Comments received on poems by Devender Kumar
Bright Moon
sorenbarrett said:
This one paints a definite picture and it is not pleasant although the poem itself is. Well done
September 16th, 2025 05:04
sorenbarrett said:
This one paints a definite picture and it is not pleasant although the poem itself is. Well done
September 16th, 2025 05:04
Continuity
sorenbarrett said:
You have painted the picture of creation. Nicely done
September 11th, 2025 16:21
sorenbarrett said:
You have painted the picture of creation. Nicely done
September 11th, 2025 16:21
Water
sorenbarrett said:
Water has many properties none of which pay attention to gender class or race. A good read powerful in its brevity
September 10th, 2025 11:00
sorenbarrett said:
Water has many properties none of which pay attention to gender class or race. A good read powerful in its brevity
September 10th, 2025 11:00
The human desirs
sorenbarrett said:
A haiku that makes not only sense but dives deep. A lovely write
September 6th, 2025 09:01
sorenbarrett said:
A haiku that makes not only sense but dives deep. A lovely write
September 6th, 2025 09:01
They are after her
Bella Shepard said:
I t seems jealousy know no bounds, the plight of a seeming innocent. Good write!
September 3rd, 2025 15:58
Bella Shepard said:
I t seems jealousy know no bounds, the plight of a seeming innocent. Good write!
September 3rd, 2025 15:58
They are after her
sorenbarrett said:
Others viewed through the need of our own eyes. In this case all look at her with passion but none with love. Desire and self interest rule with jealousy coming out. Well done
August 31st, 2025 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
Others viewed through the need of our own eyes. In this case all look at her with passion but none with love. Desire and self interest rule with jealousy coming out. Well done
August 31st, 2025 04:43
Party in Rainy Night
sorenbarrett said:
Mystical almost mythical certainly fanciful it drifts peacefully. Most lovely
August 23rd, 2025 10:29
sorenbarrett said:
Mystical almost mythical certainly fanciful it drifts peacefully. Most lovely
August 23rd, 2025 10:29
You are free
sorenbarrett said:
What a most interesting structure to this poem in its alterations. Very nicely done
August 20th, 2025 12:53
sorenbarrett said:
What a most interesting structure to this poem in its alterations. Very nicely done
August 20th, 2025 12:53
Son of Shatan
Poetic Licence said:
I feel this is asking questions of religious beliefs I do not know, but I sense a strong sense of doubt and questioning in the write, nicely expressed and written
August 16th, 2025 06:42
Poetic Licence said:
I feel this is asking questions of religious beliefs I do not know, but I sense a strong sense of doubt and questioning in the write, nicely expressed and written
August 16th, 2025 06:42
Son of Shatan
sorenbarrett said:
This poem delves into religious beliefs with which I am not familiar but speaks with power and direction. Nicely done
August 16th, 2025 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
This poem delves into religious beliefs with which I am not familiar but speaks with power and direction. Nicely done
August 16th, 2025 04:49
Magic spell of rain
Poetic Licence said:
The beauty of nature, wonderful write
August 5th, 2025 10:46
Poetic Licence said:
The beauty of nature, wonderful write
August 5th, 2025 10:46
Magic spell of rain
sorenbarrett said:
A most wonderful haiku that flows and floats
August 5th, 2025 09:39
sorenbarrett said:
A most wonderful haiku that flows and floats
August 5th, 2025 09:39
Beside the city
sorenbarrett said:
You cast a spell with these stanzas of nature and its beauty and peace. Lovely and a fave
July 25th, 2025 04:36
sorenbarrett said:
You cast a spell with these stanzas of nature and its beauty and peace. Lovely and a fave
July 25th, 2025 04:36
Beside the city
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a lovely write create a nice image of nature, enjoyed the read
July 25th, 2025 03:06
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a lovely write create a nice image of nature, enjoyed the read
July 25th, 2025 03:06
Promise of a Woman
Poetic Licence said:
Short but speaks volumes, enjoyed the read
July 23rd, 2025 12:04
Poetic Licence said:
Short but speaks volumes, enjoyed the read
July 23rd, 2025 12:04
The art of traping
Damaso said:
Wow, how do you do it? This is incredible, and summed up in just a few lines. It\'s worth twice as much. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. Best regards.
July 21st, 2025 16:04
Damaso said:
Wow, how do you do it? This is incredible, and summed up in just a few lines. It\'s worth twice as much. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. Best regards.
July 21st, 2025 16:04
The art of traping
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of a contract that is not as good as it appears for both sides, enjoyed the read
July 21st, 2025 12:48
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of a contract that is not as good as it appears for both sides, enjoyed the read
July 21st, 2025 12:48
The poor\'s Nation
RSM0812 said:
\"The system is made to control the poor\". An unfortunate side effect of the unfairness of a capitalist society. Great write.
July 21st, 2025 09:11
RSM0812 said:
\"The system is made to control the poor\". An unfortunate side effect of the unfairness of a capitalist society. Great write.
July 21st, 2025 09:11
The art of traping
sorenbarrett said:
It is thus that contracts are made and signed. Just as the American Indian. Well written
July 21st, 2025 07:06
sorenbarrett said:
It is thus that contracts are made and signed. Just as the American Indian. Well written
July 21st, 2025 07:06
Why should I read their books,
Priya Tomar said:
Poetry of courage .
simple but sharp....
Very well
July 20th, 2025 07:23
Priya Tomar said:
Poetry of courage .
simple but sharp....
Very well
July 20th, 2025 07:23
Why should I read their books,
sorenbarrett said:
A reality and a metaphor as well. Nicely stated the issue of discrimination and prejudice. A social injustice.
July 20th, 2025 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
A reality and a metaphor as well. Nicely stated the issue of discrimination and prejudice. A social injustice.
July 20th, 2025 04:01
demonic pleasure
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and sad but so because it is often true. Short and to the point
July 14th, 2025 12:27
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and sad but so because it is often true. Short and to the point
July 14th, 2025 12:27
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