Comments received on poems by Andrew Deaton
The knots.
sorenbarrett said:
Clever word play make this poem the use of homophones works well. A knotty not it is indeed. Good advise as well in this prayer or supplication. Loved it a fave
November 29th, 2025 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
Clever word play make this poem the use of homophones works well. A knotty not it is indeed. Good advise as well in this prayer or supplication. Loved it a fave
November 29th, 2025 03:55
The knots.
orchidee said:
Good write A. I\'m not saying this is not a good poem, cos it is! You got me at it now - those \'nots\'. lol.
Heehee there\'s the confusion of using double negatives, e.g. I\'ve not got nothing - meaning I have got something. lol.
November 29th, 2025 03:37
orchidee said:
Good write A. I\'m not saying this is not a good poem, cos it is! You got me at it now - those \'nots\'. lol.
Heehee there\'s the confusion of using double negatives, e.g. I\'ve not got nothing - meaning I have got something. lol.
November 29th, 2025 03:37
Part of my story.
sorenbarrett said:
Circles in this poem whether life or relationships all things go in circles where the end is the beginning. Nicely written with good rhyme and a sense of fun as well as romanticism in it. Lovely
November 27th, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
Circles in this poem whether life or relationships all things go in circles where the end is the beginning. Nicely written with good rhyme and a sense of fun as well as romanticism in it. Lovely
November 27th, 2025 04:09
Love thy will.
Paul Bell said:
Not enough love kicking around at the moment, the doom and gloom people are on overtime to bring us down.
They should read your poem for enlightenment.
November 26th, 2025 09:50
Paul Bell said:
Not enough love kicking around at the moment, the doom and gloom people are on overtime to bring us down.
They should read your poem for enlightenment.
November 26th, 2025 09:50
Love thy will.
sorenbarrett said:
So well worded it calls out to the reader. Its antithesis lies in Alister Crowley\'s words \"There is no law, do what thou wilt\" \"Do what thou wilt shall be the whole of the law\" A wonderful write and a fave
November 26th, 2025 06:27
sorenbarrett said:
So well worded it calls out to the reader. Its antithesis lies in Alister Crowley\'s words \"There is no law, do what thou wilt\" \"Do what thou wilt shall be the whole of the law\" A wonderful write and a fave
November 26th, 2025 06:27
Gods great work!
sorenbarrett said:
There is a clear pledge of love in this poem and a declaration of dedication. Nicely written
November 25th, 2025 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
There is a clear pledge of love in this poem and a declaration of dedication. Nicely written
November 25th, 2025 04:10
Love is blessed.
PerditaRose said:
At first I thought this was for a lover, now I\'m thinking it\'s for a newborn child. It\'s beautiful.
November 23rd, 2025 06:22
PerditaRose said:
At first I thought this was for a lover, now I\'m thinking it\'s for a newborn child. It\'s beautiful.
November 23rd, 2025 06:22
Love is blessed.
sorenbarrett said:
A truth spoken in poetic form. One can not give what one does not have and to love others one must love themselves. Nicely stated
November 23rd, 2025 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
A truth spoken in poetic form. One can not give what one does not have and to love others one must love themselves. Nicely stated
November 23rd, 2025 04:23
10:10
orchidee said:
Good write A. How are you now? It\'s 10:11 now. Heehee.
November 23rd, 2025 03:22
orchidee said:
Good write A. How are you now? It\'s 10:11 now. Heehee.
November 23rd, 2025 03:22
10:10
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of religious dedication and poetic pledge. Well done
November 22nd, 2025 19:39
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of religious dedication and poetic pledge. Well done
November 22nd, 2025 19:39
To Father.
sorenbarrett said:
There seems a play her on the word father as in one\'s father or God. This carries through the poem and gives it a sense of humor so to speak. Well done
November 21st, 2025 14:32
sorenbarrett said:
There seems a play her on the word father as in one\'s father or God. This carries through the poem and gives it a sense of humor so to speak. Well done
November 21st, 2025 14:32
To the core.
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem. How strong is a rock? Does it strike back? It without desire harms the hand of who strikes it. Stoic is good
November 19th, 2025 08:05
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem. How strong is a rock? Does it strike back? It without desire harms the hand of who strikes it. Stoic is good
November 19th, 2025 08:05
Kybalion
sorenbarrett said:
A good deal of thought went into this poem. It holds and broadcasts a secret of the universe well kept and hidden behind what seems to be opposites but in reality is unity. A lovely write and a fave
November 18th, 2025 05:44
sorenbarrett said:
A good deal of thought went into this poem. It holds and broadcasts a secret of the universe well kept and hidden behind what seems to be opposites but in reality is unity. A lovely write and a fave
November 18th, 2025 05:44
No resentment.
sorenbarrett said:
Expectations are premeditated resentments.\" a great line that has more truth in it than most would care to say. A lovely poem with a great message
November 16th, 2025 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
Expectations are premeditated resentments.\" a great line that has more truth in it than most would care to say. A lovely poem with a great message
November 16th, 2025 03:58
Endeavor!
sorenbarrett said:
A play with words in poetic format. Well written
November 13th, 2025 19:42
sorenbarrett said:
A play with words in poetic format. Well written
November 13th, 2025 19:42
Mother
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tribute and acknowledgement of the special love between a mother and her child. Touching and something that we all share, one of the few commonalities we have. Loved it
November 7th, 2025 20:24
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tribute and acknowledgement of the special love between a mother and her child. Touching and something that we all share, one of the few commonalities we have. Loved it
November 7th, 2025 20:24
God\'s Magnum opus!
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful painting in words of nature in the sky. Well done
November 6th, 2025 08:24
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful painting in words of nature in the sky. Well done
November 6th, 2025 08:24
Self harm.
sorenbarrett said:
Strong needs leave one to be vulnerable to abuse. A lovely write
November 4th, 2025 20:04
sorenbarrett said:
Strong needs leave one to be vulnerable to abuse. A lovely write
November 4th, 2025 20:04
Chatter in the scowl.
sorenbarrett said:
All things happen for the best, adversity gives strength, pain yields appreciation, deprivation brings patience. A wonderful work
November 3rd, 2025 20:45
sorenbarrett said:
All things happen for the best, adversity gives strength, pain yields appreciation, deprivation brings patience. A wonderful work
November 3rd, 2025 20:45
The agreement.
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting how we are our own worst critics impregnated with the ideas of parents and society we accept and rebel. A good poem with a message.
November 2nd, 2025 08:34
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting how we are our own worst critics impregnated with the ideas of parents and society we accept and rebel. A good poem with a message.
November 2nd, 2025 08:34
The questionable question.
Rocky Lagou said:
I love how oxymoronic this poem seems from the exterior. “Seeing without eyes.” But it’s truly a deeper understanding that not all will comprehend. I love this.
November 1st, 2025 09:41
Rocky Lagou said:
I love how oxymoronic this poem seems from the exterior. “Seeing without eyes.” But it’s truly a deeper understanding that not all will comprehend. I love this.
November 1st, 2025 09:41
The questionable question.
sorenbarrett said:
I love the presentation of this poem in the form of an enigma that challenges the brain with contradictions and well paired opposites. Loved it.
November 1st, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
I love the presentation of this poem in the form of an enigma that challenges the brain with contradictions and well paired opposites. Loved it.
November 1st, 2025 04:30
Divine Vision
sorenbarrett said:
Paradoxes presented in this poem. Nicely worded it has a religious bent calling for recognition.
October 29th, 2025 12:25
sorenbarrett said:
Paradoxes presented in this poem. Nicely worded it has a religious bent calling for recognition.
October 29th, 2025 12:25
We are!
sorenbarrett said:
The message comes through clearly on this poem. I have long questioned the spectrum of consciousness and awareness, where both begin and end and how they occur, where do they reside and what they are dependent on. A good write nicely done
October 27th, 2025 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
The message comes through clearly on this poem. I have long questioned the spectrum of consciousness and awareness, where both begin and end and how they occur, where do they reside and what they are dependent on. A good write nicely done
October 27th, 2025 03:57
When within.
Andrew Deaton said:
Thank you so much. You are my biggest fan and I yours. Wait until you see my newest 1.
October 26th, 2025 18:23
Andrew Deaton said:
Thank you so much. You are my biggest fan and I yours. Wait until you see my newest 1.
October 26th, 2025 18:23
When within.
sorenbarrett said:
Almost Taoist it is a great play on words and philosophy. Nicely done
October 26th, 2025 15:17
sorenbarrett said:
Almost Taoist it is a great play on words and philosophy. Nicely done
October 26th, 2025 15:17
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