Comments received on poems by Jasper
This Love my Affliction
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply passionate a poem of love and its declaration. Very nicely done.
September 16th, 2025 13:47
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply passionate a poem of love and its declaration. Very nicely done.
September 16th, 2025 13:47
3 Months to Wish
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write that pulls at the heart using a child, hunger where the mother gives the cake to the child, and the shape used in the words emphasizes the candle and the wish. A tear jerker. Loved it and a fave
September 15th, 2025 19:18
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write that pulls at the heart using a child, hunger where the mother gives the cake to the child, and the shape used in the words emphasizes the candle and the wish. A tear jerker. Loved it and a fave
September 15th, 2025 19:18
the ember
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting cube of words each line equal in words and meters. Well done.
September 14th, 2025 19:22
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting cube of words each line equal in words and meters. Well done.
September 14th, 2025 19:22