Comments received on poems by louiray
Yours, Entirely.
sorenbarrett said:
Such a pure and innocent love expressed in this poem. Very nice indeed
October 4th, 2025 09:20
sorenbarrett said:
Such a pure and innocent love expressed in this poem. Very nice indeed
October 4th, 2025 09:20
She Carried What No One Held
Paul Bell said:
You wonder how some kids make it into adulthood at all.
I suppose what doesn\'t kill you makes you stronger.
Hopefully the next journey brings peace and tranquility.
October 3rd, 2025 08:24
Paul Bell said:
You wonder how some kids make it into adulthood at all.
I suppose what doesn\'t kill you makes you stronger.
Hopefully the next journey brings peace and tranquility.
October 3rd, 2025 08:24
She Carried What No One Held
sorenbarrett said:
My only critique of this poem is the font size. Too small for poor eyes. A lovely write of living with abuse and deception and choosing to look beyond it. A lovely poem of strength and grit. Loved the message and the form it was written in a fave
October 3rd, 2025 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
My only critique of this poem is the font size. Too small for poor eyes. A lovely write of living with abuse and deception and choosing to look beyond it. A lovely poem of strength and grit. Loved the message and the form it was written in a fave
October 3rd, 2025 04:35
Loving You, From Afar
Bragee said:
Saving yourself from a love you want but do not need is differently a tough task. That struggle is evident in this piece of art.
September 24th, 2025 11:29
Bragee said:
Saving yourself from a love you want but do not need is differently a tough task. That struggle is evident in this piece of art.
September 24th, 2025 11:29
Loving You, From Afar
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of love from afar. So true that holding too tight promotes the wish for distance in the other. A most lovely write and wise too.
September 24th, 2025 08:21
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of love from afar. So true that holding too tight promotes the wish for distance in the other. A most lovely write and wise too.
September 24th, 2025 08:21
Mr. K
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of strong infatuation where everything is good. A lovely write
September 22nd, 2025 10:23
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of strong infatuation where everything is good. A lovely write
September 22nd, 2025 10:23
Dreaming Of You
Natavia Hobert said:
Very heart filled. I can connect to this feeling in a way of my own. Very beautiful
September 21st, 2025 10:53
Natavia Hobert said:
Very heart filled. I can connect to this feeling in a way of my own. Very beautiful
September 21st, 2025 10:53
Dreaming Of You
sorenbarrett said:
There is a great deal of longing in this poem for closeness and loving. Nicely worded
September 21st, 2025 07:44
sorenbarrett said:
There is a great deal of longing in this poem for closeness and loving. Nicely worded
September 21st, 2025 07:44
Unloved
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write well worded and imaged it speaks to those that have received little recognition for their early carrying of a family load. It is funny how expectations have changed from the past to today. Good read
September 12th, 2025 09:40
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write well worded and imaged it speaks to those that have received little recognition for their early carrying of a family load. It is funny how expectations have changed from the past to today. Good read
September 12th, 2025 09:40
The Night You Said You Missed Me
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely write of the unsureness of love and the trepidation that accompanies uncertainty mixed with passion. Nicely done
September 8th, 2025 07:57
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely write of the unsureness of love and the trepidation that accompanies uncertainty mixed with passion. Nicely done
September 8th, 2025 07:57
I knew I was In love
sorenbarrett said:
A different type of love poem that speaks to a deeper feeling. Nicely worded
September 2nd, 2025 12:23
sorenbarrett said:
A different type of love poem that speaks to a deeper feeling. Nicely worded
September 2nd, 2025 12:23
I Crave You
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice and although it sounds personal it could well be said for all humanity. A lovely poem
August 30th, 2025 11:28
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice and although it sounds personal it could well be said for all humanity. A lovely poem
August 30th, 2025 11:28
In A White
sorenbarrett said:
It is seldom that a man\'s face is so poetically described with such great images. This is classic in nature and deserves a fave for its grace and beauty
August 29th, 2025 13:51
sorenbarrett said:
It is seldom that a man\'s face is so poetically described with such great images. This is classic in nature and deserves a fave for its grace and beauty
August 29th, 2025 13:51
Mine
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love that becomes a pledge and promise. Very nicely done
August 27th, 2025 09:10
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love that becomes a pledge and promise. Very nicely done
August 27th, 2025 09:10
The Way I See You
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem dedicated to someone loved. Very nicely written
August 25th, 2025 15:24
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem dedicated to someone loved. Very nicely written
August 25th, 2025 15:24
When I Look At You
sorenbarrett said:
Very well imaged and conceived. A lovely description.
August 23rd, 2025 09:40
sorenbarrett said:
Very well imaged and conceived. A lovely description.
August 23rd, 2025 09:40
