Comments received on poems by louiray
In A White
sorenbarrett said:
It is seldom that a man\'s face is so poetically described with such great images. This is classic in nature and deserves a fave for its grace and beauty
August 29th, 2025 13:51
sorenbarrett said:
It is seldom that a man\'s face is so poetically described with such great images. This is classic in nature and deserves a fave for its grace and beauty
August 29th, 2025 13:51
Mine
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love that becomes a pledge and promise. Very nicely done
August 27th, 2025 09:10
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love that becomes a pledge and promise. Very nicely done
August 27th, 2025 09:10
I Loved You
Soman Ragavan said:
Love can start suddenly or slowly. The very phenomenon is a mystery. Unfulfilled love is painful. “You are not mine…” That person belongs to someone else. This is the biggest tragedy. The words in this poem come from the heart, a heart broken by not being completed.
“Il faut, pour être heureux, être aimé, et l’amour pour son prix ne veut que l’amour même. »
Translation : « To be happy, one must be loved, and, love, for its price, demands love itself.” So, there is no substitute to love. This is a very touching poem…
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August 26th, 2025 21:15
Soman Ragavan said:
Love can start suddenly or slowly. The very phenomenon is a mystery. Unfulfilled love is painful. “You are not mine…” That person belongs to someone else. This is the biggest tragedy. The words in this poem come from the heart, a heart broken by not being completed.
“Il faut, pour être heureux, être aimé, et l’amour pour son prix ne veut que l’amour même. »
Translation : « To be happy, one must be loved, and, love, for its price, demands love itself.” So, there is no substitute to love. This is a very touching poem…
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August 26th, 2025 21:15
The Way I See You
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem dedicated to someone loved. Very nicely written
August 25th, 2025 15:24
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem dedicated to someone loved. Very nicely written
August 25th, 2025 15:24
When I Look At You
sorenbarrett said:
Very well imaged and conceived. A lovely description.
August 23rd, 2025 09:40
sorenbarrett said:
Very well imaged and conceived. A lovely description.
August 23rd, 2025 09:40