Comments received on poems by Devender Kumar
joys of retirement
Poetic Licence said:
What a lovely write, there is no retirement now, we have to work till we drop, nicely crafted write, enjoyed
May 23rd, 2025 09:45
Poetic Licence said:
What a lovely write, there is no retirement now, we have to work till we drop, nicely crafted write, enjoyed
May 23rd, 2025 09:45
joys of retirement
sorenbarrett said:
A most idealistic senryu loved it. You know no one retires anymore they can\'t afford it.
May 23rd, 2025 09:09
sorenbarrett said:
A most idealistic senryu loved it. You know no one retires anymore they can\'t afford it.
May 23rd, 2025 09:09
Gods Killed the God
sorenbarrett said:
So it seems indeed. Control comes from the beginning of religion and is passed down in the 10 rules taken from Hammurabi through Moses and expanded from there. A thought provoking write
May 14th, 2025 08:51
sorenbarrett said:
So it seems indeed. Control comes from the beginning of religion and is passed down in the 10 rules taken from Hammurabi through Moses and expanded from there. A thought provoking write
May 14th, 2025 08:51
Birds on Mango tree
sorenbarrett said:
Have watched them do that and somehow it is gratifying watching such things of beauty eat their meal. Very nicely expressed
May 13th, 2025 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
Have watched them do that and somehow it is gratifying watching such things of beauty eat their meal. Very nicely expressed
May 13th, 2025 04:26
The Cutest Horses
Poetic Licence said:
That is a wonderful write, enjoyed the read
May 11th, 2025 21:27
Poetic Licence said:
That is a wonderful write, enjoyed the read
May 11th, 2025 21:27
Where is all the warriors,
sorenbarrett said:
Poem of the consequences of a natural disaster and its implications. Most sad.
May 7th, 2025 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
Poem of the consequences of a natural disaster and its implications. Most sad.
May 7th, 2025 03:48
Where is all the warriors,
Poetic Licence said:
A plea of help for farmers and questioning why god inflicts more pain, nicely written and expressed
May 7th, 2025 02:54
Poetic Licence said:
A plea of help for farmers and questioning why god inflicts more pain, nicely written and expressed
May 7th, 2025 02:54
Save us from Devils
sorenbarrett said:
A poem for all innocents be they human, animal, or plant or even the landscape, planet or stars. A lovely write
May 5th, 2025 10:18
sorenbarrett said:
A poem for all innocents be they human, animal, or plant or even the landscape, planet or stars. A lovely write
May 5th, 2025 10:18
Love some poison
sorenbarrett said:
An eye for an eye a tooth for a tooth. I have heard that before somewhere, in todays world poison runs form love to pharmaceuticals. A most interesting read.
April 30th, 2025 12:50
sorenbarrett said:
An eye for an eye a tooth for a tooth. I have heard that before somewhere, in todays world poison runs form love to pharmaceuticals. A most interesting read.
April 30th, 2025 12:50
For The First Time
sorenbarrett said:
First times are different that those that follow. An evolution from bad to good and experience gained. Nice
April 28th, 2025 12:14
sorenbarrett said:
First times are different that those that follow. An evolution from bad to good and experience gained. Nice
April 28th, 2025 12:14
your chicks
sorenbarrett said:
Implied understood and found most sensual, erotic and sexual. Well done
April 26th, 2025 09:20
sorenbarrett said:
Implied understood and found most sensual, erotic and sexual. Well done
April 26th, 2025 09:20
The Cutest Horses
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful Haiku that evokes thoughts of riding horseback through those glorious meadows.
April 25th, 2025 09:36
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful Haiku that evokes thoughts of riding horseback through those glorious meadows.
April 25th, 2025 09:36
In These Eyes,
sorenbarrett said:
A poem by a person smitten. A love poem well written. Good job
April 23rd, 2025 12:44
sorenbarrett said:
A poem by a person smitten. A love poem well written. Good job
April 23rd, 2025 12:44
Farmer
Tony36 said:
Being raised in a farming family, I can relate. Excellent write
April 22nd, 2025 12:24
Tony36 said:
Being raised in a farming family, I can relate. Excellent write
April 22nd, 2025 12:24
Farmer
sorenbarrett said:
Farmers have it tough. A great poem to them and maybe a metaphor as well. Very powerful
April 22nd, 2025 09:25
sorenbarrett said:
Farmers have it tough. A great poem to them and maybe a metaphor as well. Very powerful
April 22nd, 2025 09:25
Beside the city
sorenbarrett said:
Full of nature images and a carefree feel to this poem. Most lovely
April 21st, 2025 15:26
sorenbarrett said:
Full of nature images and a carefree feel to this poem. Most lovely
April 21st, 2025 15:26
The innocence is fatal here
sorenbarrett said:
Here I sense a metaphor behind the mother as well as the literal little girl. The same happens to new nations as to children growing up. Lovely
April 19th, 2025 09:58
sorenbarrett said:
Here I sense a metaphor behind the mother as well as the literal little girl. The same happens to new nations as to children growing up. Lovely
April 19th, 2025 09:58
The Last Loss
Poetic Licence said:
The deaper darker side of the grim reaper (death), nicely expressed
April 18th, 2025 04:50
Poetic Licence said:
The deaper darker side of the grim reaper (death), nicely expressed
April 18th, 2025 04:50
The Last Loss
sorenbarrett said:
The dark side of death. In few words this is conveyed. Very nice
April 18th, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
The dark side of death. In few words this is conveyed. Very nice
April 18th, 2025 04:14
Fate, the Soul mate
Poetic Licence said:
A recipe for the soul mate, enjoyed the read
April 17th, 2025 06:20
Poetic Licence said:
A recipe for the soul mate, enjoyed the read
April 17th, 2025 06:20
Fate, the Soul mate
sorenbarrett said:
This one requites careful and deliberate reading to understand that it is a recipe list for the soul mate. Well done
April 17th, 2025 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
This one requites careful and deliberate reading to understand that it is a recipe list for the soul mate. Well done
April 17th, 2025 05:03
Soother, The Rose
Poetic Licence said:
The beauty of nature helping the heart and mind to be at peace, enjoyed the read
April 16th, 2025 12:56
Poetic Licence said:
The beauty of nature helping the heart and mind to be at peace, enjoyed the read
April 16th, 2025 12:56
Soother, The Rose
sorenbarrett said:
A great short write full of images of color and tactile? senses. Very nice
April 16th, 2025 11:32
sorenbarrett said:
A great short write full of images of color and tactile? senses. Very nice
April 16th, 2025 11:32
I am to suffe
Mourgana of the Fey said:
A well written piece there is so much ongoing suffering!
April 13th, 2025 02:14
Mourgana of the Fey said:
A well written piece there is so much ongoing suffering!
April 13th, 2025 02:14
I am to suffe
Poetic Licence said:
The pain and devastation of war felt personally, nicely expressed write
April 12th, 2025 12:19
Poetic Licence said:
The pain and devastation of war felt personally, nicely expressed write
April 12th, 2025 12:19
I am to suffe
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of pain and suffering. A sad and hurtful read
April 12th, 2025 10:34
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of pain and suffering. A sad and hurtful read
April 12th, 2025 10:34
