Comments received on poems by xTattooingPaperx



My Busy Bees, Stay Little Please
sorenbarrett said:

A lovely poem and metaphor for one\'s children. A wonderful read

January 8th, 2026 04:39

My Busy Bees, Stay Little Please
Paul Bell said:

I always found that when kids get to around five, you lose them to their pals.
They sure do grow up fast, probably not helped by computers and everything that surrounds them.
Even the bedtime story has been kicked into touch.
Just wait till they\'re demanding mobile phones and cash. lol

January 8th, 2026 04:38

The Best Parts of Me
Friendship said:

Well written, Welcome,

January 6th, 2026 06:32

The Best Parts of Me
Paul Bell said:

Great introduction, love the one horse town tag.
Sorry life was tough growing up, got a feeling it shaped your life to what it is today.
Strangely enough, I always wake at 4 am and check my surroundings. Must be a survival thing.
Welcome to, MPS.

January 6th, 2026 05:20

The Best Parts of Me
sorenbarrett said:

Welcome to MPS a good introductory poem with good rhyme and quite a narrative. Well done.

January 5th, 2026 15:11