Comments received on poems by okefic
Little brown girl
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME OKEFIC - Love your first poem - love the lil brown skin gal ! This poem explores how we all feel when people have prejudices against us. It might be 'cos of color - caste or creed. Your poem shows us that we can all "dream big". Love the pace and flow of the poem and the last line. YES if we are to overcome prejudice and bigotry the "Little Brown Girl" has to always in us - AMEN - BRIAN
April 29th, 2016 09:52
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME OKEFIC - Love your first poem - love the lil brown skin gal ! This poem explores how we all feel when people have prejudices against us. It might be 'cos of color - caste or creed. Your poem shows us that we can all "dream big". Love the pace and flow of the poem and the last line. YES if we are to overcome prejudice and bigotry the "Little Brown Girl" has to always in us - AMEN - BRIAN
April 29th, 2016 09:52