Comments received on poems by Jasper



This Love my Affliction
sorenbarrett said:

Deeply passionate a poem of love and its declaration. Very nicely done.

September 16th, 2025 13:47

This Love my Affliction
Priya Tomar said:

Lovely !

September 16th, 2025 12:40

3 Months to Wish
sorenbarrett said:

A lovely write that pulls at the heart using a child, hunger where the mother gives the cake to the child, and the shape used in the words emphasizes the candle and the wish. A tear jerker. Loved it and a fave

September 15th, 2025 19:18

3 Months to Wish
sorenbarrett said:



September 15th, 2025 19:16

the ember
arqios said:

Welcome to MPS, Jasper🕊️🙏🏻

September 15th, 2025 01:31

the ember
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting cube of words each line equal in words and meters. Well done.

September 14th, 2025 19:22

the ember
William Hromada said:

where did it go?

September 14th, 2025 17:23