Comments received on poems by the_gracefulpoet
The Wrong Side Of The Street
the_gracefulpoet said:
\"Hi people, this is poem number two for me. Just playing around with tension, words, and fictional shadows today. ✍️\"
June 25th, 2026 11:20
the_gracefulpoet said:
\"Hi people, this is poem number two for me. Just playing around with tension, words, and fictional shadows today. ✍️\"
June 25th, 2026 11:20
The Lost Souls Under The Stars
sorenbarrett said:
Welcome to MPS this is a beautiful poetic romance set in wonderful near rhymes internal and latter ending. These near rhymes give a most natural flow to the poem and still carry a feel of traditional rhyme pulling the story along. The mood is set with the atmosphere painted in night and moon and the emotion emphasized in the character\'s lack of awareness of it. Smitten they see only each other. The poem ends with wishes for its continuation. Very nicely done.
June 4th, 2026 08:25
sorenbarrett said:
Welcome to MPS this is a beautiful poetic romance set in wonderful near rhymes internal and latter ending. These near rhymes give a most natural flow to the poem and still carry a feel of traditional rhyme pulling the story along. The mood is set with the atmosphere painted in night and moon and the emotion emphasized in the character\'s lack of awareness of it. Smitten they see only each other. The poem ends with wishes for its continuation. Very nicely done.
June 4th, 2026 08:25
