Comments received on poems by louiray



In A White
sorenbarrett said:

It is seldom that a man\'s face is so poetically described with such great images. This is classic in nature and deserves a fave for its grace and beauty

August 29th, 2025 13:51

Mine
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of love that becomes a pledge and promise. Very nicely done

August 27th, 2025 09:10

I Loved You
Soman Ragavan said:


Love can start suddenly or slowly. The very phenomenon is a mystery. Unfulfilled love is painful. “You are not mine…” That person belongs to someone else. This is the biggest tragedy. The words in this poem come from the heart, a heart broken by not being completed.
“Il faut, pour être heureux, être aimé, et l’amour pour son prix ne veut que l’amour même. »
Translation : « To be happy, one must be loved, and, love, for its price, demands love itself.” So, there is no substitute to love. This is a very touching poem…
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August 26th, 2025 21:15

I Loved You
sorenbarrett said:

A most lovely love poem very nice

August 26th, 2025 14:06

The Way I See You
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful poem dedicated to someone loved. Very nicely written

August 25th, 2025 15:24

When I Look At You
arqios said:

Welcome to MPS, louiray 🕊️🙏🏻

August 23rd, 2025 17:52

When I Look At You
sorenbarrett said:

Very well imaged and conceived. A lovely description.

August 23rd, 2025 09:40