Comments received on poems by Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard



If Only Faith Would
sorenbarrett said:

Powerful and philosophical as well as political it cries out to humanity as a whole. Well done

January 19th, 2026 15:10

I AM the Iceberg
sorenbarrett said:

Here a metaphor of climate is equated with an emotional and mental aspect. Nicely worded it lays its path

January 18th, 2026 12:33

The Echo of the Iron Heel
sorenbarrett said:

Unfortunately all too true this poem is well rhymed and metered it has not only good flow but presents its message well. Great images as well it is a fave

January 17th, 2026 11:48

The Clockwork Glitch
sorenbarrett said:

Greed and power come into play in a land of supposed democracy. A sad situation. Nicely written

January 16th, 2026 20:45

The Script and the Scale
sorenbarrett said:

Having worked with doctors and seen the pharmaceutical reps heard the deals made, eaten their sandwiches and dinners, the paid lectures in exotic places to doctors and their families that sell the most, changing patients medications that work for the newly fabricated with higher profit margins I not only believe it but understand why a perfectly good medicine that has reached its patent end is discontinued. Members of the FDA are not supposed to hold stock in pharmaceutical companies that they rule on but there is nothing about their families of friends holding stock. A fave and a message that needs to reach more ears.

January 15th, 2026 15:07

LITURGY OF THE COLD AWAKENING
sorenbarrett said:

The ice has already begun to melt the climate has shifted Noah build your arc. A good read

January 14th, 2026 11:25

The Tale of the First Tardigrade Guide
sorenbarrett said:

As humans we have been negligent of other life forms seeing them as inferior yet we find that they are not just different than us. We have always had a problem with differences even in our own kind. Well written

January 13th, 2026 13:11

The Weight of the Unspoken Dance
sorenbarrett said:

It is the body language described in this poem that tells the whole story. And without saying it emotion is created which it is is left up to the reader, is it excitement, sexual tension, anger, annoyance, attraction? Well written

January 12th, 2026 04:20

Tardigrade Spirit
sorenbarrett said:

Life is amazing in its resilience and this poem dedicated to one of its forms that can withstand what others can not is a monument to a muse or spirit animal. One does not have to be a giant to be tough.

January 11th, 2026 12:58

The Debt Collector’s Crown
Demar Desu said:

The title is so fire

January 10th, 2026 20:50

The Debt Collector’s Crown
sorenbarrett said:

All people contain the same emotions but to different degrees a poem of prejudice, anger, hate well written

January 10th, 2026 12:16

The Architecture of the Gale
sorenbarrett said:

Such a motivating poem well worded and rhymed it is a fave

January 9th, 2026 11:32

TRIPTYCH OF THE UNHEARD, THE TWISTED, AND THE FREE
sorenbarrett said:

Power and control a struggle in any relationship where we verbally agree that each should be free to make their own decisions it never works that way. A lovely write

January 6th, 2026 11:23

The Great Shedding: A Trilogy of Reckoning, Release, and Renewal
Friendship said:

Well done, lots of sad scars, pain, and sorrow,

January 1st, 2026 17:41

The Great Shedding: A Trilogy of Reckoning, Release, and Renewal
sorenbarrett said:

Years leave their scars. Well done

January 1st, 2026 15:49

The Alchemist’s Exchange
sorenbarrett said:

So nicely worded a powerful poem that speaks to any that listen. Nicely done and a fave

December 28th, 2025 13:40

Absolutely NO
orchidee said:

Now you\'ve beat me to it! I was gonna do that \'No\' poem, being inspired by your \'Yes\' poem.
I will call it \'Yes and No\'. We won\'t know if we\'re coming or going! lol.

December 22nd, 2025 14:36

Absolutely NO
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of pent up emotion that explodes in a single word. A lovely write

December 22nd, 2025 11:08

Winter Solstice in Central Washington
sorenbarrett said:

A graphic carefully painted vivid image of a cold desolate and dark landscape emerges from this poem that marks this time of year in the northern hemisphere. Very nicely done

December 21st, 2025 04:29

FOR THE LOVE OF YES
orchidee said:

Erm, and now my next poem: \'No!\' lol.

December 20th, 2025 12:12

FOR THE LOVE OF YES
Katie B. said:

Very engaging, full of action. Very well written.

December 20th, 2025 04:12

FOR THE LOVE OF YES
sorenbarrett said:

A saying that I seldom hear. It is emphatic and strong in its enunciation and saying. A motivating poem, nicely said

December 20th, 2025 03:44

Snowflakes
sorenbarrett said:

A lovely comparison of the snowflake to a tiny dancer. Very well written and imaged

December 19th, 2025 16:02

The Kittitas Symphony: A Master Epic of the Gale
sorenbarrett said:

This poem brought some nostalgia having lived in Ellensburg in 1978 and 1979 while I worked on a Master\'s Degree. I remember the winds and and there my first son was born. It was much different back then but the weather remains the same. A fun read

December 17th, 2025 09:59

A Very Mismanaged Christmas Album (full of political parody)
sorenbarrett said:

A passal of poems of a seasonal and political nature which is metaphoric of what Christmas has become piled under commercialism where the very meaning is a raising stock price. Very nice

December 16th, 2025 04:00

The Big Book of Christmas Mishaps: 13 Wildly Wobbly Verses
sorenbarrett said:

Here is a series of Christmas shenanigans wrapped in rhyme. Perfect for the holidays just in time. Stories a whole selection a seasonal collection. Well done

December 15th, 2025 11:58

The Prince and the Forge
sorenbarrett said:

Hauntingly dark this poem speaks with controlled power as a ghost speaking from the shadows. Well written and a fave

December 14th, 2025 13:04

The Iron Answer and Zero-sum Strike
sorenbarrett said:

Well written with imagery and well painted

December 13th, 2025 12:45

The One Who Craves More
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of strong feeling and one that should be followed up upon. As for the sheep, they all end up at the same place, mutton chops. Well done

December 12th, 2025 11:10

The Imps of Yule Are At It Again
sorenbarrett said:

Cute and a great poem for this time of the year especially for children. Creative and inventive. Most lovely

December 11th, 2025 13:32

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