Comments received on poems by Andrew Deaton
To the core.
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem. How strong is a rock? Does it strike back? It without desire harms the hand of who strikes it. Stoic is good
November 19th, 2025 08:05
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem. How strong is a rock? Does it strike back? It without desire harms the hand of who strikes it. Stoic is good
November 19th, 2025 08:05
Kybalion
sorenbarrett said:
A good deal of thought went into this poem. It holds and broadcasts a secret of the universe well kept and hidden behind what seems to be opposites but in reality is unity. A lovely write and a fave
November 18th, 2025 05:44
sorenbarrett said:
A good deal of thought went into this poem. It holds and broadcasts a secret of the universe well kept and hidden behind what seems to be opposites but in reality is unity. A lovely write and a fave
November 18th, 2025 05:44
No resentment.
sorenbarrett said:
Expectations are premeditated resentments.\" a great line that has more truth in it than most would care to say. A lovely poem with a great message
November 16th, 2025 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
Expectations are premeditated resentments.\" a great line that has more truth in it than most would care to say. A lovely poem with a great message
November 16th, 2025 03:58
Endeavor!
sorenbarrett said:
A play with words in poetic format. Well written
November 13th, 2025 19:42
sorenbarrett said:
A play with words in poetic format. Well written
November 13th, 2025 19:42
Mother
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tribute and acknowledgement of the special love between a mother and her child. Touching and something that we all share, one of the few commonalities we have. Loved it
November 7th, 2025 20:24
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tribute and acknowledgement of the special love between a mother and her child. Touching and something that we all share, one of the few commonalities we have. Loved it
November 7th, 2025 20:24
God\'s Magnum opus!
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful painting in words of nature in the sky. Well done
November 6th, 2025 08:24
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful painting in words of nature in the sky. Well done
November 6th, 2025 08:24
Self harm.
sorenbarrett said:
Strong needs leave one to be vulnerable to abuse. A lovely write
November 4th, 2025 20:04
sorenbarrett said:
Strong needs leave one to be vulnerable to abuse. A lovely write
November 4th, 2025 20:04
Chatter in the scowl.
sorenbarrett said:
All things happen for the best, adversity gives strength, pain yields appreciation, deprivation brings patience. A wonderful work
November 3rd, 2025 20:45
sorenbarrett said:
All things happen for the best, adversity gives strength, pain yields appreciation, deprivation brings patience. A wonderful work
November 3rd, 2025 20:45
The agreement.
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting how we are our own worst critics impregnated with the ideas of parents and society we accept and rebel. A good poem with a message.
November 2nd, 2025 08:34
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting how we are our own worst critics impregnated with the ideas of parents and society we accept and rebel. A good poem with a message.
November 2nd, 2025 08:34
The questionable question.
Rocky Lagou said:
I love how oxymoronic this poem seems from the exterior. “Seeing without eyes.” But it’s truly a deeper understanding that not all will comprehend. I love this.
November 1st, 2025 09:41
Rocky Lagou said:
I love how oxymoronic this poem seems from the exterior. “Seeing without eyes.” But it’s truly a deeper understanding that not all will comprehend. I love this.
November 1st, 2025 09:41
The questionable question.
sorenbarrett said:
I love the presentation of this poem in the form of an enigma that challenges the brain with contradictions and well paired opposites. Loved it.
November 1st, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
I love the presentation of this poem in the form of an enigma that challenges the brain with contradictions and well paired opposites. Loved it.
November 1st, 2025 04:30
Divine Vision
sorenbarrett said:
Paradoxes presented in this poem. Nicely worded it has a religious bent calling for recognition.
October 29th, 2025 12:25
sorenbarrett said:
Paradoxes presented in this poem. Nicely worded it has a religious bent calling for recognition.
October 29th, 2025 12:25
We are!
sorenbarrett said:
The message comes through clearly on this poem. I have long questioned the spectrum of consciousness and awareness, where both begin and end and how they occur, where do they reside and what they are dependent on. A good write nicely done
October 27th, 2025 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
The message comes through clearly on this poem. I have long questioned the spectrum of consciousness and awareness, where both begin and end and how they occur, where do they reside and what they are dependent on. A good write nicely done
October 27th, 2025 03:57
When within.
Andrew Deaton said:
Thank you so much. You are my biggest fan and I yours. Wait until you see my newest 1.
October 26th, 2025 18:23
Andrew Deaton said:
Thank you so much. You are my biggest fan and I yours. Wait until you see my newest 1.
October 26th, 2025 18:23
When within.
sorenbarrett said:
Almost Taoist it is a great play on words and philosophy. Nicely done
October 26th, 2025 15:17
sorenbarrett said:
Almost Taoist it is a great play on words and philosophy. Nicely done
October 26th, 2025 15:17
Sweet Sorrow
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed we all have and live on borrowed time. A lovely write of gratitude.
October 23rd, 2025 22:04
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed we all have and live on borrowed time. A lovely write of gratitude.
October 23rd, 2025 22:04
Eternal Flower
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful attitude displayed in this write where with rhyme one is thankful for problems seen as an exercise to make one stronger. Lovely
October 20th, 2025 08:35
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful attitude displayed in this write where with rhyme one is thankful for problems seen as an exercise to make one stronger. Lovely
October 20th, 2025 08:35
Heaven and Hell.
sorenbarrett said:
There is a balance in all things and there could be no heaven with a hell to compare it to. Nicely written
October 20th, 2025 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
There is a balance in all things and there could be no heaven with a hell to compare it to. Nicely written
October 20th, 2025 04:41
New form.
sorenbarrett said:
The phoenix the Christ, the Adonis the resurrection we all have rebirths in one way or another. Nicely written
October 18th, 2025 14:57
sorenbarrett said:
The phoenix the Christ, the Adonis the resurrection we all have rebirths in one way or another. Nicely written
October 18th, 2025 14:57
Acceptance!
sorenbarrett said:
Wise words of peace and happiness. Lovely write
October 17th, 2025 10:44
sorenbarrett said:
Wise words of peace and happiness. Lovely write
October 17th, 2025 10:44
Dirty little vixen!
sorenbarrett said:
I\'m not quite sure of the rating of this particular poem implicit not explicit it sits on the line. A fun read it is erotic not exotic, sensual, consensual, maybe not sensible. Just good clean fun in a dirty way. Loved it
October 16th, 2025 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
I\'m not quite sure of the rating of this particular poem implicit not explicit it sits on the line. A fun read it is erotic not exotic, sensual, consensual, maybe not sensible. Just good clean fun in a dirty way. Loved it
October 16th, 2025 04:37
The word.
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording in this poem of rhyme. We do happen through thought in our conception and action, as a man thinketh so is he. An inverse of Descartes adage and deduction Ergo cogito sum. The Janus face. Divine spirit indeed we are our own god, we create, destroy, in the old saying I am that I am, name of God. A wonderful write
October 14th, 2025 08:57
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording in this poem of rhyme. We do happen through thought in our conception and action, as a man thinketh so is he. An inverse of Descartes adage and deduction Ergo cogito sum. The Janus face. Divine spirit indeed we are our own god, we create, destroy, in the old saying I am that I am, name of God. A wonderful write
October 14th, 2025 08:57
Duality!
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply philosophical, cleverly worded and rhymed it simply is poetic. A fave
October 14th, 2025 03:41
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply philosophical, cleverly worded and rhymed it simply is poetic. A fave
October 14th, 2025 03:41
Wanted Man.
sorenbarrett said:
Clever with nice rhyme this poem is a religious proclamation of faith. Nicely done
October 12th, 2025 12:33
sorenbarrett said:
Clever with nice rhyme this poem is a religious proclamation of faith. Nicely done
October 12th, 2025 12:33
S.T.I.
gray0328 said:
Well Done sir hit home. My sobriety date 03/28/2020. Blessed
October 12th, 2025 05:52
gray0328 said:
Well Done sir hit home. My sobriety date 03/28/2020. Blessed
October 12th, 2025 05:52
S.T.I.
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very well thought out write, making it entertaining to read
October 10th, 2025 20:33
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very well thought out write, making it entertaining to read
October 10th, 2025 20:33
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