The Lost Souls Under The Stars
sorenbarrett said:

Welcome to MPS this is a beautiful poetic romance set in wonderful near rhymes internal and latter ending. These near rhymes give a most natural flow to the poem and still carry a feel of traditional rhyme pulling the story along. The mood is set with the atmosphere painted in night and moon and the emotion emphasized in the character\'s lack of awareness of it. Smitten they see only each other. The poem ends with wishes for its continuation. Very nicely done.

June 4th, 2026 08:25