Comments received on poems by Leny Rose M. Villasis
After the war
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write sending a positive message, we can make our own peace, enjoyed the read
July 16th, 2025 01:20
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write sending a positive message, we can make our own peace, enjoyed the read
July 16th, 2025 01:20
After the war
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write with the idea that we all make our own peace. Nicely said
July 15th, 2025 18:15
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write with the idea that we all make our own peace. Nicely said
July 15th, 2025 18:15
Threads
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely crafted and worded write with positive message, enjoyed the read
July 14th, 2025 21:56
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely crafted and worded write with positive message, enjoyed the read
July 14th, 2025 21:56
Threads
sorenbarrett said:
This metaphor has so many loose ends to follow. Too short a thread does not allow one to tie a knot, following a thread will eventually lead to an end. Threads joined together make for greater strength and on and on. Very nicely done leaving the ones that tie obscure. A great metaphor
July 14th, 2025 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
This metaphor has so many loose ends to follow. Too short a thread does not allow one to tie a knot, following a thread will eventually lead to an end. Threads joined together make for greater strength and on and on. Very nicely done leaving the ones that tie obscure. A great metaphor
July 14th, 2025 04:43
what I couldn\'t finish
sorenbarrett said:
Well built up the poem works for the last line. Nicely done
July 13th, 2025 05:15
sorenbarrett said:
Well built up the poem works for the last line. Nicely done
July 13th, 2025 05:15
The First Flame
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is quietly powerful, Leny. I love how the flame becomes both comfort and catalyst, tender at first, then transforming everything. That final stanza is especially poignant…not destruction for its own sake, but space-making. Beautifully done. 🌹👏 Welcome to MPS! A fave for sure!
July 12th, 2025 09:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is quietly powerful, Leny. I love how the flame becomes both comfort and catalyst, tender at first, then transforming everything. That final stanza is especially poignant…not destruction for its own sake, but space-making. Beautifully done. 🌹👏 Welcome to MPS! A fave for sure!
July 12th, 2025 09:01
The First Flame
sorenbarrett said:
For the metaphor and expansion on it that all makes sense a fave. Very nicely worked to great effect.
July 12th, 2025 08:38
sorenbarrett said:
For the metaphor and expansion on it that all makes sense a fave. Very nicely worked to great effect.
July 12th, 2025 08:38
