Comments received on poems by JAY_357
An Oldest Daughter\'s Sentiment
sorenbarrett said:
Dark from the start this poem echoes fear and sadness. It is a nightmare of imprisonment within family, house, self. Nicely written
June 14th, 2025 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
Dark from the start this poem echoes fear and sadness. It is a nightmare of imprisonment within family, house, self. Nicely written
June 14th, 2025 04:32
An Oldest Daughter\'s Sentiment
Spencer Wilhelm said:
Dang, darkest thing I will read today. Powerfully written. I could feel the tragedy seeping out.
June 13th, 2025 23:44
Spencer Wilhelm said:
Dang, darkest thing I will read today. Powerfully written. I could feel the tragedy seeping out.
June 13th, 2025 23:44
