Comments received on poems by Melissa Dennis
Death From Improvement
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes as humans we beat ourselves up a little too much.
Every morning, tell yourself It\'s going to be a great day, get out and walk or run and the new you will appear.
February 11th, 2026 05:31
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes as humans we beat ourselves up a little too much.
Every morning, tell yourself It\'s going to be a great day, get out and walk or run and the new you will appear.
February 11th, 2026 05:31
Death From Improvement
sorenbarrett said:
Clever in both concept and wording this poem conveys the use of what one has under their control to make themselves better and when all else fails uses light be that knowledge, truth, or just symbolically the shining part of a God or higher power to overcome any doubt. Very nicely done
February 11th, 2026 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
Clever in both concept and wording this poem conveys the use of what one has under their control to make themselves better and when all else fails uses light be that knowledge, truth, or just symbolically the shining part of a God or higher power to overcome any doubt. Very nicely done
February 11th, 2026 04:04
Death From Improvement
Demar Desu said:
Great poem... I understand it. Our roots reach farther than we can see...
February 10th, 2026 21:39
Demar Desu said:
Great poem... I understand it. Our roots reach farther than we can see...
February 10th, 2026 21:39
First Day Hike
sorenbarrett said:
I like the image of shaking hand with the sun. A good write
January 24th, 2026 17:17
sorenbarrett said:
I like the image of shaking hand with the sun. A good write
January 24th, 2026 17:17
Night Terrors
sorenbarrett said:
Night terrors are terrible indeed. Never having had one I have only observed other that have. A night time panic attack where images of being crushed alive or cut in half lead to heart rates over 200 beats a minute, perspiration and difficulty breathing. A terrible experience. Well written
January 12th, 2026 10:01
sorenbarrett said:
Night terrors are terrible indeed. Never having had one I have only observed other that have. A night time panic attack where images of being crushed alive or cut in half lead to heart rates over 200 beats a minute, perspiration and difficulty breathing. A terrible experience. Well written
January 12th, 2026 10:01
