Comments received on poems by valerie505



Tragedy Has Struck My Mysticism
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

good write

January 15th, 2026 05:53

Tragedy Has Struck My Mysticism
sorenbarrett said:

Beautifully worded this poem begins with metaphor in the storm and the water that seeps through the window as if tears through seeing eyes. Its inclusion of mythical classics lends a feel of the classics along with their metaphorical meaning. Very nicely done

January 15th, 2026 04:31