Comments received on poems by mik



Distance
Poetic Licence said:

The words have their own beat, lovely piece of writing

February 17th, 2025 15:41

Distance
sorenbarrett said:

Yes I feel the noise and the beat of the words and internal rhyme make this short piece wonderful

February 17th, 2025 13:40

Ahhhhhhhhh
Your Girlfriend said:

LOVE it!!!

February 7th, 2025 20:39

Musk world
arqios said:

That about sums up all that Musk is or could be , lest he proves us wrong… here’s hoping 🀞

February 7th, 2025 20:10

Majic
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

January 27th, 2025 10:50

Pray
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

January 24th, 2025 10:57

Distance
Cheeky Missy said:

Similar to the winding river or babbling brook how charmingly this flows and rhymes as if rhythm was simple, concluding beautifully until we wish to likewise see all thus. Winsomely rendered with excellent imagery and a gently haunting poignancy, it is beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

January 20th, 2025 01:38

Distance
NinjaGirl said:

beautiful message!

January 18th, 2025 14:19

Mirror
NinjaGirl said:

sounds like a theme of distorted reality to me!

January 16th, 2025 05:50

Looking
NinjaGirl said:

so beautiful, very good job!

January 13th, 2025 20:30

Looking
LP2187 said:

Nice I like the theme of searching for connection in the midst of confusion

January 9th, 2025 15:35

Looking
mik said:

Good stuff

January 9th, 2025 12:30

Dreaming
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

January 8th, 2025 07:33

Free
NinjaGirl said:

very beautiful, I absolutely love the imagery

January 6th, 2025 21:02

Free
Tony36 said:

Beautiful

January 6th, 2025 09:41

Light
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 6th, 2025 09:32

Free
arqios said:

This is such a beautiful encapsulation of the transformative and omnipresent nature of freedom. It highlights how freedom can transcend pain and darkness, becoming a guiding star and a defining moment in the continuum of time. Thanks for sharing πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠπŸ‘πŸ»

January 6th, 2025 07:58

Free
Poetic Licence said:

Moving out of the darkness, what a wonderful feeling, enjoyed the read

January 6th, 2025 06:16

Light
mik said:

Peace love too all

January 6th, 2025 05:42

Free
LP2187 said:

A vivid picture of moving from darkness to freedom. Poignant indeed, I loved this.

January 6th, 2025 05:42

Free
orchidee said:

Good write M.

January 6th, 2025 05:34

Light
Poetic Licence said:

We could all do with some light, enjoyed the read

January 6th, 2025 04:30

Light
orchidee said:

Good write M. Yes, we all need some \'oomph\', light, inspirings at times.

January 6th, 2025 03:29

Light
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Awesome poem, friend! Welcome to MPS! Looking forward to reading more! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

January 5th, 2025 23:00