Comments received on poems by DreamTiger



Severance (draft)
Poetic Licence said:

Its a long battle to break free when there is turmoil inside, but step by step, nicely expressed write

June 12th, 2025 00:20

Severance (draft)
sorenbarrett said:

Well worded and with rhyme. Nicely done

June 11th, 2025 17:29

faith
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 7th, 2025 14:38

Psalm 90 paraphrase, edit 1
orchidee said:

It may not seem the most joyful or praise-y of Psalms, this one. In some versions the heading is \'A prayer of Moses\'. I think it shows the eternity of God, and the temporality of man (mankind). And Moses had his problems too!

January 6th, 2025 03:27

blur
Poetic Licence said:

An interesting thought, enjoyed the read.

January 3rd, 2025 21:24

blur
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

January 3rd, 2025 18:52

blur
arqios said:

If we only! And the precious few do 🙏🏻🕊

January 3rd, 2025 16:19

rise up
vicecream said:

Lovee this one!

January 3rd, 2025 11:43

rise up
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

December 30th, 2024 21:19

rise up
Poetic Licence said:

I enjoyed the read

December 30th, 2024 19:17

unfulfilled
Poetic Licence said:

A longing of what was, enjoyed the read

December 23rd, 2024 02:31

untitled
Poetic Licence said:

Nicely written piece of work, tinged with sadness and emptiness.

December 19th, 2024 14:28

untitled
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

December 19th, 2024 10:45

Song for Brian P.
arqios said:

Nice one! Embracing both the light and the dark completes the picture. Loving it!

December 19th, 2024 01:30

Alien Nation
Doggerel Dave said:

Which alien nation? I\'d like to know who I am listening to.

December 17th, 2024 17:04

Alien Nation
Poetic Licence said:

A very interesting read, enjoyed

December 17th, 2024 11:07

Alien Nation
Tony36 said:

Awesome write, welcome aboard

December 17th, 2024 10:53

Alien Nation
arqios said:

Welcome to MPS! And what an evocative first offering! 👍🏻

December 17th, 2024 08:52