Comments received on poems by Hadley
Bad Guy
sorenbarrett said:
When the desire of one is not that of the other it is sad and unrequited. A sad poem of love lost.
November 23rd, 2025 18:58
sorenbarrett said:
When the desire of one is not that of the other it is sad and unrequited. A sad poem of love lost.
November 23rd, 2025 18:58
My fault, all of it
sorenbarrett said:
The reiteration of my fault reinforces the feeling in this poem. It is an assumption of purpose and cause. Well done
November 16th, 2025 20:14
sorenbarrett said:
The reiteration of my fault reinforces the feeling in this poem. It is an assumption of purpose and cause. Well done
November 16th, 2025 20:14
Out of Time
Bragee said:
Whew…..strong writing of a sad story. The dependency that cause you to hold someone hostage. So unfair
November 15th, 2025 14:44
Bragee said:
Whew…..strong writing of a sad story. The dependency that cause you to hold someone hostage. So unfair
November 15th, 2025 14:44
Out of Time
sorenbarrett said:
Welcome to MPS A striking poem of dependency not love as it is depicted and dependency leads to resentment. We are responsible for what we tame but that does not mean buying into a love game. A poignant write where boundaries need to be set and feelings defined. Time is an enemy in dependency where the longer makes it the stronger. Your last lines are probably true time is running out. So well done
November 15th, 2025 14:28
sorenbarrett said:
Welcome to MPS A striking poem of dependency not love as it is depicted and dependency leads to resentment. We are responsible for what we tame but that does not mean buying into a love game. A poignant write where boundaries need to be set and feelings defined. Time is an enemy in dependency where the longer makes it the stronger. Your last lines are probably true time is running out. So well done
November 15th, 2025 14:28
