Comments received on poems by Thehara
Lemonade The Robot by Thehara age 12.(published in Poetry Escape)
orchidee said:
A fine write Thehara.
September 23rd, 2019 04:41
orchidee said:
A fine write Thehara.
September 23rd, 2019 04:41
Putrid Gassington by Thehara age 9
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD AFTERNOON THEHARA ~ We were sad to see your have had lots of visits but only one comment for your elegant ODE ~ Im BRIAN and I share this site with ANGELA my Fiancee !
Love the TITLE Im a CHEMIST so I thought it might be GAS or a VILLAGE but it turned out to be like MY Friend Graham who is a TRAMP ! We all love HIM but we do wish he would have a wash ! BUT your Poem (lovely rhymes) had a sting in the tale ! Only the outside was scuffy & smelly inside was suit of TIN just like the TINMAN in the WIZARD of OZ ! Inside the tin just like a *cake in a tin* all was clean & pure and had a lovely scent ~ clean Hair & sparkling Teeth and a smiling Face ~ AMEN ! There is a MORAL here *Never judge a Book by its Cover or a Man by his Outward Appearance !* Loved it please check our POEMS ~ Thanks B & A
Blessings & Peace
Yours Brian & Angela.
September 21st, 2019 09:40
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD AFTERNOON THEHARA ~ We were sad to see your have had lots of visits but only one comment for your elegant ODE ~ Im BRIAN and I share this site with ANGELA my Fiancee !
Love the TITLE Im a CHEMIST so I thought it might be GAS or a VILLAGE but it turned out to be like MY Friend Graham who is a TRAMP ! We all love HIM but we do wish he would have a wash ! BUT your Poem (lovely rhymes) had a sting in the tale ! Only the outside was scuffy & smelly inside was suit of TIN just like the TINMAN in the WIZARD of OZ ! Inside the tin just like a *cake in a tin* all was clean & pure and had a lovely scent ~ clean Hair & sparkling Teeth and a smiling Face ~ AMEN ! There is a MORAL here *Never judge a Book by its Cover or a Man by his Outward Appearance !* Loved it please check our POEMS ~ Thanks B & A
Blessings & Peace
Yours Brian & Angela.
September 21st, 2019 09:40
Grow and Mature faster
Thehara said:
8 year old brother switch off television while Thehara watching .
Annoyed ,she writes above .
March 25th, 2017 02:17
Thehara said:
8 year old brother switch off television while Thehara watching .
Annoyed ,she writes above .
March 25th, 2017 02:17
Colours
Thehara said:
Thank you for comments .
We have to be equal in our rights though we contribute differently to the world.
March 25th, 2017 02:15
Thehara said:
Thank you for comments .
We have to be equal in our rights though we contribute differently to the world.
March 25th, 2017 02:15
Colours
Goldfinch60 said:
Everyone is equal but each of us is different in our own way. To judge people by colour, gender, sexual orientation, religious opinion is sad in this day and age. Good write.
March 25th, 2017 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Everyone is equal but each of us is different in our own way. To judge people by colour, gender, sexual orientation, religious opinion is sad in this day and age. Good write.
March 25th, 2017 01:26
Colours
Hopey_xx said:
I love it! Great write, we are all equal, but still unique- no matter what.
March 24th, 2017 14:11
Hopey_xx said:
I love it! Great write, we are all equal, but still unique- no matter what.
March 24th, 2017 14:11
Lily Sugar by Thehara age10
lysistrata said:
Honestly?
I find Putrid Gassington more amusing.
He could actually hang out with my Kitty the Cat Kisser.(Not Keeper,Kisser!)🐈🐱💋💋
June 19th, 2016 04:07
lysistrata said:
Honestly?
I find Putrid Gassington more amusing.
He could actually hang out with my Kitty the Cat Kisser.(Not Keeper,Kisser!)🐈🐱💋💋
June 19th, 2016 04:07
