Comments received on poems by That’sSoRaven
Split in Two
sorenbarrett said:
We all have many parts and these can be grouped into two. That split that we sometimes call the good and bad Jung called the anima and animus. Nicely written
May 28th, 2026 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
We all have many parts and these can be grouped into two. That split that we sometimes call the good and bad Jung called the anima and animus. Nicely written
May 28th, 2026 04:07
Half Lit Hallways
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Raven, this really moved me. The ache of trying to stay gentle while feeling someone slowly pull away comes through so clearly here. It’s vulnerable without losing its dignity, and that quiet heartbreak at the end lands hard. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 10:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Raven, this really moved me. The ache of trying to stay gentle while feeling someone slowly pull away comes through so clearly here. It’s vulnerable without losing its dignity, and that quiet heartbreak at the end lands hard. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 10:06
Half Lit Hallways
sorenbarrett said:
There are many roles in being a friend some more painful than others. A lovely write
May 26th, 2026 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
There are many roles in being a friend some more painful than others. A lovely write
May 26th, 2026 05:23
Unsent
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Raven, wow…there’s such a quiet heartbreak in this piece, my friend. What makes it powerful is how restrained it remains the entire time. No anger…no dramatic collapse…just the slow ache of realizing you may matter most when others disappear. And that final longing to feel chosen in return lands beautifully and painfully at once. Wonderful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 25th, 2026 15:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Raven, wow…there’s such a quiet heartbreak in this piece, my friend. What makes it powerful is how restrained it remains the entire time. No anger…no dramatic collapse…just the slow ache of realizing you may matter most when others disappear. And that final longing to feel chosen in return lands beautifully and painfully at once. Wonderful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 25th, 2026 15:32
Unsent
sorenbarrett said:
Relationships are often one way. This seems stated in this write. Well said
May 25th, 2026 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
Relationships are often one way. This seems stated in this write. Well said
May 25th, 2026 04:30
Morning After
sorenbarrett said:
In its softness this poem speaks to the heart. Well done
April 8th, 2026 16:41
sorenbarrett said:
In its softness this poem speaks to the heart. Well done
April 8th, 2026 16:41
Never the poem
sorenbarrett said:
There is deep emotion in this one where one is appreciated for one\'s works but not for who they are. Well written
April 5th, 2026 03:43
sorenbarrett said:
There is deep emotion in this one where one is appreciated for one\'s works but not for who they are. Well written
April 5th, 2026 03:43
At the edge of Us
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of hesitancy, of lingering on the edge here. It is in that indecision that the future is determined. Nicely written
March 2nd, 2026 11:26
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of hesitancy, of lingering on the edge here. It is in that indecision that the future is determined. Nicely written
March 2nd, 2026 11:26
Sunsets and Sins
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems seductive and alluring. It draws the reader toward it being sensual. Nicely written
February 9th, 2026 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems seductive and alluring. It draws the reader toward it being sensual. Nicely written
February 9th, 2026 03:50
What He Promised Me..
sorenbarrett said:
Betrayal by the one you trust the most is the deepest cut. It bleeds. A sad poem that still carries the pain. Nicely written
November 4th, 2025 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
Betrayal by the one you trust the most is the deepest cut. It bleeds. A sad poem that still carries the pain. Nicely written
November 4th, 2025 04:23
