Comments received on poems by Jay palmer 85
The haze
sorenbarrett said:
Raw yet refined in rhyme it spills its story onto the page and tells of the cycle from conscious storm to the fog of a hazy day medicated into a cloud of numbing slumber. Well written it is a fave
January 4th, 2026 05:34
sorenbarrett said:
Raw yet refined in rhyme it spills its story onto the page and tells of the cycle from conscious storm to the fog of a hazy day medicated into a cloud of numbing slumber. Well written it is a fave
January 4th, 2026 05:34
Time
Friendship said:
Your poem carries a significant emotional weight, reflecting the loss of someone they care about and expressing a yearning to reconnect and restore the relationship.
January 3rd, 2026 09:23
Friendship said:
Your poem carries a significant emotional weight, reflecting the loss of someone they care about and expressing a yearning to reconnect and restore the relationship.
January 3rd, 2026 09:23
Time
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic search for one lost and plea for reunification. There is a desperation and sadness in this write. Nicely expressed
January 3rd, 2026 03:47
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic search for one lost and plea for reunification. There is a desperation and sadness in this write. Nicely expressed
January 3rd, 2026 03:47
Mistakes
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic plea for forgiveness and call for reunification nicely put in words. Well done
January 3rd, 2026 03:44
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic plea for forgiveness and call for reunification nicely put in words. Well done
January 3rd, 2026 03:44
