Comments received on poems by cha
Bloodline
Cheeky Missy said:
Funny. I\'m...as my late mother and two oldest brothers told me and my dad many years ago: so very much like my father that we\'re like two peas in a pod. He may have regretted that as he could see his own shortcomings exemplified in me night and day, in fact, I believe that was the root of our fights, whereas I\'m quite content to be \"just like my daddy!\" Too many years ago I dated a fellow who was like you in that he hated his father\'s features in himself. I\'m sorry you feel that way. That aside, this is absolutely gorgeous, I LOVE how beautifully this is written, wonderfully eloquent and superbly rendered with excellent imagery and a delightfully haunting poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing. I love it!
August 11th, 2025 12:09
Cheeky Missy said:
Funny. I\'m...as my late mother and two oldest brothers told me and my dad many years ago: so very much like my father that we\'re like two peas in a pod. He may have regretted that as he could see his own shortcomings exemplified in me night and day, in fact, I believe that was the root of our fights, whereas I\'m quite content to be \"just like my daddy!\" Too many years ago I dated a fellow who was like you in that he hated his father\'s features in himself. I\'m sorry you feel that way. That aside, this is absolutely gorgeous, I LOVE how beautifully this is written, wonderfully eloquent and superbly rendered with excellent imagery and a delightfully haunting poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing. I love it!
August 11th, 2025 12:09
Bloodline
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful heartfelt and honest write of realizing that some parts of us are inherited and if we don\'t like them or there not good thay are very difficult to change. We should focus on the good points that we have control over, very nicely expressed and written write
August 11th, 2025 10:52
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful heartfelt and honest write of realizing that some parts of us are inherited and if we don\'t like them or there not good thay are very difficult to change. We should focus on the good points that we have control over, very nicely expressed and written write
August 11th, 2025 10:52
Bloodline
sorenbarrett said:
We are parts of what we inherit and what we learn. It is one or the other so there is nothing to blame. A lovely write of shedding the skin of the past and taking on the new skin of learning and overcoming but do we really ever overcome the past. When a snake sheds its skin it is still a snake. A wonderful write.
August 11th, 2025 09:19
sorenbarrett said:
We are parts of what we inherit and what we learn. It is one or the other so there is nothing to blame. A lovely write of shedding the skin of the past and taking on the new skin of learning and overcoming but do we really ever overcome the past. When a snake sheds its skin it is still a snake. A wonderful write.
August 11th, 2025 09:19
