Comments received on poems by hyerin
prologue
sorenbarrett said:
A sad fact where society demands conformity and squashes individuality. A lovely write
June 19th, 2025 19:40
sorenbarrett said:
A sad fact where society demands conformity and squashes individuality. A lovely write
June 19th, 2025 19:40
conspiracy or truth
sorenbarrett said:
The prayer of a Nihilist, the Matrix, a world of deception. Very nicely worded and well written a fave
June 4th, 2025 09:00
sorenbarrett said:
The prayer of a Nihilist, the Matrix, a world of deception. Very nicely worded and well written a fave
June 4th, 2025 09:00
six feet.
Soman Ragavan said:
Attachment happens and gets the better of us. If it\'s one-sided, it becomes problematic. Thus the words \"choke\" and \"drift away\" in the poem.
May 27th, 2025 10:22
Soman Ragavan said:
Attachment happens and gets the better of us. If it\'s one-sided, it becomes problematic. Thus the words \"choke\" and \"drift away\" in the poem.
May 27th, 2025 10:22
six feet.
Poetic Licence said:
This has the feel of a raw and heartfelt write, strong emotions over the increasing distance between each other, nicely expressed and written
May 27th, 2025 07:59
Poetic Licence said:
This has the feel of a raw and heartfelt write, strong emotions over the increasing distance between each other, nicely expressed and written
May 27th, 2025 07:59
six feet.
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful!! This poem speaks to me and it echoes in my memory. It is deep emotionally and sounds highly personal and in the raw feeling it is still well composed a fave
May 27th, 2025 07:23
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful!! This poem speaks to me and it echoes in my memory. It is deep emotionally and sounds highly personal and in the raw feeling it is still well composed a fave
May 27th, 2025 07:23
blind faith
sorenbarrett said:
In my humble and most limited expertise I still say this is an extremely powerful, exceedingly well written highly convincing poem with marvelous lines in every stanza. Splendid imagery and very good flow. It is inspirational and highly spiritual in its own nature of tearing the fabric of hypocrisy and exposing the fallacy of organized religion and its man made rot and filth bred by greed and lust for power. One of the best worded poems I have read it reeks with wisdom and bleeds truth. Loved it and it is an easy fave
May 24th, 2025 16:44
sorenbarrett said:
In my humble and most limited expertise I still say this is an extremely powerful, exceedingly well written highly convincing poem with marvelous lines in every stanza. Splendid imagery and very good flow. It is inspirational and highly spiritual in its own nature of tearing the fabric of hypocrisy and exposing the fallacy of organized religion and its man made rot and filth bred by greed and lust for power. One of the best worded poems I have read it reeks with wisdom and bleeds truth. Loved it and it is an easy fave
May 24th, 2025 16:44
my porcelain bird
Poetic Licence said:
That is a lovely write, how so many of us just around gathering dust as the world passes us by, enjoyed the read
May 23rd, 2025 09:37
Poetic Licence said:
That is a lovely write, how so many of us just around gathering dust as the world passes us by, enjoyed the read
May 23rd, 2025 09:37
my porcelain bird
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor seems clear to me and how we are all that bird frozen on a window sill watching the world go by gathering dust. Were we not all bought from a thrift shop? A wonderful poem full of meaning.
May 23rd, 2025 09:00
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor seems clear to me and how we are all that bird frozen on a window sill watching the world go by gathering dust. Were we not all bought from a thrift shop? A wonderful poem full of meaning.
May 23rd, 2025 09:00
society
NinjaGirl said:
So many of these lines:
\"because without the wound
what the hell were you suffering for?\"\'
\"we both know it’s the weight
of everything you never said, \"
\"call it whatever the fuck makes it quieter.
Just don’t call it truth.\"
\"Because truth
would taste like copper
and come out screaming.\"
What incredible imagery and metaphor, one of my favorite favorites! I may take the time to memorize this raw masterpiece.
May 19th, 2025 12:18
NinjaGirl said:
So many of these lines:
\"because without the wound
what the hell were you suffering for?\"\'
\"we both know it’s the weight
of everything you never said, \"
\"call it whatever the fuck makes it quieter.
Just don’t call it truth.\"
\"Because truth
would taste like copper
and come out screaming.\"
What incredible imagery and metaphor, one of my favorite favorites! I may take the time to memorize this raw masterpiece.
May 19th, 2025 12:18
society
sorenbarrett said:
What a great message sent in poetic form. Well expressed and a fave
May 19th, 2025 07:44
sorenbarrett said:
What a great message sent in poetic form. Well expressed and a fave
May 19th, 2025 07:44
salem
sorenbarrett said:
I love the whole second stanza it is very powerful. Very nicely written.
May 18th, 2025 13:24
sorenbarrett said:
I love the whole second stanza it is very powerful. Very nicely written.
May 18th, 2025 13:24
God of Man.
Poetic Licence said:
Beautifully written poem, wonderful imagery, leaving behind a line of question\'s to be thought about, enjoyed the read
May 13th, 2025 06:51
Poetic Licence said:
Beautifully written poem, wonderful imagery, leaving behind a line of question\'s to be thought about, enjoyed the read
May 13th, 2025 06:51
God of Man.
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderous poem of reflection filled with great metaphor and images that open the mind to words of the past that blow in the winds of hope and die in the summer of heat of a breathless sky. The worship of the sun now covered with the smog of our pollution has left us without faith in a world without hope. A most lovely write and a fave
May 13th, 2025 06:11
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderous poem of reflection filled with great metaphor and images that open the mind to words of the past that blow in the winds of hope and die in the summer of heat of a breathless sky. The worship of the sun now covered with the smog of our pollution has left us without faith in a world without hope. A most lovely write and a fave
May 13th, 2025 06:11
my inheritance
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of the way of dealing with fear but also traits we can inherit but not always know we have, enjoyed the read
May 11th, 2025 02:32
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of the way of dealing with fear but also traits we can inherit but not always know we have, enjoyed the read
May 11th, 2025 02:32
my inheritance
sorenbarrett said:
What a great metaphor for dealing with fear. Most lovely
May 10th, 2025 19:49
sorenbarrett said:
What a great metaphor for dealing with fear. Most lovely
May 10th, 2025 19:49
the slaving man
Poetic Licence said:
Thought provoking write, around some people are so wrapped up in there every day world, they cannot see and probably dont want to see the suffering on their doorstep, great write
May 9th, 2025 09:31
Poetic Licence said:
Thought provoking write, around some people are so wrapped up in there every day world, they cannot see and probably dont want to see the suffering on their doorstep, great write
May 9th, 2025 09:31
the slaving man
sorenbarrett said:
There are great metaphors here. The intent of the poem seems to be to draw attention to hypocrisy and a general lack of charity. A most lovely write that is thought provoking
May 9th, 2025 08:53
sorenbarrett said:
There are great metaphors here. The intent of the poem seems to be to draw attention to hypocrisy and a general lack of charity. A most lovely write that is thought provoking
May 9th, 2025 08:53
etiquette
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write with meanings that may not be to all taste, but I like rawness and honesty of the write
May 7th, 2025 09:34
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write with meanings that may not be to all taste, but I like rawness and honesty of the write
May 7th, 2025 09:34
etiquette
sorenbarrett said:
Your metaphors may stick in the throat of some but it got me salivating. Hard to swallow yes that may be so but needed nourishment for those starved of honesty. A lovely write similar in some ways to one I did a while back or at least it reminded me of it. It\'s a fave
May 7th, 2025 09:15
sorenbarrett said:
Your metaphors may stick in the throat of some but it got me salivating. Hard to swallow yes that may be so but needed nourishment for those starved of honesty. A lovely write similar in some ways to one I did a while back or at least it reminded me of it. It\'s a fave
May 7th, 2025 09:15
existential dread
MinaH said:
This has such wonderful imagery. I love it. Thank you for sharing
May 6th, 2025 21:31
MinaH said:
This has such wonderful imagery. I love it. Thank you for sharing
May 6th, 2025 21:31
existential dread
NinjaGirl said:
\"But hunger makes them cruel\" what a raw line. This is amazing work.
May 6th, 2025 18:46
NinjaGirl said:
\"But hunger makes them cruel\" what a raw line. This is amazing work.
May 6th, 2025 18:46
existential dread
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful metaphor lies behind the mask of this creature that speaks to us all in shadowy words. Very nice and a fave
May 6th, 2025 06:09
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful metaphor lies behind the mask of this creature that speaks to us all in shadowy words. Very nice and a fave
May 6th, 2025 06:09
