 2024 18:04
Poetic Licence said:
A comprehensive declaration of total love to somebody, long may that be the case, enjoyed the read
December 16th, 2024 18:04
The First Night
Poetic Licence said:
A passionate read very cleverly written, glad i read it
December 14th, 2024 09:09
Poetic Licence said:
A passionate read very cleverly written, glad i read it
December 14th, 2024 09:09
When I miss You To Death
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Such a beautiful, relatable write, nice job.
December 14th, 2024 01:48
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Such a beautiful, relatable write, nice job.
December 14th, 2024 01:48
When I miss You To Death
Poetic Licence said:
Very well written with a lot of emotion and clearly shows a lot of hurt and pain, thank you for the read
December 14th, 2024 01:18
Poetic Licence said:
Very well written with a lot of emotion and clearly shows a lot of hurt and pain, thank you for the read
December 14th, 2024 01:18
When I miss You To Death
teardrop said:
I am sorry for your grief. It goes deep and for me , it seems time means nothing. Very well penned and your pain shows. I wish you a very gentle healing.
December 13th, 2024 22:37
teardrop said:
I am sorry for your grief. It goes deep and for me , it seems time means nothing. Very well penned and your pain shows. I wish you a very gentle healing.
December 13th, 2024 22:37
At Least I Deserved a Better Goodbye
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful poem, it hurts when emotionally and mentally you give everything you have and end up with nothing, well written, Thank you
December 13th, 2024 03:17
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful poem, it hurts when emotionally and mentally you give everything you have and end up with nothing, well written, Thank you
December 13th, 2024 03:17
The Weight Of Nothing
Mutley Ravishes said:
I was surprised to find out how young you are! So well written.
It\'s been said that mind is a wonderful servant, and a terrible master. Who\'s calling the shots in your world?!
December 11th, 2024 18:22
Mutley Ravishes said:
I was surprised to find out how young you are! So well written.
It\'s been said that mind is a wonderful servant, and a terrible master. Who\'s calling the shots in your world?!
December 11th, 2024 18:22
The Weight Of Nothing
Poetic Licence said:
A highly charged poem, riddled with sadness and questions but beautifully written, not because of the subject but because of the writing i am glad i read it, Thank you
December 11th, 2024 14:11
Poetic Licence said:
A highly charged poem, riddled with sadness and questions but beautifully written, not because of the subject but because of the writing i am glad i read it, Thank you
December 11th, 2024 14:11
The Weight Of Nothing
Caring dove said:
That’s really sad yet well expressed
December 11th, 2024 13:57
Caring dove said:
That’s really sad yet well expressed
December 11th, 2024 13:57
The Weight Of Nothing
Lorenz said:
fascinating labyrinth of your thoughts ...
December 11th, 2024 13:57
Lorenz said:
fascinating labyrinth of your thoughts ...
December 11th, 2024 13:57
Is It Because Of Me
Poetic Licence said:
The more you question the more confused you get, the answer lie in both, enjoyed the read.
December 10th, 2024 15:45
Poetic Licence said:
The more you question the more confused you get, the answer lie in both, enjoyed the read.
December 10th, 2024 15:45
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