Comments received on poems by Devender Kumar



Human are hunters
Poetic Licence said:

A skill sadly some people have perfected, control by emotional blackmail, nicely expressed and written

June 14th, 2025 10:56

Criminals are yours
Poetic Licence said:

They belong to us because we created them, enjoyed the read

June 13th, 2025 12:06

Criminals are yours
sorenbarrett said:

Indeed they are and we must believe that someone created them. A lovely write

June 13th, 2025 11:37

Ego
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting write about the ego which is what makes up our conscious self. Very nicely done

June 5th, 2025 13:13

Ego
Tony36 said:

Great write

June 5th, 2025 10:15

joys of retirement 
Poetic Licence said:

What a lovely write, there is no retirement now, we have to work till we drop, nicely crafted write, enjoyed

May 23rd, 2025 09:45

joys of retirement 
sorenbarrett said:

A most idealistic senryu loved it. You know no one retires anymore they can\'t afford it.

May 23rd, 2025 09:09

Gods Killed the God
sorenbarrett said:

So it seems indeed. Control comes from the beginning of religion and is passed down in the 10 rules taken from Hammurabi through Moses and expanded from there. A thought provoking write

May 14th, 2025 08:51

Birds on Mango tree
sorenbarrett said:

Have watched them do that and somehow it is gratifying watching such things of beauty eat their meal. Very nicely expressed

May 13th, 2025 04:26

Birds on Mango tree
Poetic Licence said:

Lovely write, enjoyed

May 13th, 2025 03:16

The Cutest Horses
Poetic Licence said:

That is a wonderful write, enjoyed the read

May 11th, 2025 21:27

your chicks
RSM0812 said:

I like the imagery of this poem. Great job.

May 8th, 2025 06:11

Where is all the warriors,  
sorenbarrett said:

Poem of the consequences of a natural disaster and its implications. Most sad.

May 7th, 2025 03:48

Where is all the warriors,  
Poetic Licence said:

A plea of help for farmers and questioning why god inflicts more pain, nicely written and expressed

May 7th, 2025 02:54

Save us from Devils
sorenbarrett said:

A poem for all innocents be they human, animal, or plant or even the landscape, planet or stars. A lovely write

May 5th, 2025 10:18

Love some poison
sunshine777 said:

Harsh reality but real, nice write

May 1st, 2025 14:32

Love some poison
sorenbarrett said:

An eye for an eye a tooth for a tooth. I have heard that before somewhere, in todays world poison runs form love to pharmaceuticals. A most interesting read.

April 30th, 2025 12:50

For The First Time
sorenbarrett said:

First times are different that those that follow. An evolution from bad to good and experience gained. Nice

April 28th, 2025 12:14

your chicks
sorenbarrett said:

Implied understood and found most sensual, erotic and sexual. Well done

April 26th, 2025 09:20

The Cutest Horses
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful Haiku that evokes thoughts of riding horseback through those glorious meadows.

April 25th, 2025 09:36

Come outside
sorenbarrett said:

Beautiful images and words of nature. Lovely

April 24th, 2025 11:06

In These Eyes,
sorenbarrett said:

A poem by a person smitten. A love poem well written. Good job

April 23rd, 2025 12:44

Farmer
Tony36 said:

Being raised in a farming family, I can relate. Excellent write

April 22nd, 2025 12:24

Farmer
sorenbarrett said:

Farmers have it tough. A great poem to them and maybe a metaphor as well. Very powerful

April 22nd, 2025 09:25

Beside the city
sorenbarrett said:

Full of nature images and a carefree feel to this poem. Most lovely

April 21st, 2025 15:26

The innocence is fatal here
sorenbarrett said:

Here I sense a metaphor behind the mother as well as the literal little girl. The same happens to new nations as to children growing up. Lovely

April 19th, 2025 09:58

The Last Loss
Poetic Licence said:

The deaper darker side of the grim reaper (death), nicely expressed

April 18th, 2025 04:50

The Last Loss
sorenbarrett said:

The dark side of death. In few words this is conveyed. Very nice

April 18th, 2025 04:14

Fate, the Soul mate
Poetic Licence said:

A recipe for the soul mate, enjoyed the read

April 17th, 2025 06:20

Fate, the Soul mate
sorenbarrett said:

This one requites careful and deliberate reading to understand that it is a recipe list for the soul mate. Well done

April 17th, 2025 05:03

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