Comments received on poems by R43



Ode to my wrists.
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of crying pain. Although many prefer cut flowers to decorate their rooms I prefer to see them in my garden or in the majesty of nature blooming in all their glory until death takes them. A feeling of sadness pervades this poem so well written

May 19th, 2025 04:11

Star Crossed
Pandy said:

You evoke emotion well. Best wishes to keeping things together ❤️

May 18th, 2025 21:18

Ode to my wrists.
Pandy said:

Brave and beautifully bittersweet write. I decorated a very visible scar with nightmarish memories attached with a wildflower garden tattoo, so I truly adored your metaphor. The ending seemed like it could be a new beginning.🌸🌿

May 18th, 2025 21:12

Freedom.
sorenbarrett said:

Free to make our own mistakes, free to set our own course, free to suffer our own pain. A good post that shows growing perspective on what freedom is and what responsibility goes with it. A lovely write

May 16th, 2025 04:30

Star Crossed
sorenbarrett said:

A sense of longing is conveyed by this poem. Nicely written

May 14th, 2025 10:29

♡Day 45.♡
Poetic Licence said:

A honest declaration and pledge of love, nicely expressed

May 13th, 2025 02:12

♡Day 45.♡
sorenbarrett said:

A loving pledge of gratitude and admiration. Lovely

May 12th, 2025 15:31

Introduction to Daylen.
sorenbarrett said:

Cute and as all fairytales has a happy ending. (ending?) well for now. Very well written with just enough detail to carry the story onward and leave the reader with a smile.

May 11th, 2025 04:39

Introduction to Daylen.
Poetic Licence said:

A very honest write on their journey to finding there first real love, long may that last, enjoyed the read

May 11th, 2025 02:40