Comments received on poems by Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard
The Taste of Home and Beyond
sorenbarrett said:
This poem struck deep in that I lived in Ellensburg Wa. and in Montana as well as California and the mention of them all together in a poem brought back many memories. Nicely done and I love honey as well.
October 14th, 2026 19:46
sorenbarrett said:
This poem struck deep in that I lived in Ellensburg Wa. and in Montana as well as California and the mention of them all together in a poem brought back many memories. Nicely done and I love honey as well.
October 14th, 2026 19:46
Venom In her Lipstick
sorenbarrett said:
A complex poem for a complex problem as you say not all of either gender are toxic but those that are were created out of abuse or too easily convinced by the soured ones. Hate begets hate indeed but so does love beget love and I don\'t advocate change in either gender but rather understanding and tolerance for the differences. A wonderful write.
October 5th, 2026 13:26
sorenbarrett said:
A complex poem for a complex problem as you say not all of either gender are toxic but those that are were created out of abuse or too easily convinced by the soured ones. Hate begets hate indeed but so does love beget love and I don\'t advocate change in either gender but rather understanding and tolerance for the differences. A wonderful write.
October 5th, 2026 13:26
The Honey Cartographer
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is creative and informative about a substance so common yet different. Nicely done
September 29th, 2026 10:30
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is creative and informative about a substance so common yet different. Nicely done
September 29th, 2026 10:30
More Than I Did Then
sorenbarrett said:
A building seductive and sensual love poem that is metaphoric with its imagery becoming biblical with the fruit and sin. Very nicely crafted in rhyme and meter and is a fave
September 27th, 2026 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
A building seductive and sensual love poem that is metaphoric with its imagery becoming biblical with the fruit and sin. Very nicely crafted in rhyme and meter and is a fave
September 27th, 2026 04:09
Ledger of the Trichome
sorenbarrett said:
Although I don\'t pretend to know the chemistry involved here it is admirable that it has been put to rhyme and poetic verse. That alone gets the fave
September 26th, 2026 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
Although I don\'t pretend to know the chemistry involved here it is admirable that it has been put to rhyme and poetic verse. That alone gets the fave
September 26th, 2026 04:02
THE CAMERA LOVES A LIAR
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of dystopia where one is observed, monitored, listened into at all times. Dangerous in a political state where capitalism is the driving force. Power and greed the main motivators make such collection of information a weapon. Nicely written in poetic form with rhyme and meter it speaks out against invasion of privacy, if there is such a thing anymore. Well done my friend.
September 22nd, 2026 09:50
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of dystopia where one is observed, monitored, listened into at all times. Dangerous in a political state where capitalism is the driving force. Power and greed the main motivators make such collection of information a weapon. Nicely written in poetic form with rhyme and meter it speaks out against invasion of privacy, if there is such a thing anymore. Well done my friend.
September 22nd, 2026 09:50
The Geometry of Becoming Elsewhere
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the write on hypocrisy of humanity. Nicely composed in rhyme and the use of meter. Well done
September 21st, 2026 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the write on hypocrisy of humanity. Nicely composed in rhyme and the use of meter. Well done
September 21st, 2026 04:16
First Time, Every Time
Jamiano said:
-A glance becomes a sacred art-
Beautifully versed. This reflects the idea of love at first sight. Thank you.
September 14th, 2026 11:42
Jamiano said:
-A glance becomes a sacred art-
Beautifully versed. This reflects the idea of love at first sight. Thank you.
September 14th, 2026 11:42
First Time, Every Time
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully written with wonderful lines and rhyme as well as good meter. Nicely done.
September 14th, 2026 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully written with wonderful lines and rhyme as well as good meter. Nicely done.
September 14th, 2026 04:12
The Polymath’s Path: A Symphony of Many Minds
sorenbarrett said:
An invitation to open one\'s mind and learn about all things. Nicely done
September 10th, 2026 12:22
sorenbarrett said:
An invitation to open one\'s mind and learn about all things. Nicely done
September 10th, 2026 12:22
FOR SALE: ONE USED EXOTIC HEART
GoddessEYES said:
Lol 😂 you classic thoee love it good read
June 21st, 2026 22:20
GoddessEYES said:
Lol 😂 you classic thoee love it good read
June 21st, 2026 22:20
FOR SALE: ONE USED EXOTIC HEART
sorenbarrett said:
Love the portrayal of a person as a car. Not just any car but one of style and sport. A high priced one with lots of miles. Well done
June 21st, 2026 12:42
sorenbarrett said:
Love the portrayal of a person as a car. Not just any car but one of style and sport. A high priced one with lots of miles. Well done
June 21st, 2026 12:42
The Odyssey of Humanity\'s Hubris: A Canticle of Ruin
sorenbarrett said:
An epic myth that poetically expressed tells the history of man. Nicely done
May 14th, 2026 21:11
sorenbarrett said:
An epic myth that poetically expressed tells the history of man. Nicely done
May 14th, 2026 21:11
The Cycle of the Wanting Heart
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful rhyme and good meter sets this poem apart as a work of art. Well done
May 11th, 2026 22:14
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful rhyme and good meter sets this poem apart as a work of art. Well done
May 11th, 2026 22:14
THE STOIC SHADOW SCRIPTURE
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of spiritual reflection in this poem of assent nicely done in good rhyme
May 8th, 2026 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of spiritual reflection in this poem of assent nicely done in good rhyme
May 8th, 2026 04:20
THE FRACTURED SPEAK
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem focuses on the complexities of mental health, societal perceptions of trauma, and the importance of understanding the underlying causes of emotional distress rather than simply observing the consequences.
April 21st, 2026 14:44
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem focuses on the complexities of mental health, societal perceptions of trauma, and the importance of understanding the underlying causes of emotional distress rather than simply observing the consequences.
April 21st, 2026 14:44
THE FRACTURED SPEAK
sorenbarrett said:
No one feels totally understood and this poem makes a point of it. There is a plea for greater understanding not just of acts but intentions. Well written
April 21st, 2026 14:38
sorenbarrett said:
No one feels totally understood and this poem makes a point of it. There is a plea for greater understanding not just of acts but intentions. Well written
April 21st, 2026 14:38
THE SIXTH DIMENSION OF BLAME
sorenbarrett said:
Some great lines here \"a mirror burns\" This poem attacks the common view of blame and responsibility as individual. It is all of our responsibility as a society so nicely expressed as a web. I love the philosophy of this write and for that alone it gets a fave and if I could give more I would for the lines and language so clearly expressed in poetic form. Very nicely done
April 17th, 2026 09:41
sorenbarrett said:
Some great lines here \"a mirror burns\" This poem attacks the common view of blame and responsibility as individual. It is all of our responsibility as a society so nicely expressed as a web. I love the philosophy of this write and for that alone it gets a fave and if I could give more I would for the lines and language so clearly expressed in poetic form. Very nicely done
April 17th, 2026 09:41
THE SIXTH DIMENSION OF BLAME
Friendship said:
Nice write, your poem revolves around the psychological and sociological elements influencing human behavior.
April 17th, 2026 09:06
Friendship said:
Nice write, your poem revolves around the psychological and sociological elements influencing human behavior.
April 17th, 2026 09:06
Ode to the Idle Hope
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely wording in this poem. It speaks to the doing not the feeling, thinking or hope. Well done
April 14th, 2026 19:32
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely wording in this poem. It speaks to the doing not the feeling, thinking or hope. Well done
April 14th, 2026 19:32
THE TOOL AND THE HAND
sorenbarrett said:
So well said. If we devoted the money, time and effort to dealing with the problems associated with violence we would not need to worry so much
April 13th, 2026 14:32
sorenbarrett said:
So well said. If we devoted the money, time and effort to dealing with the problems associated with violence we would not need to worry so much
April 13th, 2026 14:32
Ante Up
sorenbarrett said:
Such a poetic description of hope I think I have never heard better and it is a fave
April 10th, 2026 15:35
sorenbarrett said:
Such a poetic description of hope I think I have never heard better and it is a fave
April 10th, 2026 15:35
Ode to the Gambler’s Hope
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful analogy or metaphor this is a poem of advice given to those that will listen. Nicely done
April 9th, 2026 14:50
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful analogy or metaphor this is a poem of advice given to those that will listen. Nicely done
April 9th, 2026 14:50
The Unseen Map
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poetic expression of wisdom nicely rhymed and with great meter. Loved it a fave
March 18th, 2026 11:03
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poetic expression of wisdom nicely rhymed and with great meter. Loved it a fave
March 18th, 2026 11:03
Crown Roast
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this one it speaks with hunger and I hear the sharpening of the knife. A fave
March 5th, 2026 11:35
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this one it speaks with hunger and I hear the sharpening of the knife. A fave
March 5th, 2026 11:35
Ego Death, Softly
sorenbarrett said:
The message is clear that one\'s true self far different than what we present. In Freudian terms the ego or reality part that holds us together and takes control if dissolved leaves that mirthful residue. It seems almost Taoist or Buddhist. Nicely composed
February 24th, 2026 05:38
sorenbarrett said:
The message is clear that one\'s true self far different than what we present. In Freudian terms the ego or reality part that holds us together and takes control if dissolved leaves that mirthful residue. It seems almost Taoist or Buddhist. Nicely composed
February 24th, 2026 05:38
Please Read Me
sorenbarrett said:
Optics in geometry fills this poem. Clever imaging builds its form. Nicely done
February 19th, 2026 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
Optics in geometry fills this poem. Clever imaging builds its form. Nicely done
February 19th, 2026 03:49
The Art of Your Exit
sorenbarrett said:
A passion struck, a siren call nicely written it speaks of magnetic pull and drawn over a cliff but cutting the rope just in time. Well done
February 13th, 2026 12:20
sorenbarrett said:
A passion struck, a siren call nicely written it speaks of magnetic pull and drawn over a cliff but cutting the rope just in time. Well done
February 13th, 2026 12:20
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