Comments received on poems by H.J. Rivers
The Body Keeps a War
sorenbarrett said:
Very well written with convincing images and metaphor that reached out from the grave of war to its reality and intimacy very masterfully written a definite fave.
February 14th, 2025 05:38
sorenbarrett said:
Very well written with convincing images and metaphor that reached out from the grave of war to its reality and intimacy very masterfully written a definite fave.
February 14th, 2025 05:38
The Body Keeps a War
Poetic Licence said:
Touching, Haunting and beautiful write, very well written read
February 14th, 2025 03:30
Poetic Licence said:
Touching, Haunting and beautiful write, very well written read
February 14th, 2025 03:30
Love\'s Iliad
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very clever write that gives a purposeful message between it`s lines, enjoyed the read
February 12th, 2025 10:27
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very clever write that gives a purposeful message between it`s lines, enjoyed the read
February 12th, 2025 10:27
Love\'s Iliad
sorenbarrett said:
Greek myths like Melvil\'s Moby Dick are metaphors that reach the archetypes of the soul left after tens of thousands of years they resurrect in poems pulling at heart strings invisible to the mind. Your poem so masterfully crafted weaves these sagas and myths into meaning and leaves the reader awestruck and feeling something long buried unidentifyable but real. Very nicely done and deserving of a fave.
February 12th, 2025 09:48
sorenbarrett said:
Greek myths like Melvil\'s Moby Dick are metaphors that reach the archetypes of the soul left after tens of thousands of years they resurrect in poems pulling at heart strings invisible to the mind. Your poem so masterfully crafted weaves these sagas and myths into meaning and leaves the reader awestruck and feeling something long buried unidentifyable but real. Very nicely done and deserving of a fave.
February 12th, 2025 09:48
