Comments received on poems by Leny
Funeral
Poetic Licence said:
A tenderly written write of grief and loss, Nicely expressed
July 23rd, 2025 04:33
Poetic Licence said:
A tenderly written write of grief and loss, Nicely expressed
July 23rd, 2025 04:33
Funeral
sorenbarrett said:
A touching write about grief in loss. Nicely worded it tells of that feeling that goes with mourning. Very nicely done
July 23rd, 2025 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
A touching write about grief in loss. Nicely worded it tells of that feeling that goes with mourning. Very nicely done
July 23rd, 2025 03:59
Outgrowing What Was
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, we need to grow and progress and it\'s ok to do that, enjoyed the read
July 22nd, 2025 04:24
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, we need to grow and progress and it\'s ok to do that, enjoyed the read
July 22nd, 2025 04:24
Outgrowing What Was
sorenbarrett said:
A great analogy and well used. We all grow and change and whether cloths or personalities we need to make adjustments as do those around us. Nicely said.
July 22nd, 2025 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
A great analogy and well used. We all grow and change and whether cloths or personalities we need to make adjustments as do those around us. Nicely said.
July 22nd, 2025 04:07
Through
Poetic Licence said:
The journey of life to find our own and the right way nicely written, enjoyed the read
July 17th, 2025 14:34
Poetic Licence said:
The journey of life to find our own and the right way nicely written, enjoyed the read
July 17th, 2025 14:34
After the war
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write sending a positive message, we can make our own peace, enjoyed the read
July 16th, 2025 01:20
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write sending a positive message, we can make our own peace, enjoyed the read
July 16th, 2025 01:20
After the war
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write with the idea that we all make our own peace. Nicely said
July 15th, 2025 18:15
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write with the idea that we all make our own peace. Nicely said
July 15th, 2025 18:15
Threads
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely crafted and worded write with positive message, enjoyed the read
July 14th, 2025 21:56
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely crafted and worded write with positive message, enjoyed the read
July 14th, 2025 21:56
Threads
sorenbarrett said:
This metaphor has so many loose ends to follow. Too short a thread does not allow one to tie a knot, following a thread will eventually lead to an end. Threads joined together make for greater strength and on and on. Very nicely done leaving the ones that tie obscure. A great metaphor
July 14th, 2025 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
This metaphor has so many loose ends to follow. Too short a thread does not allow one to tie a knot, following a thread will eventually lead to an end. Threads joined together make for greater strength and on and on. Very nicely done leaving the ones that tie obscure. A great metaphor
July 14th, 2025 04:43
what I couldn\'t finish
sorenbarrett said:
Well built up the poem works for the last line. Nicely done
July 13th, 2025 05:15
sorenbarrett said:
Well built up the poem works for the last line. Nicely done
July 13th, 2025 05:15
The First Flame
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is quietly powerful, Leny. I love how the flame becomes both comfort and catalyst, tender at first, then transforming everything. That final stanza is especially poignant…not destruction for its own sake, but space-making. Beautifully done. 🌹👏 Welcome to MPS! A fave for sure!
July 12th, 2025 09:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is quietly powerful, Leny. I love how the flame becomes both comfort and catalyst, tender at first, then transforming everything. That final stanza is especially poignant…not destruction for its own sake, but space-making. Beautifully done. 🌹👏 Welcome to MPS! A fave for sure!
July 12th, 2025 09:01
The First Flame
sorenbarrett said:
For the metaphor and expansion on it that all makes sense a fave. Very nicely worked to great effect.
July 12th, 2025 08:38
sorenbarrett said:
For the metaphor and expansion on it that all makes sense a fave. Very nicely worked to great effect.
July 12th, 2025 08:38
