Comments received on poems by twistedlogicx



Jump
Poetic Licence said:

A touching write of being surrounded by natures beauty but no longer having the desire or will to be part of it, nicely expressed and written

June 2nd, 2025 15:30

Jump
sorenbarrett said:

Images are part of poetry and this one a sad one in the sight of beauty. Well said

June 2nd, 2025 11:30

Provocation
sorenbarrett said:

A sense of strong feelings buried. Well written and composed.

May 26th, 2025 14:38

Provocation
Poetic Licence said:

Enjoyed the read, as they say don\'t poke the wasps best, nicely done

May 26th, 2025 11:21

For (Him)
Poetic Licence said:

Sadly we all accumulate regrets over time, nicely expressed and written

May 17th, 2025 02:18

For (Him)
sorenbarrett said:

Regrets that we all have had. A most interesting write.

May 16th, 2025 17:39

Pace It
Poetic Licence said:

Dealings of the inner mind, sometimes through the chaos we make decisions that come back to haunt us, nicely expressed and written

May 16th, 2025 05:10

Pace It
sorenbarrett said:

A rather cryptic poem that speaks to me of our thoughtless actions and their results especially how they circle back and effect us. A very goo read

May 16th, 2025 04:41

Pace It
arqios said:

Your poem explores the turmoil of inner conflict—how spoken words diverge from the chaos within. It portrays a mind ravaged by anger, pleasure that consumes rather than fulfils, and pain that leaves its mark. A very gripping read🕊️🙏🏻

May 16th, 2025 04:35

Unknown Elements
Poetic Licence said:

A really need nice write around trust, doubting what we can and who we can trust, enjoyed the read

May 13th, 2025 12:22

Unknown Elements
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful poem of trust in the unknown and letting go of the past. Lovely

May 13th, 2025 09:49

Change
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely write over change, how they impact us, how hard it is to except and as in the last verse grow forget and forgive, nicely expressed and written

May 12th, 2025 12:47

Change
sorenbarrett said:

This poem speaks to change and what it takes. Well organized and thought out this poem shows good rhyme and flow. A wonderful write and a fave

May 12th, 2025 10:01

Play the Fool
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

December 28th, 2024 14:53

Swirl
Poetic Licence said:

A reflection on how in life most times we are just chasing our own tail and not actually getting anywhere, Good read

December 28th, 2024 03:32