Comments received on poems by 12River34



They paint in silence
Tony Grannell said:

Hello, River,

A surperb passage of poetic literature. Hauntingly beautiful in the \'silence of space\' and the fading of a dream. A work of art, truly.

Fond regards,

Tony.

October 6th, 2026 09:57

They paint in silence
sorenbarrett said:

This is a magnificent poem nicely conceived and put into images that evoke feelings of an existential nature. It feels directionless and without purpose a life cold and stark without meaning just putting one foot in front of the last plodding on without a goal a treadmill of time. It feels weary and gray. Nicely done it has a powerful feel and is a fave,

October 6th, 2026 03:36

A squirrel eats bread
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful moment in time where sharing with nature brings joy to both sides. Well done

July 13th, 2026 14:29

War
Friendship said:

Well said.

March 7th, 2026 11:13

War
Katie B. said:

Powerful

March 7th, 2026 07:41

War
12River34 said:

The Middle East in 2026

March 7th, 2026 04:17

War
sorenbarrett said:

A poisoned relationship where day does not dawn. Well said

March 7th, 2026 03:38

Blue touches green
sorenbarrett said:

This is a most beautiful and poetic write and a fave

March 6th, 2026 19:06

Blue Touches Green
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful picture painted and a relationship not just with mother and child but nature as well. Nicely done

February 16th, 2026 17:42