Comments received on poems by The Soft Witness



Until It Hurts
sorenbarrett said:

Being honest with oneself is the precursor to being able to change and to be able to love not just self but others. A sincere and honest write. Nicely done

May 25th, 2025 03:55

Safe, Even If He Leaves
sorenbarrett said:

There is a type of internal wisdom that grows with age and in this case about how to treat oneself and what to look for. Very nicely written

May 24th, 2025 04:29

I Didn\'t Answer
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of growing self respect and sense of what one wants and how to get it. Very nice

May 23rd, 2025 05:17

He Didn\'t Show Up, But I Did
sorenbarrett said:

Some might call this poem feministic, some might call it finding oneself I call it humanistic a most lovely write spoken without anger but rather recognition, without hate but rather acceptance of self and its responsibility for past and present. So nice a tone in this poem it is a fave

May 22nd, 2025 05:11

When the Light Turns Off
Poetic Licence said:

The journey of healing is a long one and sometimes be a very rocky road, nicely expressed in this write

May 21st, 2025 04:45

When the Light Turns Off
sorenbarrett said:

The process of healing is not always a steady progression but often a bumpy road. Nicely written in this poem

May 21st, 2025 04:25

The Garden and the Girl
Poetic Licence said:

This such a beautiful write and message, delivered with alot of style in the writing, wonderful write, deserves more than one read

May 20th, 2025 05:53

The Garden and the Girl
sorenbarrett said:

A most lovely story and metaphor a type of fable as well nicely written and quite poetic. Welcome

May 20th, 2025 04:22

The Garden and the Girl
arqios said:

Welcome to MPS🕊️🙏🏻

May 20th, 2025 03:19