Comments received on poems by Derek Onyia
The Great Wall
Demar Desu said:
all great walls share love as well... great poem, not sure if some of the lines were on purpose but I suggest going back and editing. This is a great piece.
February 8th, 2026 09:35
Demar Desu said:
all great walls share love as well... great poem, not sure if some of the lines were on purpose but I suggest going back and editing. This is a great piece.
February 8th, 2026 09:35
The Great Wall
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem serves to explore themes of division, both personal and societal. It invites readers to consider the walls in their own lives and the barriers that separate individuals from one another, prompting contemplation on the nature of conflict and isolation.
February 7th, 2026 08:57
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem serves to explore themes of division, both personal and societal. It invites readers to consider the walls in their own lives and the barriers that separate individuals from one another, prompting contemplation on the nature of conflict and isolation.
February 7th, 2026 08:57
The Great Wall
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed the meaning hidden in the last lines. Walls mark boundaries denoting ownership and over that wars are fought. Nicely written
February 7th, 2026 08:28
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed the meaning hidden in the last lines. Walls mark boundaries denoting ownership and over that wars are fought. Nicely written
February 7th, 2026 08:28
Mammie’s free day
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting read to see everything in blue instead of rose says something of the mood. A poem of what we allow others to do.
February 5th, 2026 19:31
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting read to see everything in blue instead of rose says something of the mood. A poem of what we allow others to do.
February 5th, 2026 19:31
Mammie’s free day
soheil khodaparasti said:
Nicely expressing violence made acceptable through procedure, language, and consent.
February 5th, 2026 16:01
soheil khodaparasti said:
Nicely expressing violence made acceptable through procedure, language, and consent.
February 5th, 2026 16:01
It must feel good
sorenbarrett said:
This is a poem of a question to a poet. Nicely written
January 27th, 2026 15:13
sorenbarrett said:
This is a poem of a question to a poet. Nicely written
January 27th, 2026 15:13
