Comments received on poems by Freedom4



LOST
sorenbarrett said:

The introjection of her being me in the past raises questions of who is who and what is empathy and self pity. A thoughtful poem that speaks to the issue of abuse and being hurt. Nicely done

November 25th, 2025 11:25

What Once Was
sorenbarrett said:

A desperate plea and expression of love comes from this poem that calls out to the reader. Well expressed

November 23rd, 2025 04:29

Castle In The Sand
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of disappointment and abandonment to the forces of nature. A lovely write

November 20th, 2025 11:53

A BATTLE FOR FREEDOM
DLewis88 said:

This is well written.

November 19th, 2025 20:19

A BATTLE FOR FREEDOM
sorenbarrett said:

Internal battles in reflection revealed in this poem so nicely written

November 19th, 2025 19:46