Comments received on poems by ThatsSoRavenn
Last Place
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Raven, this hit me hard…the exhaustion of asking and not being met is so quietly devastating. That fear of going unnoticed if you stopped reaching is what stays with me, and honestly, I’ve lived that same silence myself. Beautifully written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 7th, 2026 22:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Raven, this hit me hard…the exhaustion of asking and not being met is so quietly devastating. That fear of going unnoticed if you stopped reaching is what stays with me, and honestly, I’ve lived that same silence myself. Beautifully written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 7th, 2026 22:18
Last Place
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sound of alienation in this write. Well done
July 6th, 2026 19:54
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sound of alienation in this write. Well done
July 6th, 2026 19:54
Pitcher Full of Love
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Raven, what a heartfelt poem. I love that it isn\'t just about love...it\'s about being a steady presence for someone who has forgotten what that feels like. There\'s a tenderness running through every stanza that never feels forced. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 6th, 2026 14:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Raven, what a heartfelt poem. I love that it isn\'t just about love...it\'s about being a steady presence for someone who has forgotten what that feels like. There\'s a tenderness running through every stanza that never feels forced. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 6th, 2026 14:49
Pitcher Full of Love
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem but the font is so small it taxed my old eyes. Well done
July 5th, 2026 16:58
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem but the font is so small it taxed my old eyes. Well done
July 5th, 2026 16:58
Pitcher Full of Love
Syd said:
You sound like a really good person.
Well written 👏
- Syd
July 5th, 2026 16:40
Syd said:
You sound like a really good person.
Well written 👏
- Syd
July 5th, 2026 16:40
I Can’t Swim
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Raven, this hit me hard. The image of someone already underwater instead of waving from shore changes the entire feel of the piece. It carries the weight of quiet desperation without ever needing to raise its voice. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 1st, 2026 23:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Raven, this hit me hard. The image of someone already underwater instead of waving from shore changes the entire feel of the piece. It carries the weight of quiet desperation without ever needing to raise its voice. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 1st, 2026 23:07
The Moon still knows your name
NafisaSB said:
lovely blessings - here\'s wishing you the same..
June 19th, 2026 06:54
NafisaSB said:
lovely blessings - here\'s wishing you the same..
June 19th, 2026 06:54
The Moon still knows your name
ms.divine said:
Omg this relates this was meant to find me 🖖🏿♥️🥰
June 14th, 2026 09:32
ms.divine said:
Omg this relates this was meant to find me 🖖🏿♥️🥰
June 14th, 2026 09:32
The Moon still knows your name
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Raven, what a beautiful piece. It reads like a heartfelt blessing...full of kindness, encouragement, and genuine care. From love and friendship to courage and self-worth, every wish feels rooted in wanting someone to recognize their own value. This one lingers in the best way. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 14th, 2026 07:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Raven, what a beautiful piece. It reads like a heartfelt blessing...full of kindness, encouragement, and genuine care. From love and friendship to courage and self-worth, every wish feels rooted in wanting someone to recognize their own value. This one lingers in the best way. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 14th, 2026 07:51
The Moon still knows your name
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful loving wish in a poem that seems in a way a type of blessing. Well done
June 14th, 2026 04:53
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful loving wish in a poem that seems in a way a type of blessing. Well done
June 14th, 2026 04:53
Split in Two
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Raven, this broke my heart a little. “You made me write again” and that closing image of poetry being handed back like a rescued heart both landed hard. Beautiful and deeply vulnerable piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 28th, 2026 20:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Raven, this broke my heart a little. “You made me write again” and that closing image of poetry being handed back like a rescued heart both landed hard. Beautiful and deeply vulnerable piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 28th, 2026 20:39
Split in Two
sorenbarrett said:
We all have many parts and these can be grouped into two. That split that we sometimes call the good and bad Jung called the anima and animus. Nicely written
May 28th, 2026 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
We all have many parts and these can be grouped into two. That split that we sometimes call the good and bad Jung called the anima and animus. Nicely written
May 28th, 2026 04:07
Half Lit Hallways
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Raven, this really moved me. The ache of trying to stay gentle while feeling someone slowly pull away comes through so clearly here. It’s vulnerable without losing its dignity, and that quiet heartbreak at the end lands hard. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 10:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Raven, this really moved me. The ache of trying to stay gentle while feeling someone slowly pull away comes through so clearly here. It’s vulnerable without losing its dignity, and that quiet heartbreak at the end lands hard. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 10:06
Half Lit Hallways
sorenbarrett said:
There are many roles in being a friend some more painful than others. A lovely write
May 26th, 2026 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
There are many roles in being a friend some more painful than others. A lovely write
May 26th, 2026 05:23
Unsent
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Raven, wow…there’s such a quiet heartbreak in this piece, my friend. What makes it powerful is how restrained it remains the entire time. No anger…no dramatic collapse…just the slow ache of realizing you may matter most when others disappear. And that final longing to feel chosen in return lands beautifully and painfully at once. Wonderful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 25th, 2026 15:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Raven, wow…there’s such a quiet heartbreak in this piece, my friend. What makes it powerful is how restrained it remains the entire time. No anger…no dramatic collapse…just the slow ache of realizing you may matter most when others disappear. And that final longing to feel chosen in return lands beautifully and painfully at once. Wonderful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 25th, 2026 15:32
Unsent
sorenbarrett said:
Relationships are often one way. This seems stated in this write. Well said
May 25th, 2026 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
Relationships are often one way. This seems stated in this write. Well said
May 25th, 2026 04:30
Morning After
sorenbarrett said:
In its softness this poem speaks to the heart. Well done
April 8th, 2026 16:41
sorenbarrett said:
In its softness this poem speaks to the heart. Well done
April 8th, 2026 16:41
Never the poem
sorenbarrett said:
There is deep emotion in this one where one is appreciated for one\'s works but not for who they are. Well written
April 5th, 2026 03:43
sorenbarrett said:
There is deep emotion in this one where one is appreciated for one\'s works but not for who they are. Well written
April 5th, 2026 03:43
At the edge of Us
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of hesitancy, of lingering on the edge here. It is in that indecision that the future is determined. Nicely written
March 2nd, 2026 11:26
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of hesitancy, of lingering on the edge here. It is in that indecision that the future is determined. Nicely written
March 2nd, 2026 11:26
Sunsets and Sins
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems seductive and alluring. It draws the reader toward it being sensual. Nicely written
February 9th, 2026 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems seductive and alluring. It draws the reader toward it being sensual. Nicely written
February 9th, 2026 03:50
What He Promised Me..
sorenbarrett said:
Betrayal by the one you trust the most is the deepest cut. It bleeds. A sad poem that still carries the pain. Nicely written
November 4th, 2025 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
Betrayal by the one you trust the most is the deepest cut. It bleeds. A sad poem that still carries the pain. Nicely written
November 4th, 2025 04:23
