Comments received on poems by JAY_357



Illicitus
Poetic Licence said:

The cost of fulfilling desire was worth paying the price, enjoyed the read

June 15th, 2025 02:42

Illicitus
sorenbarrett said:

The forbidden fruit for which one would sell their soul. A lovely write

June 14th, 2025 20:18

An Oldest Daughter\'s Sentiment
arqios said:

Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊

June 14th, 2025 08:24

An Oldest Daughter\'s Sentiment
Poetic Licence said:

Although this very dark and powerful it is very well written, you can feel the fear of living in a nightmare, nicely expressed

June 14th, 2025 06:59

An Oldest Daughter\'s Sentiment
sorenbarrett said:

Dark from the start this poem echoes fear and sadness. It is a nightmare of imprisonment within family, house, self. Nicely written

June 14th, 2025 04:32

An Oldest Daughter\'s Sentiment
Spencer Wilhelm said:

Dang, darkest thing I will read today. Powerfully written. I could feel the tragedy seeping out.

June 13th, 2025 23:44