Comments received on poems by Corian Baek
the slaving man
Poetic Licence said:
Thought provoking write, around some people are so wrapped up in there every day world, they cannot see and probably dont want to see the suffering on their doorstep, great write
May 9th, 2025 09:31
Poetic Licence said:
Thought provoking write, around some people are so wrapped up in there every day world, they cannot see and probably dont want to see the suffering on their doorstep, great write
May 9th, 2025 09:31
the slaving man
sorenbarrett said:
There are great metaphors here. The intent of the poem seems to be to draw attention to hypocrisy and a general lack of charity. A most lovely write that is thought provoking
May 9th, 2025 08:53
sorenbarrett said:
There are great metaphors here. The intent of the poem seems to be to draw attention to hypocrisy and a general lack of charity. A most lovely write that is thought provoking
May 9th, 2025 08:53
etiquette
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write with meanings that may not be to all taste, but I like rawness and honesty of the write
May 7th, 2025 09:34
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write with meanings that may not be to all taste, but I like rawness and honesty of the write
May 7th, 2025 09:34
etiquette
sorenbarrett said:
Your metaphors may stick in the throat of some but it got me salivating. Hard to swallow yes that may be so but needed nourishment for those starved of honesty. A lovely write similar in some ways to one I did a while back or at least it reminded me of it. It\'s a fave
May 7th, 2025 09:15
sorenbarrett said:
Your metaphors may stick in the throat of some but it got me salivating. Hard to swallow yes that may be so but needed nourishment for those starved of honesty. A lovely write similar in some ways to one I did a while back or at least it reminded me of it. It\'s a fave
May 7th, 2025 09:15
existential dread
MinaH said:
This has such wonderful imagery. I love it. Thank you for sharing
May 6th, 2025 21:31
MinaH said:
This has such wonderful imagery. I love it. Thank you for sharing
May 6th, 2025 21:31
existential dread
NinjaGirl said:
\"But hunger makes them cruel\" what a raw line. This is amazing work.
May 6th, 2025 18:46
NinjaGirl said:
\"But hunger makes them cruel\" what a raw line. This is amazing work.
May 6th, 2025 18:46
existential dread
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful metaphor lies behind the mask of this creature that speaks to us all in shadowy words. Very nice and a fave
May 6th, 2025 06:09
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful metaphor lies behind the mask of this creature that speaks to us all in shadowy words. Very nice and a fave
May 6th, 2025 06:09
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