That Smile
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

HI DFH WELCOME TO My Poetic side - A great site. Thanks for sharing your first poem. Nice structure - balanced quatrains and a consistent xaxa xbxb rhyme pattern - rhyme & rhythm ! Easy to read and recite. Loved the content in a trivial day "A smile through tangled hair" can evoke a 100 choked back memories. Thanks BRIAN

April 23rd, 2016 08:16