Comments received on poems by Berniece
Phases: A Lunar Testimony
sorenbarrett said:
A very creative write with the metaphor of the moon and the woman and man and all that passes just as the moon passes. Well done a fave
September 16th, 2025 20:16
sorenbarrett said:
A very creative write with the metaphor of the moon and the woman and man and all that passes just as the moon passes. Well done a fave
September 16th, 2025 20:16
June Snow
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and horrific the consequences of a natural disaster. Although a real event it also can be a metaphor for a relationship as well. Sad and well written
September 13th, 2025 18:18
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and horrific the consequences of a natural disaster. Although a real event it also can be a metaphor for a relationship as well. Sad and well written
September 13th, 2025 18:18
Her 21st Birthday
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
A deeply emotional and powerful piece of writing, It really captures the sadness and fragility of life.
September 12th, 2025 11:56
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
A deeply emotional and powerful piece of writing, It really captures the sadness and fragility of life.
September 12th, 2025 11:56
Her 21st Birthday
sorenbarrett said:
Sad a poem of tragic commemoration. Short but powerful
September 12th, 2025 10:21
sorenbarrett said:
Sad a poem of tragic commemoration. Short but powerful
September 12th, 2025 10:21
Don’t Say It
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! what lines and metaphors they fall one after another in brilliant waves pounding on the shore of the mind. Simply lovely a fave
September 10th, 2025 13:13
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! what lines and metaphors they fall one after another in brilliant waves pounding on the shore of the mind. Simply lovely a fave
September 10th, 2025 13:13
Pearls before Lovers
sorenbarrett said:
A interesting write and I like the last two lines that add a sense of power to the poem.
August 14th, 2025 10:32
sorenbarrett said:
A interesting write and I like the last two lines that add a sense of power to the poem.
August 14th, 2025 10:32
Live Bait
sorenbarrett said:
Bait is not what anyone wants to be. A great metaphor in regard to a relationship. Well written
August 8th, 2025 15:30
sorenbarrett said:
Bait is not what anyone wants to be. A great metaphor in regard to a relationship. Well written
August 8th, 2025 15:30
Elbow Grease
peto said:
\"You threw my torque wrench in a fit of rage fix it yourself \"
How often does that happen every day
Enjoyed this
August 7th, 2025 10:08
peto said:
\"You threw my torque wrench in a fit of rage fix it yourself \"
How often does that happen every day
Enjoyed this
August 7th, 2025 10:08
Love like Vandalism
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of anger and pain at the way they are teated and has decided to just keep quiet or leave, nicely expressed and written
August 7th, 2025 05:35
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of anger and pain at the way they are teated and has decided to just keep quiet or leave, nicely expressed and written
August 7th, 2025 05:35
Elbow Grease
sorenbarrett said:
It used to be that people did their own repairs but the car in the digital age got too complicated and no one fixes their own anymore. it is so much easier dumping one\'s brain in the lap of a brain mechanic so blame can be shifted. Loved the metaphor. Well done
August 7th, 2025 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
It used to be that people did their own repairs but the car in the digital age got too complicated and no one fixes their own anymore. it is so much easier dumping one\'s brain in the lap of a brain mechanic so blame can be shifted. Loved the metaphor. Well done
August 7th, 2025 05:03
Love like Vandalism
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of hurt and anger that darkens with each passage. Well written
August 6th, 2025 14:56
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of hurt and anger that darkens with each passage. Well written
August 6th, 2025 14:56
Premature
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write that delivers its message, I love the tie my eyes shut so I can touch you, without seeing you are somewhere else, that short piece says so much, enjoyed the read
August 5th, 2025 16:43
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write that delivers its message, I love the tie my eyes shut so I can touch you, without seeing you are somewhere else, that short piece says so much, enjoyed the read
August 5th, 2025 16:43
Premature
sorenbarrett said:
This one speaks loud in a whisper. It shins bright with its darkness. A lovely poem and a fave
August 5th, 2025 16:16
sorenbarrett said:
This one speaks loud in a whisper. It shins bright with its darkness. A lovely poem and a fave
August 5th, 2025 16:16
Secondhand
sorenbarrett said:
I love the last stanza that is so profound in its wisdom. A great metaphor in this poem
August 4th, 2025 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
I love the last stanza that is so profound in its wisdom. A great metaphor in this poem
August 4th, 2025 04:29
Secondhand
Poetic Licence said:
Following someone elses dreams in order to please someone, rarely works out, nicely expressed and written
August 4th, 2025 01:13
Poetic Licence said:
Following someone elses dreams in order to please someone, rarely works out, nicely expressed and written
August 4th, 2025 01:13
Love like Drowning
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of being blinded by what they thought was love, rushing head long in, only to then realise it was not. The hurt and pain that has followed, nicely expressed and written
August 2nd, 2025 05:32
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of being blinded by what they thought was love, rushing head long in, only to then realise it was not. The hurt and pain that has followed, nicely expressed and written
August 2nd, 2025 05:32
Love like Drowning
sorenbarrett said:
Vividly worded this poem paints its picture in poetic words. Nicely done
August 2nd, 2025 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
Vividly worded this poem paints its picture in poetic words. Nicely done
August 2nd, 2025 04:43
