Comments received on poems by Andrew Deaton
Heavens Plate!
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely birthday wish to a mother departed. Nicely written in celebration and memory. Well done
September 29th, 2026 21:06
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely birthday wish to a mother departed. Nicely written in celebration and memory. Well done
September 29th, 2026 21:06
Heavens Plate!
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Andrew,
What a beautiful and endearing poem to celebrate your mother\'s birthday. Seventy eight years young, she must be a wonderful mother. Please wish her a happy birthday from me. Once again, a lovely, lovely passsage of poetry.
Fond regards,
Tony.
September 29th, 2026 20:50
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Andrew,
What a beautiful and endearing poem to celebrate your mother\'s birthday. Seventy eight years young, she must be a wonderful mother. Please wish her a happy birthday from me. Once again, a lovely, lovely passsage of poetry.
Fond regards,
Tony.
September 29th, 2026 20:50
Heavens Plate!
Sanjana Harnandan said:
and I am so sorry for ur lost I really am
September 29th, 2026 20:44
Sanjana Harnandan said:
and I am so sorry for ur lost I really am
September 29th, 2026 20:44
The shine.
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of encouragement to have people let out the best part of them. Well written
July 23rd, 2026 18:54
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of encouragement to have people let out the best part of them. Well written
July 23rd, 2026 18:54
The question.
sorenbarrett said:
So Descartesian The questions all funnel down to the last and all we can know is we think therefor we are. Well written
June 18th, 2026 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
So Descartesian The questions all funnel down to the last and all we can know is we think therefor we are. Well written
June 18th, 2026 04:44
What do you see?
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely point of view portrayed in this poem where looking into another\'s eyes is looking at god. Indeed we are all god being creator, living in a present of eternity and suffering for our sins. A powerful write
May 28th, 2026 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely point of view portrayed in this poem where looking into another\'s eyes is looking at god. Indeed we are all god being creator, living in a present of eternity and suffering for our sins. A powerful write
May 28th, 2026 04:00
I am the all.
sorenbarrett said:
The everything the all of all there is. Well written
May 13th, 2026 17:36
sorenbarrett said:
The everything the all of all there is. Well written
May 13th, 2026 17:36
Mind over matter.
sorenbarrett said:
A clever maneuver of words weaves meaning at different levels into this poem. Lovely
February 20th, 2026 19:29
sorenbarrett said:
A clever maneuver of words weaves meaning at different levels into this poem. Lovely
February 20th, 2026 19:29
To my boo.
sorenbarrett said:
A plea to a relationship to continue. Nicely versed this poem plays out in rhyme
February 8th, 2026 03:23
sorenbarrett said:
A plea to a relationship to continue. Nicely versed this poem plays out in rhyme
February 8th, 2026 03:23
Ebe and flow.
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a very catchy rhyme and meter to it that make it flow well. Nicely done
January 23rd, 2026 05:13
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a very catchy rhyme and meter to it that make it flow well. Nicely done
January 23rd, 2026 05:13
The road of covenant.
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic list of commandments to live by to grow by and to better by. Well written
January 12th, 2026 03:42
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic list of commandments to live by to grow by and to better by. Well written
January 12th, 2026 03:42
White dove.
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic pledge and promise offered. Nicely written
January 10th, 2026 09:50
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic pledge and promise offered. Nicely written
January 10th, 2026 09:50
Twin souls.
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of acknowledgement that two were meant for each other. Nicely written
January 9th, 2026 20:53
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of acknowledgement that two were meant for each other. Nicely written
January 9th, 2026 20:53
The muchness.
sorenbarrett said:
Passion, sex, seduction all in this poem. Nicely done
January 7th, 2026 16:54
sorenbarrett said:
Passion, sex, seduction all in this poem. Nicely done
January 7th, 2026 16:54
Palindrome
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and a fun read. This one had to be read twice to be believed. Well done.
January 7th, 2026 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and a fun read. This one had to be read twice to be believed. Well done.
January 7th, 2026 03:50
Forgive my past.
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic plea for love and forgiveness of past errors. A confession from the past used as a foundation of repentance for future building of a more secure relationship. Nicely constructed with rhyme and good flow. Well done
January 6th, 2026 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic plea for love and forgiveness of past errors. A confession from the past used as a foundation of repentance for future building of a more secure relationship. Nicely constructed with rhyme and good flow. Well done
January 6th, 2026 03:50
Four horses.
sorenbarrett said:
So many hidden signs in this poem the obvious and subtle from the cross to the pine cone. Well done
December 28th, 2025 14:48
sorenbarrett said:
So many hidden signs in this poem the obvious and subtle from the cross to the pine cone. Well done
December 28th, 2025 14:48
Precious gifts for all.
sorenbarrett said:
So many religions promise salvation but only their way. A great write of the surrender of will. Nicely done Happy Holidays
December 24th, 2025 15:39
sorenbarrett said:
So many religions promise salvation but only their way. A great write of the surrender of will. Nicely done Happy Holidays
December 24th, 2025 15:39
Eternally mine!
sorenbarrett said:
A declaration of love and a pledge of fidelity until the end. A lovely write
December 23rd, 2025 09:26
sorenbarrett said:
A declaration of love and a pledge of fidelity until the end. A lovely write
December 23rd, 2025 09:26
Precious Duo!
sorenbarrett said:
The expression of love from a father to daughters heard in this poem. i know the feeling having daughters myself. There is a sense of joy that seeps out of this poem.
December 20th, 2025 03:42
sorenbarrett said:
The expression of love from a father to daughters heard in this poem. i know the feeling having daughters myself. There is a sense of joy that seeps out of this poem.
December 20th, 2025 03:42
Twins!
sorenbarrett said:
A father\'s blessing poetically set. There is little that can equal the joy of fatherhood or motherhood. And with that birth begins a life that will know no further rest. Very nicely written
December 19th, 2025 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
A father\'s blessing poetically set. There is little that can equal the joy of fatherhood or motherhood. And with that birth begins a life that will know no further rest. Very nicely written
December 19th, 2025 04:37
Twins!
Demar Desu said:
Congratulations!!! Haha I was expecting mama to get a couple more lines in geez it can’t be easy to give birth twice in a row. Hoping for good health for you and your family. Good poem.
December 19th, 2025 02:39
Demar Desu said:
Congratulations!!! Haha I was expecting mama to get a couple more lines in geez it can’t be easy to give birth twice in a row. Hoping for good health for you and your family. Good poem.
December 19th, 2025 02:39
As i lay.
Paul Bell said:
This is me on a Monday morning, dead to the world.
By Wednesday, still comatose.
Come Friday, totally resuscitated.
Okay, her mother is coming to stay for the weekend, just died.
December 18th, 2025 12:04
Paul Bell said:
This is me on a Monday morning, dead to the world.
By Wednesday, still comatose.
Come Friday, totally resuscitated.
Okay, her mother is coming to stay for the weekend, just died.
December 18th, 2025 12:04
As i lay.
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ve heard of being dragged out of this life kicking and screaming but this seems an example of staying no matter what. A fun read
December 18th, 2025 11:58
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ve heard of being dragged out of this life kicking and screaming but this seems an example of staying no matter what. A fun read
December 18th, 2025 11:58
7777
sorenbarrett said:
This poem works of the numerological sense of special magic properties of numbers and seven has always be a special and magical number even more so if tripled it this poem taken a step further. Well done.
December 18th, 2025 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
This poem works of the numerological sense of special magic properties of numbers and seven has always be a special and magical number even more so if tripled it this poem taken a step further. Well done.
December 18th, 2025 03:54
Fresh start.
sorenbarrett said:
The comparison to a game is nicely taken and the battle is on. Well worded to apply to the spirit as well.
December 16th, 2025 09:19
sorenbarrett said:
The comparison to a game is nicely taken and the battle is on. Well worded to apply to the spirit as well.
December 16th, 2025 09:19
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