Comments received on poems by Just Kate
If I didn\'t try once more...
Demar Desu said:
Haikus are my favorite!! Deff worth learning, my advice is start with three lines and then put the net up (5-7-5) as far as your poem though. Also I love this poem about writing poetry, it\'s something I struggle with as well because I myself can hardly take criticism as much as I dish it out hahaha. Still Hope to see you post more often and sooner
February 13th, 2026 08:16
Demar Desu said:
Haikus are my favorite!! Deff worth learning, my advice is start with three lines and then put the net up (5-7-5) as far as your poem though. Also I love this poem about writing poetry, it\'s something I struggle with as well because I myself can hardly take criticism as much as I dish it out hahaha. Still Hope to see you post more often and sooner
February 13th, 2026 08:16
If I didn\'t try once more...
Paul Bell said:
Don\'t give up the pen just yet.
Remember, Rome wasn\'t built in a day.
Though the planning office did say Brutus was to blame.
Sneaking up on the official, knife he did relay.
This put the build back a week.
Cos the guy to sign it off, Julius they couldn\'t bloody seek.
February 13th, 2026 06:55
Paul Bell said:
Don\'t give up the pen just yet.
Remember, Rome wasn\'t built in a day.
Though the planning office did say Brutus was to blame.
Sneaking up on the official, knife he did relay.
This put the build back a week.
Cos the guy to sign it off, Julius they couldn\'t bloody seek.
February 13th, 2026 06:55
If I didn\'t try once more...
sorenbarrett said:
This was a fun read of the venture of timidity that we all have with first postings and new settings. It does it with a clear and well steadied rhyme that serves as a good foundation for a good flow. Nicely done
February 13th, 2026 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
This was a fun read of the venture of timidity that we all have with first postings and new settings. It does it with a clear and well steadied rhyme that serves as a good foundation for a good flow. Nicely done
February 13th, 2026 04:25
If I didn\'t try once more...
Doggerel Dave said:
A vote from me - I like and practice rhyming verse. Just get in there and tell the world what you think.👍👍👌
February 13th, 2026 04:05
Doggerel Dave said:
A vote from me - I like and practice rhyming verse. Just get in there and tell the world what you think.👍👍👌
February 13th, 2026 04:05
