Comments received on poems by Andrew Deaton
The road of covenant.
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic list of commandments to live by to grow by and to better by. Well written
January 12th, 2026 03:42
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic list of commandments to live by to grow by and to better by. Well written
January 12th, 2026 03:42
White dove.
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic pledge and promise offered. Nicely written
January 10th, 2026 09:50
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic pledge and promise offered. Nicely written
January 10th, 2026 09:50
Twin souls.
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of acknowledgement that two were meant for each other. Nicely written
January 9th, 2026 20:53
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of acknowledgement that two were meant for each other. Nicely written
January 9th, 2026 20:53
The muchness.
sorenbarrett said:
Passion, sex, seduction all in this poem. Nicely done
January 7th, 2026 16:54
sorenbarrett said:
Passion, sex, seduction all in this poem. Nicely done
January 7th, 2026 16:54
Palindrome
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and a fun read. This one had to be read twice to be believed. Well done.
January 7th, 2026 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and a fun read. This one had to be read twice to be believed. Well done.
January 7th, 2026 03:50
Forgive my past.
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic plea for love and forgiveness of past errors. A confession from the past used as a foundation of repentance for future building of a more secure relationship. Nicely constructed with rhyme and good flow. Well done
January 6th, 2026 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic plea for love and forgiveness of past errors. A confession from the past used as a foundation of repentance for future building of a more secure relationship. Nicely constructed with rhyme and good flow. Well done
January 6th, 2026 03:50
Four horses.
sorenbarrett said:
So many hidden signs in this poem the obvious and subtle from the cross to the pine cone. Well done
December 28th, 2025 14:48
sorenbarrett said:
So many hidden signs in this poem the obvious and subtle from the cross to the pine cone. Well done
December 28th, 2025 14:48
Precious gifts for all.
sorenbarrett said:
So many religions promise salvation but only their way. A great write of the surrender of will. Nicely done Happy Holidays
December 24th, 2025 15:39
sorenbarrett said:
So many religions promise salvation but only their way. A great write of the surrender of will. Nicely done Happy Holidays
December 24th, 2025 15:39
Eternally mine!
sorenbarrett said:
A declaration of love and a pledge of fidelity until the end. A lovely write
December 23rd, 2025 09:26
sorenbarrett said:
A declaration of love and a pledge of fidelity until the end. A lovely write
December 23rd, 2025 09:26
Precious Duo!
sorenbarrett said:
The expression of love from a father to daughters heard in this poem. i know the feeling having daughters myself. There is a sense of joy that seeps out of this poem.
December 20th, 2025 03:42
sorenbarrett said:
The expression of love from a father to daughters heard in this poem. i know the feeling having daughters myself. There is a sense of joy that seeps out of this poem.
December 20th, 2025 03:42
Twins!
sorenbarrett said:
A father\'s blessing poetically set. There is little that can equal the joy of fatherhood or motherhood. And with that birth begins a life that will know no further rest. Very nicely written
December 19th, 2025 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
A father\'s blessing poetically set. There is little that can equal the joy of fatherhood or motherhood. And with that birth begins a life that will know no further rest. Very nicely written
December 19th, 2025 04:37
Twins!
Demar Desu said:
Congratulations!!! Haha I was expecting mama to get a couple more lines in geez it can’t be easy to give birth twice in a row. Hoping for good health for you and your family. Good poem.
December 19th, 2025 02:39
Demar Desu said:
Congratulations!!! Haha I was expecting mama to get a couple more lines in geez it can’t be easy to give birth twice in a row. Hoping for good health for you and your family. Good poem.
December 19th, 2025 02:39
As i lay.
Paul Bell said:
This is me on a Monday morning, dead to the world.
By Wednesday, still comatose.
Come Friday, totally resuscitated.
Okay, her mother is coming to stay for the weekend, just died.
December 18th, 2025 12:04
Paul Bell said:
This is me on a Monday morning, dead to the world.
By Wednesday, still comatose.
Come Friday, totally resuscitated.
Okay, her mother is coming to stay for the weekend, just died.
December 18th, 2025 12:04
As i lay.
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ve heard of being dragged out of this life kicking and screaming but this seems an example of staying no matter what. A fun read
December 18th, 2025 11:58
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ve heard of being dragged out of this life kicking and screaming but this seems an example of staying no matter what. A fun read
December 18th, 2025 11:58
7777
sorenbarrett said:
This poem works of the numerological sense of special magic properties of numbers and seven has always be a special and magical number even more so if tripled it this poem taken a step further. Well done.
December 18th, 2025 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
This poem works of the numerological sense of special magic properties of numbers and seven has always be a special and magical number even more so if tripled it this poem taken a step further. Well done.
December 18th, 2025 03:54
Fresh start.
sorenbarrett said:
The comparison to a game is nicely taken and the battle is on. Well worded to apply to the spirit as well.
December 16th, 2025 09:19
sorenbarrett said:
The comparison to a game is nicely taken and the battle is on. Well worded to apply to the spirit as well.
December 16th, 2025 09:19
Lion and the fox.
sorenbarrett said:
It is the most skillful warrior that doesn\'t have to fight and the best war wone is the one that one does not have to fight. So says Sun Tzu in the Art of War. Well written
December 15th, 2025 11:15
sorenbarrett said:
It is the most skillful warrior that doesn\'t have to fight and the best war wone is the one that one does not have to fight. So says Sun Tzu in the Art of War. Well written
December 15th, 2025 11:15
Within you.
sorenbarrett said:
An all encompassing poem of who one is and the opposites and contradictions that exist. Well done
December 14th, 2025 06:12
sorenbarrett said:
An all encompassing poem of who one is and the opposites and contradictions that exist. Well done
December 14th, 2025 06:12
Dragon spell!
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem that makes use of the elements as well as other basics to empower various dragons symbols of power in and of themselves. Well done
December 13th, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem that makes use of the elements as well as other basics to empower various dragons symbols of power in and of themselves. Well done
December 13th, 2025 04:20
The wrath.
sorenbarrett said:
Although it seems meant for more literal interpretation I take as fear of fear itself. Nicely written
December 12th, 2025 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
Although it seems meant for more literal interpretation I take as fear of fear itself. Nicely written
December 12th, 2025 04:28
The Magician.
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor in this poem and a secret to consuming and expelling dark forces. Well written in good rhyme and meter. Loved it
December 11th, 2025 07:51
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor in this poem and a secret to consuming and expelling dark forces. Well written in good rhyme and meter. Loved it
December 11th, 2025 07:51
Nuclear spark.
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem. Where as in western civilization the snake is seen as sinister in other cultures it is seen as wise and powerful often depicted as a god. Nicely written
December 9th, 2025 20:14
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem. Where as in western civilization the snake is seen as sinister in other cultures it is seen as wise and powerful often depicted as a god. Nicely written
December 9th, 2025 20:14
The Rising Phoenix!
sorenbarrett said:
So identifiable the musings and reflections of the mind are like a mirrored room on all sides ceiling and floor with endless reflections leading to infinity on all sides. A good read
December 8th, 2025 06:41
sorenbarrett said:
So identifiable the musings and reflections of the mind are like a mirrored room on all sides ceiling and floor with endless reflections leading to infinity on all sides. A good read
December 8th, 2025 06:41
In stillness.
sorenbarrett said:
There needs to be quiet and a stillness to hear the whispers of the inner self. A lovely poem of listening in the dark. Well done
December 7th, 2025 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
There needs to be quiet and a stillness to hear the whispers of the inner self. A lovely poem of listening in the dark. Well done
December 7th, 2025 04:01
Icarus!
Katie B. said:
Nice reflection of life history and lessons learned. Good read, nice write.
December 5th, 2025 05:34
Katie B. said:
Nice reflection of life history and lessons learned. Good read, nice write.
December 5th, 2025 05:34
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