Comments received on poems by Bashirah Asuku
The breeze
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and well written in most poetic form. Loved it
September 29th, 2025 06:55
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and well written in most poetic form. Loved it
September 29th, 2025 06:55
The pot
sorenbarrett said:
What a metaphor! In simplicity there is complexity, in the pure there is the adulterated. Water necessary for life we give little thought to it. A resource used and abused it becomes impure with our usage. So it is with other things as well. Nicely done
September 14th, 2025 08:17
sorenbarrett said:
What a metaphor! In simplicity there is complexity, in the pure there is the adulterated. Water necessary for life we give little thought to it. A resource used and abused it becomes impure with our usage. So it is with other things as well. Nicely done
September 14th, 2025 08:17
Condition
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that to me shows inner turmoil that is not understood. A poem with pain overcome by strength. Nicely written
September 13th, 2025 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that to me shows inner turmoil that is not understood. A poem with pain overcome by strength. Nicely written
September 13th, 2025 04:16
Darkness and night
sorenbarrett said:
Light and darkness two powerful symbols that are displayed in this poem nicely written
September 12th, 2025 06:45
sorenbarrett said:
Light and darkness two powerful symbols that are displayed in this poem nicely written
September 12th, 2025 06:45
