Comments received on poems by Eliaskayne
The Giant they kept small
Poetic Licence said:
Many a good thing comes in small packages, enjoyed the read
February 25th, 2025 05:48
Poetic Licence said:
Many a good thing comes in small packages, enjoyed the read
February 25th, 2025 05:48
The Giant they kept small
sorenbarrett said:
I have worked with bonsai tree and all the time that I read this I could picture them talking. There is nothing bad in being small. It is not the size of the dog in the fight but the size of the fight in the dog. A beautiful poem
February 25th, 2025 03:42
sorenbarrett said:
I have worked with bonsai tree and all the time that I read this I could picture them talking. There is nothing bad in being small. It is not the size of the dog in the fight but the size of the fight in the dog. A beautiful poem
February 25th, 2025 03:42
Sunrises through the blinds
Poetic Licence said:
A very creative way of describing that things are not going to good at the moment, and the sadness of reflecting what could have been, enjoyed the read
February 1st, 2025 01:10
Poetic Licence said:
A very creative way of describing that things are not going to good at the moment, and the sadness of reflecting what could have been, enjoyed the read
February 1st, 2025 01:10
Sunrises through the blinds
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the line \"ghost laughter on my lips\" a great line that conjurs up many thoughts. Very nicely written
January 31st, 2025 21:38
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the line \"ghost laughter on my lips\" a great line that conjurs up many thoughts. Very nicely written
January 31st, 2025 21:38
The Jokes on you...
sorenbarrett said:
A great soliloquy written with passion it is forcefull and carries its message with power.
December 24th, 2024 03:44
sorenbarrett said:
A great soliloquy written with passion it is forcefull and carries its message with power.
December 24th, 2024 03:44
The Jokes on you...
rin said:
Isn\'t it actually a good thing to feel cold? I think it\'s important to feel that.
``Tenderness to You\\\\\\\'\\\\\\\' After reading this, I want you to post these words in the comments of other poems and spread them around like chain mail.
December 24th, 2024 01:10
rin said:
Isn\'t it actually a good thing to feel cold? I think it\'s important to feel that.
``Tenderness to You\\\\\\\'\\\\\\\' After reading this, I want you to post these words in the comments of other poems and spread them around like chain mail.
December 24th, 2024 01:10
Virgo boy
arqios said:
Welcome to MPS! Thanks for sharing something of yourself on your first poem here. Very resonant and relatable.
December 3rd, 2024 05:29
arqios said:
Welcome to MPS! Thanks for sharing something of yourself on your first poem here. Very resonant and relatable.
December 3rd, 2024 05:29
