Comments received on poems by rawaneigh.99
The Shift
TobaniNataiella said:
This is quite a powerful piece of poetry, you can feel the anger, sadness of the past and then the hope of the future for Mother and Daughter, really like it.
December 18th, 2024 18:30
TobaniNataiella said:
This is quite a powerful piece of poetry, you can feel the anger, sadness of the past and then the hope of the future for Mother and Daughter, really like it.
December 18th, 2024 18:30
I Love You
Neville said:
My goodness me .. This is what we call a love poem around these here parts & no kidding .. Someone somewhere is a very lucky individual .. I sincerely hope they know it, because it would be such a shame for such feelings to go unnoticed and unreciprocated .. Neville .. Oh\' n it gets a dubble đź‘Ťđź‘Ťfrom yours truly ..
December 17th, 2024 01:31
Neville said:
My goodness me .. This is what we call a love poem around these here parts & no kidding .. Someone somewhere is a very lucky individual .. I sincerely hope they know it, because it would be such a shame for such feelings to go unnoticed and unreciprocated .. Neville .. Oh\' n it gets a dubble đź‘Ťđź‘Ťfrom yours truly ..
December 17th, 2024 01:31
I Love You
TobaniNataiella said:
A comprehensive declaration of total love to somebody, long may that be the case, enjoyed the read
December 16th, 2024 18:04
TobaniNataiella said:
A comprehensive declaration of total love to somebody, long may that be the case, enjoyed the read
December 16th, 2024 18:04
The First Night
TobaniNataiella said:
A passionate read very cleverly written, glad i read it
December 14th, 2024 09:09
TobaniNataiella said:
A passionate read very cleverly written, glad i read it
December 14th, 2024 09:09
When I miss You To Death
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Such a beautiful, relatable write, nice job.
December 14th, 2024 01:48
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Such a beautiful, relatable write, nice job.
December 14th, 2024 01:48
When I miss You To Death
TobaniNataiella said:
Very well written with a lot of emotion and clearly shows a lot of hurt and pain, thank you for the read
December 14th, 2024 01:18
TobaniNataiella said:
Very well written with a lot of emotion and clearly shows a lot of hurt and pain, thank you for the read
December 14th, 2024 01:18
When I miss You To Death
teardrop said:
I am sorry for your grief. It goes deep and for me , it seems time means nothing. Very well penned and your pain shows. I wish you a very gentle healing.
December 13th, 2024 22:37
teardrop said:
I am sorry for your grief. It goes deep and for me , it seems time means nothing. Very well penned and your pain shows. I wish you a very gentle healing.
December 13th, 2024 22:37
At Least I Deserved a Better Goodbye
TobaniNataiella said:
A powerful poem, it hurts when emotionally and mentally you give everything you have and end up with nothing, well written, Thank you
December 13th, 2024 03:17
TobaniNataiella said:
A powerful poem, it hurts when emotionally and mentally you give everything you have and end up with nothing, well written, Thank you
December 13th, 2024 03:17
The Weight Of Nothing
Mutley Ravishes said:
I was surprised to find out how young you are! So well written.
It\'s been said that mind is a wonderful servant, and a terrible master. Who\'s calling the shots in your world?!
December 11th, 2024 18:22
Mutley Ravishes said:
I was surprised to find out how young you are! So well written.
It\'s been said that mind is a wonderful servant, and a terrible master. Who\'s calling the shots in your world?!
December 11th, 2024 18:22
The Weight Of Nothing
TobaniNataiella said:
A highly charged poem, riddled with sadness and questions but beautifully written, not because of the subject but because of the writing i am glad i read it, Thank you
December 11th, 2024 14:11
TobaniNataiella said:
A highly charged poem, riddled with sadness and questions but beautifully written, not because of the subject but because of the writing i am glad i read it, Thank you
December 11th, 2024 14:11
The Weight Of Nothing
Caring dove said:
That’s really sad yet well expressed
December 11th, 2024 13:57
Caring dove said:
That’s really sad yet well expressed
December 11th, 2024 13:57
The Weight Of Nothing
Lorenz said:
fascinating labyrinth of your thoughts ...
December 11th, 2024 13:57
Lorenz said:
fascinating labyrinth of your thoughts ...
December 11th, 2024 13:57
Is It Because Of Me
TobaniNataiella said:
The more you question the more confused you get, the answer lie in both, enjoyed the read.
December 10th, 2024 15:45
TobaniNataiella said:
The more you question the more confused you get, the answer lie in both, enjoyed the read.
December 10th, 2024 15:45
You Asked For Space
Caring dove said:
A sad writing but well expressed . Sometimes we can doubt ourselves and feel like we are maybe not enough for someone else ..
December 9th, 2024 13:39
Caring dove said:
A sad writing but well expressed . Sometimes we can doubt ourselves and feel like we are maybe not enough for someone else ..
December 9th, 2024 13:39
You Asked For Space
TobaniNataiella said:
A Emotional read regarding how we beat ourselves up, when we do not know the answers and feel rejected and then just make ourselves feel worse. When we feel like this, it is us who need the space, take Care
December 9th, 2024 13:37
TobaniNataiella said:
A Emotional read regarding how we beat ourselves up, when we do not know the answers and feel rejected and then just make ourselves feel worse. When we feel like this, it is us who need the space, take Care
December 9th, 2024 13:37
The Quiet Between Us
TobaniNataiella said:
I good reflection of the thousands of questions we beat ourselves up with, when loves and we cannot understand why, a nice write.
December 8th, 2024 03:47
TobaniNataiella said:
I good reflection of the thousands of questions we beat ourselves up with, when loves and we cannot understand why, a nice write.
December 8th, 2024 03:47
the love of my life
TobaniNataiella said:
Beautifully written and very enjoyable to read
December 3rd, 2024 10:54
TobaniNataiella said:
Beautifully written and very enjoyable to read
December 3rd, 2024 10:54
A RIFT IN TIME
Doggerel Dave said:
The first three letters of your name sum up the feel of your poem perfectly… Family dynamics are complicated, can be strange and by their very nature are the most difficult to talk through.
Welcome to MPS. At its best it is an interactive site, commentary flowing both outwards and back. Enjoy.
December 3rd, 2024 00:18
Doggerel Dave said:
The first three letters of your name sum up the feel of your poem perfectly… Family dynamics are complicated, can be strange and by their very nature are the most difficult to talk through.
Welcome to MPS. At its best it is an interactive site, commentary flowing both outwards and back. Enjoy.
December 3rd, 2024 00:18
A RIFT IN TIME
TobaniNataiella said:
I can feel the emotion in the writing, well written
December 2nd, 2024 16:57
TobaniNataiella said:
I can feel the emotion in the writing, well written
December 2nd, 2024 16:57
A RIFT IN TIME
Caring dove said:
Very well written .. sad but a good writing .
December 2nd, 2024 16:51
Caring dove said:
Very well written .. sad but a good writing .
December 2nd, 2024 16:51
