Comments received on poems by Kiri Noa



Poison Pillow
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful work of love separated and a heart devasted to the point of death. Lovely

February 11th, 2026 13:09

Absence
Paul Bell said:

When you go that far down, there\'s only up.

January 30th, 2026 15:40

Absence
sorenbarrett said:

This sounds like a mental hell and pit for the conscience well done

January 30th, 2026 15:16

One Vermillion Tulip
sorenbarrett said:

Beautiful in images that evoke a cold and wintery feel. Nicely done

January 13th, 2026 13:04

A Mother
sorenbarrett said:



January 10th, 2026 09:49

A Mother
sorenbarrett said:

An old hen? Cute and set for a child. Nicely done

January 10th, 2026 09:49

Rainbow rain
sorenbarrett said:

This is quite an image to absorb. It is very elaborate and well worded evoking visions in multicolor. Well done

January 7th, 2026 14:02

Eternal longing of a firefly
Kiri Noa said:

Thank you so much

January 7th, 2026 13:01

Eternal longing of a firefly
sorenbarrett said:

There is a sense of longing with this poem that goes beyond sunset. Nicely done

January 5th, 2026 13:30

Awaiting my beloved
sorenbarrett said:

A poem that begins with pain traverses lack of recognition and ends in hope. A long journey that ends on a beautiful thought. Very nicely done. The first two lines are striking with the rhyme

January 4th, 2026 13:45

Teal bubble
Friendship said:

Nicely worded

January 1st, 2026 17:50

Teal bubble
sorenbarrett said:

A purification by fire comes through in this poem. Lovely and nicely done

January 1st, 2026 13:25

Withered Blossom
sorenbarrett said:

I love how this poem was written each line a thought and then the following a consequence. it speaks to me of opportunity lost and the sad consequences. A fruit allowed to over ripen now lost. A fave

December 21st, 2025 14:19