Comments received on poems by Reta



rot in that same spot
Soman Ragavan said:

Nature has made every living being with a specific purpose. Many living things have unique characteristics. It is in the nature of flowers to wither and fade within a short time. They do not have the resources to stay fresh for long. Within the short time allotted to them, they have to produce what is expected of them. One reason for the beauty is to attract flies, butterflies, birds, bees, etc, to enable pollination and the reproduction of the species. In many cases, if flowers are not pollinated, there is no reproduction. In the case of humans and flowers, it turns out that, being captivated by the beauty, Man ends up cutting the flower and keeping it inside….

June 11th, 2025 21:33

rot in that same spot
sorenbarrett said:

Loved the last line that put a twist on this whole poem. A most interesting write. Well done

June 11th, 2025 14:37

moon reel me in
sorenbarrett said:

Quite a poem of passion and love, violence, pain and longing. A most powerful performance. Full of great images it soars. Nicely done

June 11th, 2025 05:06