Comments received on poems by RENZYY
“What Blooms in the light I can never survive”
sorenbarrett said:
A lack of belief in oneself is evident in this poem. Well expressed this sense of diminished self. Sad
August 31st, 2026 08:11
sorenbarrett said:
A lack of belief in oneself is evident in this poem. Well expressed this sense of diminished self. Sad
August 31st, 2026 08:11
Bleaching Heart
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of pain related to a bleeding heart. Whether pain for another as someone that cares too much or one who\'s heart bleeds for themself in self pity it has carried a negative connotation. It does have a positive side as in suffering as in seeing someone else\'s pain and feeling for them. Well done
February 9th, 2026 07:57
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of pain related to a bleeding heart. Whether pain for another as someone that cares too much or one who\'s heart bleeds for themself in self pity it has carried a negative connotation. It does have a positive side as in suffering as in seeing someone else\'s pain and feeling for them. Well done
February 9th, 2026 07:57
Truly Unfair
sorenbarrett said:
Such feelings themselves serve as a burden and can be heavy to carry Well written
February 7th, 2026 10:20
sorenbarrett said:
Such feelings themselves serve as a burden and can be heavy to carry Well written
February 7th, 2026 10:20
Truly Unfair
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem revolves around the emotional burden and dissatisfaction in a relationship characterized by a lack of genuine commitment and affection. The poet expresses feelings of being treated as a mere obligation rather than a valued partner
February 7th, 2026 09:48
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem revolves around the emotional burden and dissatisfaction in a relationship characterized by a lack of genuine commitment and affection. The poet expresses feelings of being treated as a mere obligation rather than a valued partner
February 7th, 2026 09:48
