Comments received on poems by rawaneigh.99
Where You Still Live
sorenbarrett said:
Memory is often kind and here is memory all that is left after a loss. A sad and somewhat wistful poem of loss
January 5th, 2026 19:21
sorenbarrett said:
Memory is often kind and here is memory all that is left after a loss. A sad and somewhat wistful poem of loss
January 5th, 2026 19:21
Quiet Arithmetic
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of not just reflection but self reflection and very nicely written
January 3rd, 2026 18:03
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of not just reflection but self reflection and very nicely written
January 3rd, 2026 18:03
There Are Days Like This
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem \"There Are Days Like This\" explores the themes of emotional fatigue, the nuances of healing, and the quiet persistence of survival. It reflects on how individuals cope with pain and sadness, emphasizing that healing is not always a loud or visible process; rather, it can be subtle, unremarkable, and marked by a sense of exhaustion and resignation.
December 24th, 2025 07:47
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem \"There Are Days Like This\" explores the themes of emotional fatigue, the nuances of healing, and the quiet persistence of survival. It reflects on how individuals cope with pain and sadness, emphasizing that healing is not always a loud or visible process; rather, it can be subtle, unremarkable, and marked by a sense of exhaustion and resignation.
December 24th, 2025 07:47
There Are Days Like This
sorenbarrett said:
A reflective write about the way life runs and one\'s fitting into it. Well done
December 23rd, 2025 15:49
sorenbarrett said:
A reflective write about the way life runs and one\'s fitting into it. Well done
December 23rd, 2025 15:49
A Short Treatise on Pain, Written After the Fact
sorenbarrett said:
Pain is quite a topic and there are few that look forward to it or say they like it we even have a term for them masochist. Well written
December 22nd, 2025 13:02
sorenbarrett said:
Pain is quite a topic and there are few that look forward to it or say they like it we even have a term for them masochist. Well written
December 22nd, 2025 13:02
Fragment from a Weathered Book Found Without a Name
rhmn_7 said:
We all mourn dreams we never dreamed and lives we never lived. Fine words Rawaneigh!
December 22nd, 2025 05:43
rhmn_7 said:
We all mourn dreams we never dreamed and lives we never lived. Fine words Rawaneigh!
December 22nd, 2025 05:43
Fragment from a Weathered Book Found Without a Name
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work.
December 21st, 2025 20:07
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work.
December 21st, 2025 20:07
Fragment from a Weathered Book Found Without a Name
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of doubts and indecision an existential search. Well written
December 21st, 2025 19:04
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of doubts and indecision an existential search. Well written
December 21st, 2025 19:04
Softness Was Never Safe
Friendship said:
I must say I had to read this three times. Well said, I think I understand what your poem you painted! The poem explores themes of emotional fragility, the burdens of expectation, and the paradox of loving deeply in a world that can be harsh and unforgiving. It delves into personal experiences of loss, the impact of silence, and the exhaustion that comes from perpetual emotional labor.
December 20th, 2025 08:37
Friendship said:
I must say I had to read this three times. Well said, I think I understand what your poem you painted! The poem explores themes of emotional fragility, the burdens of expectation, and the paradox of loving deeply in a world that can be harsh and unforgiving. It delves into personal experiences of loss, the impact of silence, and the exhaustion that comes from perpetual emotional labor.
December 20th, 2025 08:37
Softness Was Never Safe
sorenbarrett said:
I take this to represent the caution we all have with the growth of a new attribute or something we are not familiar with. A lovely write of growth and how to give and not expect in return from a cold world.
December 20th, 2025 07:07
sorenbarrett said:
I take this to represent the caution we all have with the growth of a new attribute or something we are not familiar with. A lovely write of growth and how to give and not expect in return from a cold world.
December 20th, 2025 07:07
The Same Year, Again
sorenbarrett said:
There is not just sadness in this poem but deep despair at lack of comfort everywhere and in all climes and times. Each season has its problems, one worse than the last. A poem of darkness and loneliness. Well written
December 18th, 2025 08:08
sorenbarrett said:
There is not just sadness in this poem but deep despair at lack of comfort everywhere and in all climes and times. Each season has its problems, one worse than the last. A poem of darkness and loneliness. Well written
December 18th, 2025 08:08
The Warden
sorenbarrett said:
We are all wardens to our own bodies holding the keys to setting our spirts free or holding them prisoners. A great write with some great images.
November 12th, 2025 17:19
sorenbarrett said:
We are all wardens to our own bodies holding the keys to setting our spirts free or holding them prisoners. A great write with some great images.
November 12th, 2025 17:19
Without Repair
sorenbarrett said:
Deep reflections in this poem. It seems quite thought provoking. Nicely written
September 27th, 2025 17:14
sorenbarrett said:
Deep reflections in this poem. It seems quite thought provoking. Nicely written
September 27th, 2025 17:14
Cartography of Confusion
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has many wonderful lines and images as it wends its way through the mind of the reader. Well penned it is a mind provoking read
September 22nd, 2025 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has many wonderful lines and images as it wends its way through the mind of the reader. Well penned it is a mind provoking read
September 22nd, 2025 04:35
Mirror Reflection
sorenbarrett said:
There is drama in this poem that questions who one is. In this existential exploration a mirror reflects as does the mind. Nicely done
September 19th, 2025 07:47
sorenbarrett said:
There is drama in this poem that questions who one is. In this existential exploration a mirror reflects as does the mind. Nicely done
September 19th, 2025 07:47
On Writing or the Art of Survival
Fred1794 said:
Very dramatic, for something entirely worth being dramatic about. How expressive and layered this poem is. Keep it up!
September 17th, 2025 20:45
Fred1794 said:
Very dramatic, for something entirely worth being dramatic about. How expressive and layered this poem is. Keep it up!
September 17th, 2025 20:45
On Writing or the Art of Survival
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Powerful, urgent, and honest a raw testimony to how writing can save and transform a life. Lovely ✨
September 17th, 2025 20:27
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Powerful, urgent, and honest a raw testimony to how writing can save and transform a life. Lovely ✨
September 17th, 2025 20:27
On Writing or the Art of Survival
sorenbarrett said:
The therapeutic aspects of writing and poetry I know well. Nicely written
September 17th, 2025 18:50
sorenbarrett said:
The therapeutic aspects of writing and poetry I know well. Nicely written
September 17th, 2025 18:50
Maybe, Just Maybe...
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of the pain of solitude self imposed due to lack of confidence and fear. Rejection is a powerful weapon and one most fear. Yet there is a spark of hope in this poem in the maybe and if fanned could grow to a blaze. Nicely penned.
May 28th, 2025 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of the pain of solitude self imposed due to lack of confidence and fear. Rejection is a powerful weapon and one most fear. Yet there is a spark of hope in this poem in the maybe and if fanned could grow to a blaze. Nicely penned.
May 28th, 2025 03:50
Maybe, Just Maybe...
Poetic Licence said:
A very sad, touching and poignant write that raises so many issues and feelings that depression raises and brings out, very relatable to me, hope the maybe becomes a definite for you, very well written and expressed
May 28th, 2025 02:21
Poetic Licence said:
A very sad, touching and poignant write that raises so many issues and feelings that depression raises and brings out, very relatable to me, hope the maybe becomes a definite for you, very well written and expressed
May 28th, 2025 02:21
Elegy For a Name No One Remembers
Poetic Licence said:
A poem racked with sadness, hurt, pain at the desperation of just wanting to be seen and acknowledge for what they are, it is beautifully written and expressed, very emotional write
April 18th, 2025 01:57
Poetic Licence said:
A poem racked with sadness, hurt, pain at the desperation of just wanting to be seen and acknowledge for what they are, it is beautifully written and expressed, very emotional write
April 18th, 2025 01:57
Elegy For a Name No One Remembers
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of deep pain, hurt, and screaming out for recognition of it. It is dark and raw and full of disbelief. A difficult read that stings. Nicely worded to bring all this together.
April 17th, 2025 16:12
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of deep pain, hurt, and screaming out for recognition of it. It is dark and raw and full of disbelief. A difficult read that stings. Nicely worded to bring all this together.
April 17th, 2025 16:12
And No One Noticed The Drowning
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write around the feeling of helplessness and isolation from so called norma society, feeling they have to constantly say sorry for just existing. It is emotional, sad and very touching, but don\'t give up, its never to late.
April 9th, 2025 02:32
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write around the feeling of helplessness and isolation from so called norma society, feeling they have to constantly say sorry for just existing. It is emotional, sad and very touching, but don\'t give up, its never to late.
April 9th, 2025 02:32
And No One Noticed The Drowning
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a sad tone of apology for who one is and a search for meaning and acceptance that is never felt or found. Honest and heart felt it pulls for support. Well worded and composed it flows easily but is a hard read. Nicely written
April 8th, 2025 19:27
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a sad tone of apology for who one is and a search for meaning and acceptance that is never felt or found. Honest and heart felt it pulls for support. Well worded and composed it flows easily but is a hard read. Nicely written
April 8th, 2025 19:27
Silent in the Crowd
Poetic Licence said:
This beautifully written piece sad and touching,but so well expressed, this hit home for me as i have inhabited this world, very well written
February 27th, 2025 14:47
Poetic Licence said:
This beautifully written piece sad and touching,but so well expressed, this hit home for me as i have inhabited this world, very well written
February 27th, 2025 14:47
Silent in the Crowd
sorenbarrett said:
Heartfelt and sad this poem pulls at the heartstrings and is very well written with rhyme and good meter. Lovely and deserves a fave
February 27th, 2025 14:37
sorenbarrett said:
Heartfelt and sad this poem pulls at the heartstrings and is very well written with rhyme and good meter. Lovely and deserves a fave
February 27th, 2025 14:37
A City That Was, A City That Is
Poetic Licence said:
How the things we have treasured and that have made us feel good, slowly change over time. However much we long for them, they will never be the same, really enjoyed the read.
February 4th, 2025 15:21
Poetic Licence said:
How the things we have treasured and that have made us feel good, slowly change over time. However much we long for them, they will never be the same, really enjoyed the read.
February 4th, 2025 15:21
Replaced
Neville said:
It hurts like hell doesn\'t it but it does get better .. a little bit of life now preserved for ever & so brilliantly poemed my friend .. Neville
January 11th, 2025 03:02
Neville said:
It hurts like hell doesn\'t it but it does get better .. a little bit of life now preserved for ever & so brilliantly poemed my friend .. Neville
January 11th, 2025 03:02
Replaced
Poetic Licence said:
Expressed in a honest and touching way, watching the person they love move on and they are left quietly watching from the sides, very well written
January 9th, 2025 12:03
Poetic Licence said:
Expressed in a honest and touching way, watching the person they love move on and they are left quietly watching from the sides, very well written
January 9th, 2025 12:03
The Year That Killed Me
Poetic Licence said:
A touching and emotional piece of writing about the pain and suffering forv the last year, hoping this year brings peace to you, well written
January 1st, 2025 04:13
Poetic Licence said:
A touching and emotional piece of writing about the pain and suffering forv the last year, hoping this year brings peace to you, well written
January 1st, 2025 04:13
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