Comments received on poems by nev
House With Thin Walls
sorenbarrett said:
So hard to know who one is and to accept what that is. A lovely write nicely done
December 23rd, 2025 08:56
sorenbarrett said:
So hard to know who one is and to accept what that is. A lovely write nicely done
December 23rd, 2025 08:56
House With Thin Walls
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem revolves around the struggles of self-identity, the pressure of external expectations, and the emotional toll of conditional love. The poet grapples with feelings of inadequacy and the desire for validation as they navigate the complexities of relationships, particularly with someone important in their life. The poet focuses on the internal dialogue of a person who feels they must constantly perform, adjust, and rehearse their interactions to avoid disappointment and earn love.
December 23rd, 2025 08:15
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem revolves around the struggles of self-identity, the pressure of external expectations, and the emotional toll of conditional love. The poet grapples with feelings of inadequacy and the desire for validation as they navigate the complexities of relationships, particularly with someone important in their life. The poet focuses on the internal dialogue of a person who feels they must constantly perform, adjust, and rehearse their interactions to avoid disappointment and earn love.
December 23rd, 2025 08:15
What We Keep
lunarchloedip said:
can really relate to this. always thought the adults knew what they were doing, until i became an adult and felt like i was playing dress up in my mother\'s shoes. and definitely had a few people stolen away without warning.
but you\'re completely right, it humbles you and allows you to grow, and strength is found in unexpected places.
thank you so much for sharing, really spoke to me here!
December 22nd, 2025 13:38
lunarchloedip said:
can really relate to this. always thought the adults knew what they were doing, until i became an adult and felt like i was playing dress up in my mother\'s shoes. and definitely had a few people stolen away without warning.
but you\'re completely right, it humbles you and allows you to grow, and strength is found in unexpected places.
thank you so much for sharing, really spoke to me here!
December 22nd, 2025 13:38
What We Keep
sorenbarrett said:
Change whether by growing up or by widened cracks can be painful but is necessary. Well written
December 22nd, 2025 12:59
sorenbarrett said:
Change whether by growing up or by widened cracks can be painful but is necessary. Well written
December 22nd, 2025 12:59
