Comments received on poems by Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard
Fireproof Lies
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a tone of harshness and severity, it is cold and hard and feels old fashioned. Very nicely framed in a format of authority it demands rather than asks it orders and threatens. Well written
February 9th, 2026 11:44
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a tone of harshness and severity, it is cold and hard and feels old fashioned. Very nicely framed in a format of authority it demands rather than asks it orders and threatens. Well written
February 9th, 2026 11:44
The Horizon Call
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully worded it tells its tale well. A lovely piece
February 6th, 2026 11:54
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully worded it tells its tale well. A lovely piece
February 6th, 2026 11:54
A Toast to the Unseen
sorenbarrett said:
There should be many of those moments. As for me nearly all my moments are such. A lovely write
January 31st, 2026 12:16
sorenbarrett said:
There should be many of those moments. As for me nearly all my moments are such. A lovely write
January 31st, 2026 12:16
The Alchemist’s Grace
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely worded a poem well written and imaged. Well done
January 29th, 2026 14:17
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely worded a poem well written and imaged. Well done
January 29th, 2026 14:17
Redemption in the Ruins
sorenbarrett said:
The continual rhyme in this poem enhances the driving thought. Nicely done
January 29th, 2026 03:17
sorenbarrett said:
The continual rhyme in this poem enhances the driving thought. Nicely done
January 29th, 2026 03:17
Near Enough to Forget Myself
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting approach to infatuation from the viewpoint of the other side. Nicely written
January 26th, 2026 13:46
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting approach to infatuation from the viewpoint of the other side. Nicely written
January 26th, 2026 13:46
Kangaroo Court
sorenbarrett said:
Unfortunate but all to true. Even if innocent lawyer\'s fees, smeared image and time lost. When found guilty worse yet fines, shame and imprisonment. Judged by one\'s peers that are already biased, by a judge worse yet. The uneducated, poor, and marginalized doomed to a system made for the rich and slippery. Nicely written. I don\'t have the answer and it bothers me.
January 25th, 2026 14:49
sorenbarrett said:
Unfortunate but all to true. Even if innocent lawyer\'s fees, smeared image and time lost. When found guilty worse yet fines, shame and imprisonment. Judged by one\'s peers that are already biased, by a judge worse yet. The uneducated, poor, and marginalized doomed to a system made for the rich and slippery. Nicely written. I don\'t have the answer and it bothers me.
January 25th, 2026 14:49
If Only Faith Would
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and philosophical as well as political it cries out to humanity as a whole. Well done
January 19th, 2026 15:10
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and philosophical as well as political it cries out to humanity as a whole. Well done
January 19th, 2026 15:10
I AM the Iceberg
sorenbarrett said:
Here a metaphor of climate is equated with an emotional and mental aspect. Nicely worded it lays its path
January 18th, 2026 12:33
sorenbarrett said:
Here a metaphor of climate is equated with an emotional and mental aspect. Nicely worded it lays its path
January 18th, 2026 12:33
The Echo of the Iron Heel
sorenbarrett said:
Unfortunately all too true this poem is well rhymed and metered it has not only good flow but presents its message well. Great images as well it is a fave
January 17th, 2026 11:48
sorenbarrett said:
Unfortunately all too true this poem is well rhymed and metered it has not only good flow but presents its message well. Great images as well it is a fave
January 17th, 2026 11:48
The Clockwork Glitch
sorenbarrett said:
Greed and power come into play in a land of supposed democracy. A sad situation. Nicely written
January 16th, 2026 20:45
sorenbarrett said:
Greed and power come into play in a land of supposed democracy. A sad situation. Nicely written
January 16th, 2026 20:45
The Script and the Scale
sorenbarrett said:
Having worked with doctors and seen the pharmaceutical reps heard the deals made, eaten their sandwiches and dinners, the paid lectures in exotic places to doctors and their families that sell the most, changing patients medications that work for the newly fabricated with higher profit margins I not only believe it but understand why a perfectly good medicine that has reached its patent end is discontinued. Members of the FDA are not supposed to hold stock in pharmaceutical companies that they rule on but there is nothing about their families of friends holding stock. A fave and a message that needs to reach more ears.
January 15th, 2026 15:07
sorenbarrett said:
Having worked with doctors and seen the pharmaceutical reps heard the deals made, eaten their sandwiches and dinners, the paid lectures in exotic places to doctors and their families that sell the most, changing patients medications that work for the newly fabricated with higher profit margins I not only believe it but understand why a perfectly good medicine that has reached its patent end is discontinued. Members of the FDA are not supposed to hold stock in pharmaceutical companies that they rule on but there is nothing about their families of friends holding stock. A fave and a message that needs to reach more ears.
January 15th, 2026 15:07
LITURGY OF THE COLD AWAKENING
sorenbarrett said:
The ice has already begun to melt the climate has shifted Noah build your arc. A good read
January 14th, 2026 11:25
sorenbarrett said:
The ice has already begun to melt the climate has shifted Noah build your arc. A good read
January 14th, 2026 11:25
The Tale of the First Tardigrade Guide
sorenbarrett said:
As humans we have been negligent of other life forms seeing them as inferior yet we find that they are not just different than us. We have always had a problem with differences even in our own kind. Well written
January 13th, 2026 13:11
sorenbarrett said:
As humans we have been negligent of other life forms seeing them as inferior yet we find that they are not just different than us. We have always had a problem with differences even in our own kind. Well written
January 13th, 2026 13:11
The Weight of the Unspoken Dance
sorenbarrett said:
It is the body language described in this poem that tells the whole story. And without saying it emotion is created which it is is left up to the reader, is it excitement, sexual tension, anger, annoyance, attraction? Well written
January 12th, 2026 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
It is the body language described in this poem that tells the whole story. And without saying it emotion is created which it is is left up to the reader, is it excitement, sexual tension, anger, annoyance, attraction? Well written
January 12th, 2026 04:20
Tardigrade Spirit
sorenbarrett said:
Life is amazing in its resilience and this poem dedicated to one of its forms that can withstand what others can not is a monument to a muse or spirit animal. One does not have to be a giant to be tough.
January 11th, 2026 12:58
sorenbarrett said:
Life is amazing in its resilience and this poem dedicated to one of its forms that can withstand what others can not is a monument to a muse or spirit animal. One does not have to be a giant to be tough.
January 11th, 2026 12:58
The Debt Collector’s Crown
sorenbarrett said:
All people contain the same emotions but to different degrees a poem of prejudice, anger, hate well written
January 10th, 2026 12:16
sorenbarrett said:
All people contain the same emotions but to different degrees a poem of prejudice, anger, hate well written
January 10th, 2026 12:16
The Architecture of the Gale
sorenbarrett said:
Such a motivating poem well worded and rhymed it is a fave
January 9th, 2026 11:32
sorenbarrett said:
Such a motivating poem well worded and rhymed it is a fave
January 9th, 2026 11:32
TRIPTYCH OF THE UNHEARD, THE TWISTED, AND THE FREE
sorenbarrett said:
Power and control a struggle in any relationship where we verbally agree that each should be free to make their own decisions it never works that way. A lovely write
January 6th, 2026 11:23
sorenbarrett said:
Power and control a struggle in any relationship where we verbally agree that each should be free to make their own decisions it never works that way. A lovely write
January 6th, 2026 11:23
The Great Shedding: A Trilogy of Reckoning, Release, and Renewal
Friendship said:
Well done, lots of sad scars, pain, and sorrow,
January 1st, 2026 17:41
Friendship said:
Well done, lots of sad scars, pain, and sorrow,
January 1st, 2026 17:41
The Great Shedding: A Trilogy of Reckoning, Release, and Renewal
sorenbarrett said:
Years leave their scars. Well done
January 1st, 2026 15:49
sorenbarrett said:
Years leave their scars. Well done
January 1st, 2026 15:49
The Alchemist’s Exchange
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely worded a powerful poem that speaks to any that listen. Nicely done and a fave
December 28th, 2025 13:40
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely worded a powerful poem that speaks to any that listen. Nicely done and a fave
December 28th, 2025 13:40
Absolutely NO
orchidee said:
Now you\'ve beat me to it! I was gonna do that \'No\' poem, being inspired by your \'Yes\' poem.
I will call it \'Yes and No\'. We won\'t know if we\'re coming or going! lol.
December 22nd, 2025 14:36
orchidee said:
Now you\'ve beat me to it! I was gonna do that \'No\' poem, being inspired by your \'Yes\' poem.
I will call it \'Yes and No\'. We won\'t know if we\'re coming or going! lol.
December 22nd, 2025 14:36
Absolutely NO
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of pent up emotion that explodes in a single word. A lovely write
December 22nd, 2025 11:08
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of pent up emotion that explodes in a single word. A lovely write
December 22nd, 2025 11:08
Winter Solstice in Central Washington
sorenbarrett said:
A graphic carefully painted vivid image of a cold desolate and dark landscape emerges from this poem that marks this time of year in the northern hemisphere. Very nicely done
December 21st, 2025 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
A graphic carefully painted vivid image of a cold desolate and dark landscape emerges from this poem that marks this time of year in the northern hemisphere. Very nicely done
December 21st, 2025 04:29
FOR THE LOVE OF YES
Katie B. said:
Very engaging, full of action. Very well written.
December 20th, 2025 04:12
Katie B. said:
Very engaging, full of action. Very well written.
December 20th, 2025 04:12
FOR THE LOVE OF YES
sorenbarrett said:
A saying that I seldom hear. It is emphatic and strong in its enunciation and saying. A motivating poem, nicely said
December 20th, 2025 03:44
sorenbarrett said:
A saying that I seldom hear. It is emphatic and strong in its enunciation and saying. A motivating poem, nicely said
December 20th, 2025 03:44
Snowflakes
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely comparison of the snowflake to a tiny dancer. Very well written and imaged
December 19th, 2025 16:02
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely comparison of the snowflake to a tiny dancer. Very well written and imaged
December 19th, 2025 16:02
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