Comments received on poems by Malcolm Gladwin
A Clock Face Stranger
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is all about building atmosphere and comes out of a fog like a noir movie in black and white. Nicely done
August 21st, 2025 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is all about building atmosphere and comes out of a fog like a noir movie in black and white. Nicely done
August 21st, 2025 04:43
Little Green Caterpillars
sorenbarrett said:
Simply beautiful lovely images, Great metaphor a fave
August 20th, 2025 12:35
sorenbarrett said:
Simply beautiful lovely images, Great metaphor a fave
August 20th, 2025 12:35
Bee in My Bonnet – The Sting
sorenbarrett said:
Corporations spawned by capitalism and the basic human drive of greed. A good write.
August 11th, 2025 13:47
sorenbarrett said:
Corporations spawned by capitalism and the basic human drive of greed. A good write.
August 11th, 2025 13:47
Mistress Red -; Nymph of the Forrest
sorenbarrett said:
A sensuous and sexual poem of seduction. Nicely written
August 10th, 2025 13:24
sorenbarrett said:
A sensuous and sexual poem of seduction. Nicely written
August 10th, 2025 13:24
Run from Small Fires in Straw
Poetic Licence said:
Some experienced wisdom and sound advice to be heeded in this well written write, enjoyed the read
August 9th, 2025 05:11
Poetic Licence said:
Some experienced wisdom and sound advice to be heeded in this well written write, enjoyed the read
August 9th, 2025 05:11
Run from Small Fires in Straw
sorenbarrett said:
Prophesies and proverbs roll from this work in modern melded with ancient symbols a fun read that gives warning.
August 9th, 2025 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
Prophesies and proverbs roll from this work in modern melded with ancient symbols a fun read that gives warning.
August 9th, 2025 04:12
Until We Awaken
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of the world is operating at break neck speed and we are caught up in it and the need for technology. Yet we have our computers which for many are seriously underused, enjoyed the read
August 7th, 2025 05:54
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of the world is operating at break neck speed and we are caught up in it and the need for technology. Yet we have our computers which for many are seriously underused, enjoyed the read
August 7th, 2025 05:54
Until We Awaken
sorenbarrett said:
Here i hear the rush of the modern world and the message is to unleash the energy within. Nicely written
August 7th, 2025 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
Here i hear the rush of the modern world and the message is to unleash the energy within. Nicely written
August 7th, 2025 04:59
The Wall I Never Painted
sorenbarrett said:
Many well written lines in this poem that maintains good form, flow and rhyme. I seems to be a challenge to someone that is seen as superficial and false in many ways. Very well done
August 6th, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
Many well written lines in this poem that maintains good form, flow and rhyme. I seems to be a challenge to someone that is seen as superficial and false in many ways. Very well done
August 6th, 2025 04:40
The Lost Scripture of Thought and Fire
Poetic Licence said:
A very nicely crafted write with alot of thought gone in to it, incorporating sections from history to give an alternative view of the journey of man, and we may well be the creators of our own death, enjoyed the read
August 5th, 2025 06:20
Poetic Licence said:
A very nicely crafted write with alot of thought gone in to it, incorporating sections from history to give an alternative view of the journey of man, and we may well be the creators of our own death, enjoyed the read
August 5th, 2025 06:20
The Lost Scripture of Thought and Fire
sorenbarrett said:
A writing that very nicely incorporates Babylonian, Greek and other mythologies into an alternate view of creation of man. Nicely organized into sections and well laid out it paints its own picture. Lovely
August 5th, 2025 05:18
sorenbarrett said:
A writing that very nicely incorporates Babylonian, Greek and other mythologies into an alternate view of creation of man. Nicely organized into sections and well laid out it paints its own picture. Lovely
August 5th, 2025 05:18
We Keep On Going Anyway
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely written trip through the journey of life, looking through the illusions we create and the actual reality, and life goes on, enjoyed the read
August 4th, 2025 05:36
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely written trip through the journey of life, looking through the illusions we create and the actual reality, and life goes on, enjoyed the read
August 4th, 2025 05:36
We Keep On Going Anyway
sorenbarrett said:
Life\'s journey through lands of illusions and reality is with us all the time riding in our car as we look out windows of mirages. Nicely done
August 4th, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
Life\'s journey through lands of illusions and reality is with us all the time riding in our car as we look out windows of mirages. Nicely done
August 4th, 2025 04:40
Thread by Thread
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely written write carrying you along as read through , enjoyed the read
August 3rd, 2025 05:26
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely written write carrying you along as read through , enjoyed the read
August 3rd, 2025 05:26
Thread by Thread
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice meter in this poem that carries the reader on like a marching army. A fave
August 3rd, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice meter in this poem that carries the reader on like a marching army. A fave
August 3rd, 2025 04:30
Star-Thirsted Mind
Poetic Licence said:
This is someone having a real question and answer sessions with themselves internally and the world around them. The journey we take in life is like a giant puzzle and sometimes we won\'t find all the pieces, so do we give up or keep looking, a fascinating, interesting and very well written write, enjoyed the read
August 2nd, 2025 15:21
Poetic Licence said:
This is someone having a real question and answer sessions with themselves internally and the world around them. The journey we take in life is like a giant puzzle and sometimes we won\'t find all the pieces, so do we give up or keep looking, a fascinating, interesting and very well written write, enjoyed the read
August 2nd, 2025 15:21
Star-Thirsted Mind
sorenbarrett said:
Questions never end and when one is answered the answer changes and new questions appear. A never ending puzzle and good it is such or like completing any other puzzle it is put away in its box and forgotten. Very nice
August 2nd, 2025 13:35
sorenbarrett said:
Questions never end and when one is answered the answer changes and new questions appear. A never ending puzzle and good it is such or like completing any other puzzle it is put away in its box and forgotten. Very nice
August 2nd, 2025 13:35
When Sky Does Not Answer
sorenbarrett said:
There is a hushed feel to the beginning to this poem that is somber. Nicely written it speaks of rituals and temples giving it a sacred feel. Nicely done
August 2nd, 2025 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
There is a hushed feel to the beginning to this poem that is somber. Nicely written it speaks of rituals and temples giving it a sacred feel. Nicely done
August 2nd, 2025 04:34
When Sky Does Not Answer
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderfully written write, reflecting on our purpose, loneliness, meaning of time etc. some lovely lines and imagery throughout the write, enjoyed the read
August 2nd, 2025 01:34
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderfully written write, reflecting on our purpose, loneliness, meaning of time etc. some lovely lines and imagery throughout the write, enjoyed the read
August 2nd, 2025 01:34
When Sky Does Not Answer
ElizabethMoroz said:
This is a beautiful reflective lament on meaning, purpose, time, loneliness, and so much more,..your lines are vivid with classical thought and imagery indicating a beautiful understanding of language and musicality of poetic form. I loved some of the imagery you have created here and this is a pertinent reflective piece with questions that need to be asked. Beautifully written well done! Sincerely, Elizabeth
August 2nd, 2025 01:07
ElizabethMoroz said:
This is a beautiful reflective lament on meaning, purpose, time, loneliness, and so much more,..your lines are vivid with classical thought and imagery indicating a beautiful understanding of language and musicality of poetic form. I loved some of the imagery you have created here and this is a pertinent reflective piece with questions that need to be asked. Beautifully written well done! Sincerely, Elizabeth
August 2nd, 2025 01:07
This Winding Road
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of time itself and how it applies in life itself. Nicely done
July 31st, 2025 21:17
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of time itself and how it applies in life itself. Nicely done
July 31st, 2025 21:17
This Winding Road
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write, the journey of life in all it\'s glory , some lovely lines and very accurate observations, nicely expressed and written, enjoyed the read
July 31st, 2025 20:28
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write, the journey of life in all it\'s glory , some lovely lines and very accurate observations, nicely expressed and written, enjoyed the read
July 31st, 2025 20:28
Time Forgets Why
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely Thought out write, many poignant questions, enjoyed the read
July 30th, 2025 05:49
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely Thought out write, many poignant questions, enjoyed the read
July 30th, 2025 05:49
Time Forgets Why
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems very Taoist in nature. Loved it a fave
July 30th, 2025 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems very Taoist in nature. Loved it a fave
July 30th, 2025 04:04
The Silence in the Nothing
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write of the thoughts and fears if they are honest we all have at sometime, nicely expressed and written
July 29th, 2025 05:35
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write of the thoughts and fears if they are honest we all have at sometime, nicely expressed and written
July 29th, 2025 05:35
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