Comments received on poems by rawaneigh.99
Elegy For a Name No One Remembers
Poetic Licence said:
A poem racked with sadness, hurt, pain at the desperation of just wanting to be seen and acknowledge for what they are, it is beautifully written and expressed, very emotional write
April 18th, 2025 01:57
Poetic Licence said:
A poem racked with sadness, hurt, pain at the desperation of just wanting to be seen and acknowledge for what they are, it is beautifully written and expressed, very emotional write
April 18th, 2025 01:57
Elegy For a Name No One Remembers
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of deep pain, hurt, and screaming out for recognition of it. It is dark and raw and full of disbelief. A difficult read that stings. Nicely worded to bring all this together.
April 17th, 2025 16:12
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of deep pain, hurt, and screaming out for recognition of it. It is dark and raw and full of disbelief. A difficult read that stings. Nicely worded to bring all this together.
April 17th, 2025 16:12
And No One Noticed The Drowning
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write around the feeling of helplessness and isolation from so called norma society, feeling they have to constantly say sorry for just existing. It is emotional, sad and very touching, but don\'t give up, its never to late.
April 9th, 2025 02:32
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write around the feeling of helplessness and isolation from so called norma society, feeling they have to constantly say sorry for just existing. It is emotional, sad and very touching, but don\'t give up, its never to late.
April 9th, 2025 02:32
And No One Noticed The Drowning
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a sad tone of apology for who one is and a search for meaning and acceptance that is never felt or found. Honest and heart felt it pulls for support. Well worded and composed it flows easily but is a hard read. Nicely written
April 8th, 2025 19:27
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a sad tone of apology for who one is and a search for meaning and acceptance that is never felt or found. Honest and heart felt it pulls for support. Well worded and composed it flows easily but is a hard read. Nicely written
April 8th, 2025 19:27
Silent in the Crowd
Poetic Licence said:
This beautifully written piece sad and touching,but so well expressed, this hit home for me as i have inhabited this world, very well written
February 27th, 2025 14:47
Poetic Licence said:
This beautifully written piece sad and touching,but so well expressed, this hit home for me as i have inhabited this world, very well written
February 27th, 2025 14:47
Silent in the Crowd
sorenbarrett said:
Heartfelt and sad this poem pulls at the heartstrings and is very well written with rhyme and good meter. Lovely and deserves a fave
February 27th, 2025 14:37
sorenbarrett said:
Heartfelt and sad this poem pulls at the heartstrings and is very well written with rhyme and good meter. Lovely and deserves a fave
February 27th, 2025 14:37
Devoured by You
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very powerful piece of what is an obsession with someone, whose feelings and emotions have consumed them. A very strong piece of writing.
February 5th, 2025 02:57
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very powerful piece of what is an obsession with someone, whose feelings and emotions have consumed them. A very strong piece of writing.
February 5th, 2025 02:57
A City That Was, A City That Is
Poetic Licence said:
How the things we have treasured and that have made us feel good, slowly change over time. However much we long for them, they will never be the same, really enjoyed the read.
February 4th, 2025 15:21
Poetic Licence said:
How the things we have treasured and that have made us feel good, slowly change over time. However much we long for them, they will never be the same, really enjoyed the read.
February 4th, 2025 15:21
Replaced
Neville said:
It hurts like hell doesn\'t it but it does get better .. a little bit of life now preserved for ever & so brilliantly poemed my friend .. Neville
January 11th, 2025 03:02
Neville said:
It hurts like hell doesn\'t it but it does get better .. a little bit of life now preserved for ever & so brilliantly poemed my friend .. Neville
January 11th, 2025 03:02
Replaced
Poetic Licence said:
Expressed in a honest and touching way, watching the person they love move on and they are left quietly watching from the sides, very well written
January 9th, 2025 12:03
Poetic Licence said:
Expressed in a honest and touching way, watching the person they love move on and they are left quietly watching from the sides, very well written
January 9th, 2025 12:03
The Year That Killed Me
Poetic Licence said:
A touching and emotional piece of writing about the pain and suffering forv the last year, hoping this year brings peace to you, well written
January 1st, 2025 04:13
Poetic Licence said:
A touching and emotional piece of writing about the pain and suffering forv the last year, hoping this year brings peace to you, well written
January 1st, 2025 04:13
The Cruelty of Nostalgia
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “The cruelty of nostalgia”
Our experiences are indeed amazing. An experience can last only one moment; we don’t have time to savour it or understand it completely. It is quickly gone. We are left with memories that will stick with us for a long time.
“Whispers of joy, yet grants no release....” We might recall moment of joy, but we feel no relief from the thoughts. “But as I reach, the colors fade...” We try to recapture past experiences but it is an impossible task. They are gone for ever. “yet they grasp so tight...” Memories hold us down as prisoners. Soman Ragavan.
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December 28th, 2024 00:10
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “The cruelty of nostalgia”
Our experiences are indeed amazing. An experience can last only one moment; we don’t have time to savour it or understand it completely. It is quickly gone. We are left with memories that will stick with us for a long time.
“Whispers of joy, yet grants no release....” We might recall moment of joy, but we feel no relief from the thoughts. “But as I reach, the colors fade...” We try to recapture past experiences but it is an impossible task. They are gone for ever. “yet they grasp so tight...” Memories hold us down as prisoners. Soman Ragavan.
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December 28th, 2024 00:10
The Cruelty of Nostalgia
Poetic Licence said:
A compelling poem of trying to cling onto good memories yet the mind not allowing them to be free of sadness and pain. It is very well composed.
December 27th, 2024 22:52
Poetic Licence said:
A compelling poem of trying to cling onto good memories yet the mind not allowing them to be free of sadness and pain. It is very well composed.
December 27th, 2024 22:52
Wasted Seasons
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful piece of writing of what sounds a lost youth, great poem
December 25th, 2024 15:31
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful piece of writing of what sounds a lost youth, great poem
December 25th, 2024 15:31
Wasted Seasons
Neville said:
An extra special treat on Christmas Day muchly enjoyed .. Neville 😎👍
December 25th, 2024 15:00
Neville said:
An extra special treat on Christmas Day muchly enjoyed .. Neville 😎👍
December 25th, 2024 15:00
Wasted Seasons
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely written with great images it flows well.
December 25th, 2024 14:10
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely written with great images it flows well.
December 25th, 2024 14:10
The Weight of What Could Have Been
Poetic Licence said:
Comes across to me as someone struggle with self doubt and guilt and is looking for a way to redeem themselves, Very Enjoyable read
December 23rd, 2024 11:50
Poetic Licence said:
Comes across to me as someone struggle with self doubt and guilt and is looking for a way to redeem themselves, Very Enjoyable read
December 23rd, 2024 11:50
Ashes of the Mind
Poetic Licence said:
An emotional poem of someone trying to break free from the ghosts of the past, well written
December 22nd, 2024 02:41
Poetic Licence said:
An emotional poem of someone trying to break free from the ghosts of the past, well written
December 22nd, 2024 02:41
A Blade’s Whisper
Poetic Licence said:
A poignant poem of self harming and the desperation that drives you to it, then afterwards you feel even worse. It is a very serious subject to write about and a lot more frequent than people realise, i commend you for that. Written well and with care.
December 20th, 2024 08:15
Poetic Licence said:
A poignant poem of self harming and the desperation that drives you to it, then afterwards you feel even worse. It is a very serious subject to write about and a lot more frequent than people realise, i commend you for that. Written well and with care.
December 20th, 2024 08:15
The First Daughter’s Soliloqu
isa kemmy said:
i like the poem am still analysing it
December 19th, 2024 13:04
isa kemmy said:
i like the poem am still analysing it
December 19th, 2024 13:04
The First Daughter’s Soliloqu
Poetic Licence said:
A very sad and haunting rejection by the mother of her daughter, i am sure a lot of people will connect with this. Remember your Fathers words. Well written poetry
December 19th, 2024 10:38
Poetic Licence said:
A very sad and haunting rejection by the mother of her daughter, i am sure a lot of people will connect with this. Remember your Fathers words. Well written poetry
December 19th, 2024 10:38
The Shift
Poetic Licence said:
This is quite a powerful piece of poetry, you can feel the anger, sadness of the past and then the hope of the future for Mother and Daughter, really like it.
December 18th, 2024 18:30
Poetic Licence said:
This is quite a powerful piece of poetry, you can feel the anger, sadness of the past and then the hope of the future for Mother and Daughter, really like it.
December 18th, 2024 18:30
I Love You
Neville said:
My goodness me .. This is what we call a love poem around these here parts & no kidding .. Someone somewhere is a very lucky individual .. I sincerely hope they know it, because it would be such a shame for such feelings to go unnoticed and unreciprocated .. Neville .. Oh\' n it gets a dubble 👍👍from yours truly ..
December 17th, 2024 01:31
Neville said:
My goodness me .. This is what we call a love poem around these here parts & no kidding .. Someone somewhere is a very lucky individual .. I sincerely hope they know it, because it would be such a shame for such feelings to go unnoticed and unreciprocated .. Neville .. Oh\' n it gets a dubble 👍👍from yours truly ..
December 17th, 2024 01:31
I Love You
Poetic Licence said:
A comprehensive declaration of total love to somebody, long may that be the case, enjoyed the read
December 16th, 2024 18:04
Poetic Licence said:
A comprehensive declaration of total love to somebody, long may that be the case, enjoyed the read
December 16th, 2024 18:04
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