Comments received on poems by JAY_357
Illicitus
Poetic Licence said:
The cost of fulfilling desire was worth paying the price, enjoyed the read
June 15th, 2025 02:42
Poetic Licence said:
The cost of fulfilling desire was worth paying the price, enjoyed the read
June 15th, 2025 02:42
Illicitus
sorenbarrett said:
The forbidden fruit for which one would sell their soul. A lovely write
June 14th, 2025 20:18
sorenbarrett said:
The forbidden fruit for which one would sell their soul. A lovely write
June 14th, 2025 20:18
An Oldest Daughter\'s Sentiment
Poetic Licence said:
Although this very dark and powerful it is very well written, you can feel the fear of living in a nightmare, nicely expressed
June 14th, 2025 06:59
Poetic Licence said:
Although this very dark and powerful it is very well written, you can feel the fear of living in a nightmare, nicely expressed
June 14th, 2025 06:59
An Oldest Daughter\'s Sentiment
sorenbarrett said:
Dark from the start this poem echoes fear and sadness. It is a nightmare of imprisonment within family, house, self. Nicely written
June 14th, 2025 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
Dark from the start this poem echoes fear and sadness. It is a nightmare of imprisonment within family, house, self. Nicely written
June 14th, 2025 04:32
An Oldest Daughter\'s Sentiment
Spencer Wilhelm said:
Dang, darkest thing I will read today. Powerfully written. I could feel the tragedy seeping out.
June 13th, 2025 23:44
Spencer Wilhelm said:
Dang, darkest thing I will read today. Powerfully written. I could feel the tragedy seeping out.
June 13th, 2025 23:44
