Comments received on poems by God’s Will



For The Love Of The Craftsman
sorenbarrett said:

A great metaphor where we are tools and are often used. Nicely penned

October 20th, 2025 11:52

No fly zone
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting format that reminded me of a wing with holes. A loss of confidence expressed in this poem of sadness. Nicely done

October 5th, 2025 10:33

Thankful
sorenbarrett said:

A great write of gratefulness and a recognition of sacrifice given. A lovely write

October 1st, 2025 08:17

2 Corinthians 5:17
sorenbarrett said:

A poetic challenge for the reader to give a new try. Nicely written a more modern form of Corinthians. Well done

September 30th, 2025 09:45

Intruder
sorenbarrett said:

A feeling of not belonging and feeling excluded. Well written

September 29th, 2025 13:38

Nomad
sorenbarrett said:

Home is where ever you are. A thoughtful write. Well done.

September 27th, 2025 13:58

The path untraveled
sorenbarrett said:

It makes sense that if we want to be in a different place that we are headed that we need to change direction. Well written

September 26th, 2025 10:29

My Best Friend
sorenbarrett said:

There is a longing in this piece that is nostalgic for a time when the relationship was closer, more simple and happier. Nicely done with rhyme

September 10th, 2025 03:58