Comments received on poems by Berniece
Secondhand
sorenbarrett said:
I love the last stanza that is so profound in its wisdom. A great metaphor in this poem
August 4th, 2025 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
I love the last stanza that is so profound in its wisdom. A great metaphor in this poem
August 4th, 2025 04:29
Secondhand
Poetic Licence said:
Following someone elses dreams in order to please someone, rarely works out, nicely expressed and written
August 4th, 2025 01:13
Poetic Licence said:
Following someone elses dreams in order to please someone, rarely works out, nicely expressed and written
August 4th, 2025 01:13
Love like Drowning
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of being blinded by what they thought was love, rushing head long in, only to then realise it was not. The hurt and pain that has followed, nicely expressed and written
August 2nd, 2025 05:32
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of being blinded by what they thought was love, rushing head long in, only to then realise it was not. The hurt and pain that has followed, nicely expressed and written
August 2nd, 2025 05:32
Love like Drowning
sorenbarrett said:
Vividly worded this poem paints its picture in poetic words. Nicely done
August 2nd, 2025 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
Vividly worded this poem paints its picture in poetic words. Nicely done
August 2nd, 2025 04:43
