Comments received on poems by Brokensoul1425
Old and torn
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write with its message understood
January 3rd, 2026 09:48
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write with its message understood
January 3rd, 2026 09:48
Old and torn
sorenbarrett said:
I too am the eldest child and hear what you are saying. There is a responsibility in that role expected by parents and the younger children. Sometimes one catches the blame for things the younger do and the expected example you are supposed to show. A junior parent without asking but it helps you grow up faster robbed a bit of your own childhood. A lovely write
January 3rd, 2026 08:42
sorenbarrett said:
I too am the eldest child and hear what you are saying. There is a responsibility in that role expected by parents and the younger children. Sometimes one catches the blame for things the younger do and the expected example you are supposed to show. A junior parent without asking but it helps you grow up faster robbed a bit of your own childhood. A lovely write
January 3rd, 2026 08:42
The girl with no eyes
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that starts dark and turns challenging and defiant of bullying. It is strong and powerful at the end. Well said
October 19th, 2025 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that starts dark and turns challenging and defiant of bullying. It is strong and powerful at the end. Well said
October 19th, 2025 03:50
Dark thoughts
Paul Bell said:
Cigarette and a hug, throw in a glass of wine and life gets better.
Things better now.
October 5th, 2025 13:32
Paul Bell said:
Cigarette and a hug, throw in a glass of wine and life gets better.
Things better now.
October 5th, 2025 13:32
Dark thoughts
sorenbarrett said:
It is surprising what a hug will fix if given by the right person at the right time. Nicely written
October 5th, 2025 12:48
sorenbarrett said:
It is surprising what a hug will fix if given by the right person at the right time. Nicely written
October 5th, 2025 12:48
Introductions
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has an innocent childlike feel to it that one wants to cuddle. Nicely done
October 4th, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has an innocent childlike feel to it that one wants to cuddle. Nicely done
October 4th, 2025 04:08
Never Enough
Paul Bell said:
Parents should come with a health warning.
Always remind them you pick their old folks home.
October 3rd, 2025 05:05
Paul Bell said:
Parents should come with a health warning.
Always remind them you pick their old folks home.
October 3rd, 2025 05:05
Never Enough
sorenbarrett said:
Growing up is a tough time where one\'s body, mind, friends and in many cases even family are changing. This poem speaks of perceived demands that seem overwhelming and thoughts of suicide and depression. It is a tough world that many find hard to accept. A raw and lovely write
October 3rd, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
Growing up is a tough time where one\'s body, mind, friends and in many cases even family are changing. This poem speaks of perceived demands that seem overwhelming and thoughts of suicide and depression. It is a tough world that many find hard to accept. A raw and lovely write
October 3rd, 2025 04:46
