Comments received on poems by valerie505
Leave Before My Lights Wear Out
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic expulsion and distancing that pretends toxicity for avoidance and gives the impression of poor self esteem and a sense of unworthiness as underlying causes. Very well written with rhyme and near rhyme as an icing. Well done
June 6th, 2026 06:03
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic expulsion and distancing that pretends toxicity for avoidance and gives the impression of poor self esteem and a sense of unworthiness as underlying causes. Very well written with rhyme and near rhyme as an icing. Well done
June 6th, 2026 06:03
Dirt, Swallow Me
sorenbarrett said:
A poem fraught with fear and darkness where being abandoned and unloved is the worst of all outcomes. Well written
March 27th, 2026 12:53
sorenbarrett said:
A poem fraught with fear and darkness where being abandoned and unloved is the worst of all outcomes. Well written
March 27th, 2026 12:53
Linger
sorenbarrett said:
It is always a good sign when we want time to linger. It is a measure of how much fun we are having. A lovely write
February 26th, 2026 13:09
sorenbarrett said:
It is always a good sign when we want time to linger. It is a measure of how much fun we are having. A lovely write
February 26th, 2026 13:09
Tragedy Has Struck My Mysticism
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write
January 15th, 2026 05:53
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write
January 15th, 2026 05:53
Tragedy Has Struck My Mysticism
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully worded this poem begins with metaphor in the storm and the water that seeps through the window as if tears through seeing eyes. Its inclusion of mythical classics lends a feel of the classics along with their metaphorical meaning. Very nicely done
January 15th, 2026 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully worded this poem begins with metaphor in the storm and the water that seeps through the window as if tears through seeing eyes. Its inclusion of mythical classics lends a feel of the classics along with their metaphorical meaning. Very nicely done
January 15th, 2026 04:31
