Comments received on poems by Andrew Deaton
Divine Vision
sorenbarrett said:
Paradoxes presented in this poem. Nicely worded it has a religious bent calling for recognition.
October 29th, 2025 12:25
sorenbarrett said:
Paradoxes presented in this poem. Nicely worded it has a religious bent calling for recognition.
October 29th, 2025 12:25
We are!
sorenbarrett said:
The message comes through clearly on this poem. I have long questioned the spectrum of consciousness and awareness, where both begin and end and how they occur, where do they reside and what they are dependent on. A good write nicely done
October 27th, 2025 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
The message comes through clearly on this poem. I have long questioned the spectrum of consciousness and awareness, where both begin and end and how they occur, where do they reside and what they are dependent on. A good write nicely done
October 27th, 2025 03:57
When within.
Andrew Deaton said:
Thank you so much. You are my biggest fan and I yours. Wait until you see my newest 1.
October 26th, 2025 18:23
Andrew Deaton said:
Thank you so much. You are my biggest fan and I yours. Wait until you see my newest 1.
October 26th, 2025 18:23
When within.
sorenbarrett said:
Almost Taoist it is a great play on words and philosophy. Nicely done
October 26th, 2025 15:17
sorenbarrett said:
Almost Taoist it is a great play on words and philosophy. Nicely done
October 26th, 2025 15:17
Sweet Sorrow
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed we all have and live on borrowed time. A lovely write of gratitude.
October 23rd, 2025 22:04
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed we all have and live on borrowed time. A lovely write of gratitude.
October 23rd, 2025 22:04
Eternal Flower
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful attitude displayed in this write where with rhyme one is thankful for problems seen as an exercise to make one stronger. Lovely
October 20th, 2025 08:35
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful attitude displayed in this write where with rhyme one is thankful for problems seen as an exercise to make one stronger. Lovely
October 20th, 2025 08:35
Heaven and Hell.
sorenbarrett said:
There is a balance in all things and there could be no heaven with a hell to compare it to. Nicely written
October 20th, 2025 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
There is a balance in all things and there could be no heaven with a hell to compare it to. Nicely written
October 20th, 2025 04:41
New form.
sorenbarrett said:
The phoenix the Christ, the Adonis the resurrection we all have rebirths in one way or another. Nicely written
October 18th, 2025 14:57
sorenbarrett said:
The phoenix the Christ, the Adonis the resurrection we all have rebirths in one way or another. Nicely written
October 18th, 2025 14:57
Acceptance!
sorenbarrett said:
Wise words of peace and happiness. Lovely write
October 17th, 2025 10:44
sorenbarrett said:
Wise words of peace and happiness. Lovely write
October 17th, 2025 10:44
Dirty little vixen!
sorenbarrett said:
I\'m not quite sure of the rating of this particular poem implicit not explicit it sits on the line. A fun read it is erotic not exotic, sensual, consensual, maybe not sensible. Just good clean fun in a dirty way. Loved it
October 16th, 2025 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
I\'m not quite sure of the rating of this particular poem implicit not explicit it sits on the line. A fun read it is erotic not exotic, sensual, consensual, maybe not sensible. Just good clean fun in a dirty way. Loved it
October 16th, 2025 04:37
The word.
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording in this poem of rhyme. We do happen through thought in our conception and action, as a man thinketh so is he. An inverse of Descartes adage and deduction Ergo cogito sum. The Janus face. Divine spirit indeed we are our own god, we create, destroy, in the old saying I am that I am, name of God. A wonderful write
October 14th, 2025 08:57
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording in this poem of rhyme. We do happen through thought in our conception and action, as a man thinketh so is he. An inverse of Descartes adage and deduction Ergo cogito sum. The Janus face. Divine spirit indeed we are our own god, we create, destroy, in the old saying I am that I am, name of God. A wonderful write
October 14th, 2025 08:57
Duality!
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply philosophical, cleverly worded and rhymed it simply is poetic. A fave
October 14th, 2025 03:41
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply philosophical, cleverly worded and rhymed it simply is poetic. A fave
October 14th, 2025 03:41
Wanted Man.
sorenbarrett said:
Clever with nice rhyme this poem is a religious proclamation of faith. Nicely done
October 12th, 2025 12:33
sorenbarrett said:
Clever with nice rhyme this poem is a religious proclamation of faith. Nicely done
October 12th, 2025 12:33
S.T.I.
gray0328 said:
Well Done sir hit home. My sobriety date 03/28/2020. Blessed
October 12th, 2025 05:52
gray0328 said:
Well Done sir hit home. My sobriety date 03/28/2020. Blessed
October 12th, 2025 05:52
S.T.I.
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very well thought out write, making it entertaining to read
October 10th, 2025 20:33
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very well thought out write, making it entertaining to read
October 10th, 2025 20:33
S.T.I.
sorenbarrett said:
Clever play on anacronyms to give an injection of interest to the read. It is a fun read
October 10th, 2025 20:23
sorenbarrett said:
Clever play on anacronyms to give an injection of interest to the read. It is a fun read
October 10th, 2025 20:23
