Comments received on poems by swedishme123
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sorenbarrett said:
Few write about a decision not to kill oneself and this is a most interesting format as a dialog with oneself. Nicely done
April 29th, 2026 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
Few write about a decision not to kill oneself and this is a most interesting format as a dialog with oneself. Nicely done
April 29th, 2026 05:03
I thought you were smart
sorenbarrett said:
Sisters are often alter egos and that internal conversation gos on and on. Fun read
April 28th, 2026 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
Sisters are often alter egos and that internal conversation gos on and on. Fun read
April 28th, 2026 04:45
I thought you were smart
Paul Bell said:
Never diss the sister, especially if birthdays are coming up or she\'s got hot pals.
April 28th, 2026 04:33
Paul Bell said:
Never diss the sister, especially if birthdays are coming up or she\'s got hot pals.
April 28th, 2026 04:33
nothing for a change
sorenbarrett said:
Amusing rhyme bounces off this poem that entertains the ear
April 21st, 2026 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
Amusing rhyme bounces off this poem that entertains the ear
April 21st, 2026 04:35
filled in
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done bringing memories of a past that no longer exists where I am. No ice-cream trucks anymore not for years now. A fun remembrance
April 19th, 2026 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done bringing memories of a past that no longer exists where I am. No ice-cream trucks anymore not for years now. A fun remembrance
April 19th, 2026 04:25
savor the flavor
Doggerel Dave said:
Like your very last comment in parentheses very much.
... and your piece has a reality about it too.
April 19th, 2026 02:00
Doggerel Dave said:
Like your very last comment in parentheses very much.
... and your piece has a reality about it too.
April 19th, 2026 02:00
savor the flavor
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of change and a reluctance toward it. Nicely done in metaphor
April 16th, 2026 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of change and a reluctance toward it. Nicely done in metaphor
April 16th, 2026 03:51
merely here
NinjaGirl said:
Social constructs definitely do have quite the effect on how people are perceived and how we treat them.
April 11th, 2026 20:27
NinjaGirl said:
Social constructs definitely do have quite the effect on how people are perceived and how we treat them.
April 11th, 2026 20:27
merely here
sorenbarrett said:
There is something very enticing with the rhyme and wording with this poem that draws the reader in. Nicely done and a fave
April 11th, 2026 05:38
sorenbarrett said:
There is something very enticing with the rhyme and wording with this poem that draws the reader in. Nicely done and a fave
April 11th, 2026 05:38
