Comments received on poems by Snowflake



Raindrops
sorenbarrett said:

The metaphor makes this poem what it is. Nicely done it speaks of mood.

February 17th, 2026 05:38

I used to say
sorenbarrett said:

This a poem of saying goodbye and the rebirth of a new life. Well dond

February 10th, 2026 17:08

its real
sorenbarrett said:

This would be a great song. Nicely written.

February 3rd, 2026 17:14

Snowflakes
sorenbarrett said:

Cute and innocent this poem reminds me of childhood. Very nice

January 28th, 2026 20:27

And No Matter What May Happen
Friendship said:

Lovely. The poem explores themes of inevitability, loss, and the cyclical nature of life and emotions. It reflects on the struggle between the beauty found in moments of connection and the overwhelming weight of despair and mistakes that seem to recur.

January 23rd, 2026 08:03

And No Matter What May Happen
sorenbarrett said:

So true it is it is always the same end. A thought provoking write nicely put.

January 23rd, 2026 05:12

For the future
Katie B. said:

Well done!

January 21st, 2026 09:18

For the future
sorenbarrett said:

Welcome to MPS. This poem in its innocence makes oneself a sacrifice for the benefit of others. A lovely write that carries with it in its wording a feeling of childlike acceptance. It is strong in its weakness. Lovely

January 21st, 2026 04:32