Comments received on poems by Armonte Brantley

Love, ISC

WELCOME TO MY POETIC SIDE - Nice site - awesome poems - great poets. Love you first poem because it is straight from the heart. It uis full of pathos and regret and I guess writing it gave you some release ! The poem itself is very structured with lots of rhyme and rhythm. It would look better and read better if it was written in normal poetic form - line by line. I have experienced the loss of a love so I can empathise. I hope thing work out - BRIAN

April 17th, 2016 11:45