Comments received on poems by Devender Kumar
separation song
sorenbarrett said:
A sad senryu that is most interesting because of the juxtaposition of the word tear and tearing that can lead to multiple meanings. Nicely done
November 26th, 2025 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
A sad senryu that is most interesting because of the juxtaposition of the word tear and tearing that can lead to multiple meanings. Nicely done
November 26th, 2025 04:25
the last lines of life
sorenbarrett said:
A great senryu here Kumar well done
November 25th, 2025 13:11
sorenbarrett said:
A great senryu here Kumar well done
November 25th, 2025 13:11
glory of morning
sorenbarrett said:
A great short that displays nature in her glory
November 18th, 2025 11:12
sorenbarrett said:
A great short that displays nature in her glory
November 18th, 2025 11:12
wounds of the zephyr
sorenbarrett said:
This senryu has a wonderful last line that makes it a fave
November 17th, 2025 11:28
sorenbarrett said:
This senryu has a wonderful last line that makes it a fave
November 17th, 2025 11:28
Who killed human more on the land,
sorenbarrett said:
Earth\'s destruction be it man or nature discussed in this poem. What is greater nature of man. Nicely done
November 16th, 2025 09:35
sorenbarrett said:
Earth\'s destruction be it man or nature discussed in this poem. What is greater nature of man. Nicely done
November 16th, 2025 09:35
Gratitude to Mother
NafisaSB said:
Such a wonderful tribute- one can never repay a mother’s sacrifices that she makes Dow her kids
November 10th, 2025 11:55
NafisaSB said:
Such a wonderful tribute- one can never repay a mother’s sacrifices that she makes Dow her kids
November 10th, 2025 11:55
Between
sorenbarrett said:
This is a poem that is deeper than the surface of it seems. It needs to be read over several times to appreciate it. Lovely
November 10th, 2025 08:16
sorenbarrett said:
This is a poem that is deeper than the surface of it seems. It needs to be read over several times to appreciate it. Lovely
November 10th, 2025 08:16
Compensation
sorenbarrett said:
Ah such a poignant poem. The right of the many outweigh the right of the few unless they are one of the few that rule. That is the golden rule of government. A very strong poem using nature to emphasize the point. Even governments that call themselves communist are nothing but a perverted form of might makes right. Well said
November 8th, 2025 10:44
sorenbarrett said:
Ah such a poignant poem. The right of the many outweigh the right of the few unless they are one of the few that rule. That is the golden rule of government. A very strong poem using nature to emphasize the point. Even governments that call themselves communist are nothing but a perverted form of might makes right. Well said
November 8th, 2025 10:44
Food
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of process and cycle of life as from plant to animal to human energy is transformed and incorporated. Done with short lines as stages and with good imagery. Well done
October 29th, 2025 11:13
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of process and cycle of life as from plant to animal to human energy is transformed and incorporated. Done with short lines as stages and with good imagery. Well done
October 29th, 2025 11:13
Gratitude to Mother
sorenbarrett said:
It is the feeling in this work that gets the fave beyond the words that are so small in comparison with the love a mother has. Lovely write
October 24th, 2025 06:30
sorenbarrett said:
It is the feeling in this work that gets the fave beyond the words that are so small in comparison with the love a mother has. Lovely write
October 24th, 2025 06:30
An Officer
sorenbarrett said:
Many a case perpetrated by officials be they police of politicians. People sworn to enforce the law but feel they are above it. Nicely written
October 14th, 2025 13:38
sorenbarrett said:
Many a case perpetrated by officials be they police of politicians. People sworn to enforce the law but feel they are above it. Nicely written
October 14th, 2025 13:38
Power of nature
Poetic Licence said:
We underestimate the power of nature at our peril, and it will be here long after us, enjoyed the read
October 10th, 2025 15:55
Poetic Licence said:
We underestimate the power of nature at our peril, and it will be here long after us, enjoyed the read
October 10th, 2025 15:55
Power of nature
sorenbarrett said:
There is nothing like nature that has the power to overcome all and return to balance even after destruction. A lovely poem
October 10th, 2025 05:47
sorenbarrett said:
There is nothing like nature that has the power to overcome all and return to balance even after destruction. A lovely poem
October 10th, 2025 05:47
ibis
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful haiku that paints its picture of nature and its majesty
September 21st, 2025 05:42
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful haiku that paints its picture of nature and its majesty
September 21st, 2025 05:42
Bright Moon
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done on this Devender! This short poem says so much with so few words. The mark of talented poet. Well done! A fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 17th, 2025 13:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done on this Devender! This short poem says so much with so few words. The mark of talented poet. Well done! A fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 17th, 2025 13:17
Bright Moon
sorenbarrett said:
This one paints a definite picture and it is not pleasant although the poem itself is. Well done
September 16th, 2025 05:04
sorenbarrett said:
This one paints a definite picture and it is not pleasant although the poem itself is. Well done
September 16th, 2025 05:04
Continuity
sorenbarrett said:
You have painted the picture of creation. Nicely done
September 11th, 2025 16:21
sorenbarrett said:
You have painted the picture of creation. Nicely done
September 11th, 2025 16:21
Water
sorenbarrett said:
Water has many properties none of which pay attention to gender class or race. A good read powerful in its brevity
September 10th, 2025 11:00
sorenbarrett said:
Water has many properties none of which pay attention to gender class or race. A good read powerful in its brevity
September 10th, 2025 11:00
The human desirs
sorenbarrett said:
A haiku that makes not only sense but dives deep. A lovely write
September 6th, 2025 09:01
sorenbarrett said:
A haiku that makes not only sense but dives deep. A lovely write
September 6th, 2025 09:01
They are after her
Bella Shepard said:
I t seems jealousy know no bounds, the plight of a seeming innocent. Good write!
September 3rd, 2025 15:58
Bella Shepard said:
I t seems jealousy know no bounds, the plight of a seeming innocent. Good write!
September 3rd, 2025 15:58
They are after her
sorenbarrett said:
Others viewed through the need of our own eyes. In this case all look at her with passion but none with love. Desire and self interest rule with jealousy coming out. Well done
August 31st, 2025 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
Others viewed through the need of our own eyes. In this case all look at her with passion but none with love. Desire and self interest rule with jealousy coming out. Well done
August 31st, 2025 04:43
Party in Rainy Night
sorenbarrett said:
Mystical almost mythical certainly fanciful it drifts peacefully. Most lovely
August 23rd, 2025 10:29
sorenbarrett said:
Mystical almost mythical certainly fanciful it drifts peacefully. Most lovely
August 23rd, 2025 10:29
You are free
sorenbarrett said:
What a most interesting structure to this poem in its alterations. Very nicely done
August 20th, 2025 12:53
sorenbarrett said:
What a most interesting structure to this poem in its alterations. Very nicely done
August 20th, 2025 12:53
Son of Shatan
Poetic Licence said:
I feel this is asking questions of religious beliefs I do not know, but I sense a strong sense of doubt and questioning in the write, nicely expressed and written
August 16th, 2025 06:42
Poetic Licence said:
I feel this is asking questions of religious beliefs I do not know, but I sense a strong sense of doubt and questioning in the write, nicely expressed and written
August 16th, 2025 06:42
Son of Shatan
sorenbarrett said:
This poem delves into religious beliefs with which I am not familiar but speaks with power and direction. Nicely done
August 16th, 2025 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
This poem delves into religious beliefs with which I am not familiar but speaks with power and direction. Nicely done
August 16th, 2025 04:49
Magic spell of rain
Poetic Licence said:
The beauty of nature, wonderful write
August 5th, 2025 10:46
Poetic Licence said:
The beauty of nature, wonderful write
August 5th, 2025 10:46
Magic spell of rain
sorenbarrett said:
A most wonderful haiku that flows and floats
August 5th, 2025 09:39
sorenbarrett said:
A most wonderful haiku that flows and floats
August 5th, 2025 09:39
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